For @_MaskedBeauty_. Next oc will be Juniperpaw.

Name: Jadegaze

Do the warrior cats know what a jade is? I suppose they do know the color, but Jade- still bugs me a little. As for -gaze, it's slightly overused, but it's still cool.

I've never seen this name before, so great job for originality!

Gender: Tom

Really? I'm surprised. Jadegaze doesn't seem much like a tom's name, but neither does Fernsong, and look at that.

Rank: Warrior

Ok

Clan: WindClan

My favorite!

Personality: Humorous, kind, and responsible

No flaws..? I think you're just summarizing the positive aspescts of his personality, but when your character doesn't have any flaws, they seem dull and uninteresting. You know? We don't want another Firestar or Lionblaze or Dovewing.

Appearance: Dark brown tabby tom with white paws and tip of tail and brilliant jade eyes

This is pretty simple. Tabby and white is pretty common, but at least he isn't plain tabby. As for the jade eyes, you don't see those often, so good job. I've said this before, but you aren't supposed to name cats after their eye color. Their eyes are always blue when they open. But maybe his eyes were SO NICE that they decided to change his name... lol.

Backstory: Normal backstory, nothing really special.

Well... ok then..

Family: His mate, Morningcall, his sister, Brightseed, and his kits, Jumpkit, Windkit, and Owlkit

I like these names! -seed is a cute suffix, and morning is one of my favs. I especially like Jumpkit.

·~*OVERALL*~·
Honestly, like, 4/10. He's a background character, which is fine, but I can't judge a character that I don't know much about. Definitely add some flaws. I need to know a backstory or else I can't judge him very well.