For @25013anna. Next oc will be Darkstar.

Name: Peachstar (formerly Peachpool)

Cute! Peach is one of my favorite names, and it is very underused. -pool is used more often, but it is still cute, and the double "p" makes this name fun to say.

Gender: she-cat

Of course..

Rank: leader

Well obvi, she is PeachSTAR.

Clan: TreeClan

Another TreeClan? This Clan is overused, so ehh.. but hey, it does make sense.

Personality: as a kit, was shy. She didn't seem the warrior type or the brave type. Then she changed. She was still gentle, but became authoritative and brave. She is smart.

I like the personality change, that doesn't happen often. HOWEVER! Where are her flaws? Is Peachstar a Mary-Sue? Is she Dovewing? Firestar? Lionblaze? STARGLEAM?

Appearance: cream with spots of ginger

What is her eye color? Regardless, this is very adorable. It fits her name, and you don't see cream and ginger together often! Very nice!

Backstory: the Clan found her mother wandering the forest before she was born. She desperately needed a home. TreeClan took her in, and Peachkit was born. The legend of the Kit Tree, a tree in camp so easy to climb that kits can climb it, is the bravest cat in the world is the only one who was able to go all the way under the Kit Tree. The rumor was that there was a lake under it. Under it was vast and dark. Once you were in, even the entrance became dark. Marshkit, Peachkit's sister, went in, but ran right back out. Peachkit went in, and made it to a hole. She stumbled down the hole and it led to a lake, with a cat named Nightfang sitting by it. Nightfang showed her that if you jump into the lake, you can visit StarClan. He was guarding the Kit Tree, the gateway to StarClan, because some cats would use it the wrong way. Peachkit would be his successor. She later became leader, and gave a prophecy to Firewind, her deputy, who was distantly related to Firestar. She died when the Kit Tree fell over, or so the Clan thought, as she ran under it and jumped into the tunnel, which collapsed, screaming "Nightfang! No!" She then succeeded Nightfang as protector of StarClan when the Kit Tree grew again in ShadowClan. There, a kit was born who would be her successor.

This is awesome! The Kit Tree is like nothing I've ever seen before, so I love this. I wouldn't change it at all. Everything is so... well thought out, and well written. I love it ! ! !

Mother: Lightfly

This is adorable.

Father: unknown

*Gasp*

Sister: Marshfur

I like Marsh as a prefix. It sounds more like a tom's name, but oh well.

Mate: Shadowstar/Shadowstripe

Cool.

Kits: Mistkit and Skykit

Overused names, but still cute.

·~*OVERALL*~·
8/10. I'd like some flaws, please. And her eye color. Other than that, she is super duper cool! Nice