For @TheSilverSunset. This rating was done by @TheCrystalTorch instead of me >·< I added a few things tho.

Name: Jewelfire

That's a pretty cool name! Jewel isn't a common prefix, and that's great! Also the suffix fire goes great with the prefix Jewel.

The only problem that I could see is that the warriors don't exactly know what a jewel is. BUT, considering that she's a daylight warrior, I'll let it slide. They haven't been known to have the most... logical names.

Also this was added later:

Leafstar originally named her Jewelstorm, but she requested to be named after Bouncefire, the cat she loved.

I like this! Jewelfire is a much better name than Jewelstorm, in my opinion. I'm pretty sure this is the first oc I've gotten in this book that was added in with the canon Clans and characters, and I love that a lot.

Gender: she-cat

Okay, a lot of ocs are she-cats, but that's not bad.

Age: 34 moons

Young, that's pretty cool. I don't think I asked for her age, but thanks for the extra info!

Appearance: Black tabby with deep yellow-green eyes. White tipped tail, paws, ear, and chest.

Cool! I love black and white cats so there's a soft spot XD

Also, I love the yellow-green eyes. Yellow is a very underused eye color, and adding the greenish color makes it extra unique. Bonus points for that!

Clan: SkyClan

Hm.. that's one of the canon Clans, but also an overused one. It's a cool Clan name though.

Rank: Daylight warrior

Correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't a daylight warrior a SkyClan cat that is a warrior and kittypet? I'm not fond of that idea, it's not good to live with a paw in two worlds.

But daylight warrior ocs are very rarely used, so I love the fact that she is one. It also explains her somewhat odd name.

Personality: Quiet, very shy. Not very confident, always wants to impress her former mentor, Sharpclaw.

Interesting. Personally, I think shy cats are great, it's a beautiful flaw, they usually get over it. She's still trying to impress her former mentor, which is okay, I would probably be too.

Backstory: Formerly a kittypet, but she was bored with kittypet life. She ment Bouncefire and they fell in love, but Jewelfire doesn't want any kits. Bouncefire respects her decision to be a daylight warrior.

That's cool, kinda reminds me of Firestar. Former kittypet... but anyway, she's cool! But kinda cliche in the slightest areas. Falling in love and not wanting kits is a bit overused, but I still like it.

Mate: Bouncefire

Cool name, I love that prefix. I like that you named Jewelfire after him. It's cute! XD

·~*OVERALL*~·

She's a cool cat. But personally I think she sounds like more of a background character. But she's really an amazing cat! I'd give her 8/10, I love her. She sounds a lot like one of my own ocs. You did a great job designing her and her backstory :D