For @Warrior_at_Heart again. Next oc will also be for Warrior at Heart.

Name: Goldenfur

Pretty.. generic name. Nothing really unique about it. While I do like it when people give their ocs simple names like Golden- and -fur instead of echo, song, etc... This name just isn't creative. Though, I do like that he's a tom. Golden- is normally a feminine prefix, like Goldenflower.

Gender: Tom

I'm surprised tbh

Appearance: He is a gold tabby tom with black spots and green eyes

Hmm. Gold tabby does make sense, he's GOLDEN FUR. He has golden fur. Makes sense. The black spots are cool, too. Black and gold aren't seen together very much. Green eyes are overused, that's my only problem.

Clan: ThunderClan

Okay.

Age: 36 moons

Ok. I didn't ask for his age. I've said this before, it doesn't really effect anything about your oc. But thanks for including it, anyway.

Rank: Deputy

Oh, okay :D

Personality: Calm, smart, not very good at fighting, just brains, loyal, scared of twolegs

I like this. Just... give him some more flaws. I can see that you're trying to make him out to be a smart, not strong, cat. Which makes sense. But you could add to that, I think. Make him clumsy, awkward, something like that. It would fit him.

Mother: Dead

Father: Dead

Idk why I found this funny. Like for a minute I thought his dad's name was dead. Lmao... wat r dey namez d00d

Backstory: He was determined to become a medicine cat when Goldenkit was little. He found out it was too hard to learn all of it and switched to warrior training. When Goldenpaw was made a warrior, the vigil he sat was terrible. Twolegs came in with long pointy things that spit round things (guns). Those things could kill cats. Both his parents were killed and he was forced back into apprentice training because he couldn't at least warn the clan that the twolegs were coming. He eventually became deputy after lots of hard work. He still believes he was only appointed for his brains and nothing to do with his loyalty or fighting.

I like that he was forced back into apprentice duty. You don't see that very often. I feel like he's sorta a background character, but correct me if I'm wrong. It just seems like he got his small moment of glory during his vigil, then went back to normal. Not trying to be rude... it just seems like not much happens here.

·~*OVERALL*~·
6/10. His name and backstory are kinda plain, green eyes should be avoided, and he needs a few more flaws. Otherwise, he's alright.