For @AlexaMoore4. Next oc will be Brindleberry.

Name: Frostpaw

Frost- is quite overused. This isn't the most original of names, and because I'm not given a warrior name, I don't have much to work with. But yeah, there are quite a bit of Frostpaws. I have two, a Frostpetal and a Frostfeather :l

Gender: Tom

Appearance: Black tom with light gray paws.

Pretty simple. I'm not given an eye color so I can't judge that, but this is alright. At least he isn't solid black.

Clan: Shadowclan

Oh. That's why he's dark colored I guess. Lol, at least he isn't too stereotypical.

Rank: Warrior apprentice

Nice.

Personality: He is fun and happy despite being in ShadowClan he likes to get in trouble at gatherings by telling a ThunderClan apprentice what the battle plans were.

Wow, he's an idiot. Jk, but really, why is he telling ThunderClan apprentices bad things? I like it tho, it fits him. I also like how you strayed from the ShadowClan stereotypes.

Backstory: He lived a normal kit hood then his father died his mom doesn't see him that much because she left to be a rouge ad now he has a crush on swan paw a pretty WindClan apprentice

That is an uncomfortably long sentence. But I'm here to judge your oc, not your grammar XD this is alright. There are a lot of gaps in the story, like how his father died, why his mother left the Clan, etc. The different Clan crush is a cliche, I hope he won't act out on it. We don't need ANOTHER forbidden relationship.

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4/10. The oc isn't bad, I don't think, this comment just left out a lot of things. I want to know his eye color, a few more flaws, his warrior name, more about his backstory, etc. No offense meant by this, I'm just trying to give you advice.