For @DarrenFire. Next oc will be Fuzzywing.

Name: Marru

This name is kinda cool. When I first saw it, I thought kittypet, because it isn't much of a Tribe name. But I think that's because The Tribe of Dainty Shadows is different from the Tribe of Rushing Water, so that's fine.

I haven't seen this name before, and I think it's cool.

Gender: Female

She-cat, you mean..?

Age: 12 moons

That is quite young *-*

Appearance: Soft, tan tabby with beautiful yellow eyes and a small scar on her left leg. She has a long bushy tail.

Simple, but cute! Tan isn't a color I see for many ocs, so this is cool. The yellow eyes are good, because they are very underused. She sounds very pretty.

Tribe: The Tribe Of Dainty Shadows

Very cool name :O

Personality: Confident, pretty, oversensitive

Is pretty a personality trait...?

Anyway, how is she both confident and oversensitive? I guess it's possible to be both, but it doesn't seem very likely. I'd say add a few more traits, and you'll be fine.

Rank: To-be

Good.

Backstory: Her mother and family died in a fire and left to burn to death, she never thinks about her deadly past.

Tragic O.o but not very original. I've seen ocs whose family died before, and because you didn't go into much detail about her, I have a hard time really judging her. You only explained one event in her life. She's a year old; surely something has happened besides her family's death?

·~*OVERALL*~·
I like her name and appearance, but her backstory and personality could use some work. 6/10. I'd add a bit more to her backstory, but I'm pretty sure that you didn't tell me all of it. I have a hard time judging her if you don't tell me very much about her!

But she's super cute, I love her looks and name!!