For @TheCrystalTorch. Next oc will be Barkfall.

Name: Muddyblaze (considered Muddystar in the Dark Forest)

I like this! Muddy- isn't seen often at all. -blaze is more common, but it fits the prefix perfectly. The name doesn't really scream "Dark Forest!!" Which I really like. Names like Tigerclaw, Brokentail, Hawkfrost, and other canon names just make you know that they're bad guys. You don't really get that in the name Muddyblaze, so this is good.

Gender: tom

Alright.

Appearence: Calico with brown splotches that looks like splatters of mud leading up from his paws, with dulled down maroon eyes.

This is really unique, but I have a problem. Calico toms are VERY rare, I believe. It's basically impossible. However, the appearance is very cool. I love the 'splatters of mud.' That's very unique. Maroon isn't seen very often as an eye color!

Clan: DarkForest (used to be StormClan)

StormClan is pretty overused, but I like it.

Rank: Medicine Cat

You don't see many medicine cats that go to the dark forest :O

Personality: weird, mysterious, is normally found on border patrols even though he is a different rank, almost perfect at naming herbs, loves to join in when claws are involved.

I like this! Like his name, it doesn't really scream 'bad guy.' Yea, he's a bit mysterious, which is overused in bad guys. But I think it really shows his personality in this case. This is good.

Backstory: a once sweet kit until a Dark Forest cat got to him. Ever since kit-ship he's been training with the cats of the Dark Forest. He became an apprentice but to his Dark Forest mentor's surprise took on the roles of medicine cat apprentice. During a gathering he got a warrior of TreeClan named Icefire to join him. Icefire became leader of their Dark Forest clan. Many cats followed in their paw steps secretly. Soon Muddypaw became full medicine cat earning the name Muddyblaze. He fell in love with a cat in his clan made Dovespot and she had their kits. They kept their relationship a secret to everyone. But the cats in the Dark Forest were proud of him for showing he didn't need to abide by all the rules. Just some of them. He got an apprentice named Leafpaw. He learned fast and soon became Leafgaze. Muddyblaze continued with clan duties until the special night came. The Dark Forest trained cats attacked the gathering one night from inside it. The others unprepared. The Dark Forest cats were aiming to rule the forest. To rid of all the leaders. While trying to take his own leader's last life his best friend who trained with him in the Dark Forest had taken Muddyblaze's life. Muddyblaze went to the Dark Forest. Many cats died then. But more went to the Dark Forest than StarClan. The cats in the Dark Forest now refer to him as Muddystar. He earned it. And he knew it.

This is awesome!!! I like that the bad guys kinda won in the end. I love how you worded his backstory, it isn't missing any details and I'm not left with any questions. This. Is. Great! It doesn't seem too cliche or unrealistic, it's.. just really good.

Mate: Dovespot (silver shecat with white spots on her sides that look as if they were placed like wings with forest green.)

This is a very unique appearance. I like it.

I need to add kits in a reply LOL

Oh yay, more work for me

Kits: Acornlove (brown tom with yellow eyes)

That is a weird name. I like Acorn, but -love is a really weird suffix.

Flowerwing (calico shecat with yellow eyes)

The double makes this fun to say.

Blazescar (all black with fire orange streaks leading from his eyes. Maroon eyes)

The orange streaks are unrealistic but really cool.

·~*OVERALL*~·
9/10. Really, the only problem I have is the calico tom. His name, personality, and backstory are all awesome. This is good. Great. I like it.