For @OnlyOneChance101. Next oc will be Adderstrike/Adderfur.

Name: Nettlestar (Formerly Nettleleaf)

This is alright. You don't see Nettle very often, so I like that. Though, it does seem like a bad guy name.. "Nettleleaf" sounds a bit odd, because of the "lele" part. Oh well, I've never seen this before, so good job on that.

Gender: Tom

Villains are almost always toms...

Appearance: Fluffy messy-furred Tom with small shadowy green eyes

What color is he...?! The eye color is overused, but the shadowy part is cool. I like how he's fluffy, you don't see fluffy bad guys much...

Clan: ShadowClan

He seems very stereotypical for his Clan..

Personality: Smart, murderous, secretive, war-like

Typical bad guy. He needs something more original...

Backstory: Nettleleaf at the time just became deputy, with a dark secret. His secret was that he was full-on evil, and that he was going to take over the Clans. Some time later, the leader, Darkstar, asked Nettleleaf to go on a hunting patrol with her. Nettleleaf accepted, and he killed Darkstar right when no one could hear them. Darkstar's cries were shaking the moor, scaring all the prey away. After that, Nettlestar showed his evilness, and he still wants to take over the Clans.

This is okay, but I have questions. Why is he evil? Does he eventually take over, or will someone stop him? Where do his mate and kits come into this? Do they know he's evil? ????????

Mate and Kits: Featherfreeze (mate) Mudflight (son) Shadowstalk (daughter)

Shadow isn't really allowed bc she's in ShadowClan, but the other names are cool..

·~*OVERALL*~·
5/10. I'd like to see a villain that is more original, not just another ShadowClan stereotype. You left out what color his fur is, so I can't really judge that... I'd like to see some more interesting aspects of his personality. His backstory is a bit.. eh. Add these things, and he'll be much better.