Gingerstar
For @Youaregreen.
Name: Gingerstar/Gingertuft
I haven't seen this before. The suffix -tuft is rarely used, so points for originality! Ginger is also a neglected prefix, so I have no bad things to say about this name. It's very nice.
Gender: she-cat
Of course.. Then again, Gingertuft is not much of a tom's name.
Rank: Leader
Clearly..
Clan: ThunderClan
Ooooh, ThunderClan. I'm not a fan of ThunderClan. They have too many non-clan cats :/ but hey, as TheEntireStarClan pointed out, we do know the most about ThunderClan. So it's ok.
And I take back what I said about Silentspirit. Sorry.
Personality: Smart, kind, does whatever's good for the Clan, can be short tempered
Great leadership qualities. I bet she leads her Clan well :3 but at the same time, she's not flawless. She's only.. Feline?
Backstory: Had a mate once, but he was in ShadowClan. She had kits but was forced to slaughter them in front of the ShadowClan leader. She left and went to ThunderClan.
Damn.. Tragic backstory. I would point out the cliche of loving a cat in another Clan, but this makes it work. It uses a cliche but makes it into a unique plot!! Being forced to kill her kits was probably very traumatizing. Points for her :3
Mate/kits names: Mudshadow, Lilykit, Flamekit
They're all dead :( so sad. Mudshadow is a great name; haven't seen it before. Lilykit and Flamekit are cute too.
Appearance: Ginger with white underbelly, legs, paws, chest and undertail. Green eyes.
She sounds more white that ginger lol. But this is a good appearance; natural colors, but original nonetheless.
·~*OVERALL*~·
I'd give it 9.5/10. She's great! I can't really find anything that I would change. Unique appearance, leadership qualities, a cute name.. She has it all! I love her backstory. Tragic, like Bluestar.
Bye bye :3
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