For @Lilyfrost_Weirdo. Next oc will be Whisperingstar.

Name: Peace to Foxheart to Peaceheart

Lots of names. Peaceheart is an odd name, I don't really like Peace as a prefix. Foxheart is not only an insult, but it is also a canon name, so I'm taking points off for that :/

Gender: Female

You mean she-cat? Or um.. she-fox?

Appearance: Ginger with black legs and white tipped ears.

Cute. She is a fox, so idk what to expect. Um... ok

Clan: Was in SnowClan, is now in LeapingClan

LeapingClan must be very high jumpers, lol..

Rank: Warrior

Okay.

Personality: Kind, understanding, impatient, hesitant at times.

She has flaws, that's good. I like this, it's very nice. That's all.

Backstory: Foxheart... Is a fox. This is new, obviously. Her mother learned how to speak cat, so Peace, the name her mother gave her, learned too. Her mother was killed by cats, so Peace lived at the Gathering place. Found at Gathering, taken in by SnowClan. LeapingClan stole her while she was an apprentice, and named her Foxheart. The next leader called her Peaceheart. Acts as an ambassador between cats and foxes.

This is cool, but also... really weird. Um, idk what to think of this. It's very original, so I love that, but it doesn't seem very realistic. I'm also pretty confused. Why did SnowClan take her in the first place? Why did LeapingClan steal her..? How did SnowClan react to that???? What

Mate: None...

Okay.

Kits: Adopted two fox kits and three cat kits. Foxes: Orchid and Willow. Cats: Featherheart, Mapleclaw, and Darkshine.

She brought foxes into the Clan and they were cool with that? I like these names, but I'm still confused...

Other: Has stopped multiple fox vs cat wars. By now, Peaceheart acts fully like a cat. Thought she actually WAS a cat when she was young.

That must be why she's called Peaceheart. I think this is very nice, it's a cool story, but I'm just.... confused by this.

·~*OVERALL*~·
I say 5/10. This is a very cool idea with awesome potential. Idk if it was just the form or it's your character, but I'm just... confused by this. Idk why these cats are totally cool with having a fox in their Clan. The backstory is missing information, like I mentioned above. She has a good personality tho, and this could be very cool..