For @Agent_Luna. Thanks for providing a pic.

Name: Firepaw (warrior name would have been Firesoul)

Idk how I feel about the suffix -soul. Idk, it's just that soul and spirit and things like that kinda bug me in warrior names? But you didn't use it bc he never became a warrior so. Whatever.

Gender: tom

WOOOoooooooOOOO

Clan: StarClan

What clan was he before he died?? I'm curious.

Appearance: Ginger with a black tip on his tail, black stripes and a cream underbelly. Also black tipped ears. [see pic]

Sorry I couldn't download the pic, so I had to screenshot it. First, thanks for providing a pic in the first place! It really helps to see what he looks like. This appearance is great, ginger and black is a quite uncommon coloring for a cat, and yet it's pretty simple, so great job for originality!

Personality: kind and understanding, but if you hurt him or his family, he will become cruel and spiteful. Frequently appears in the dreams of his sister.

This is good. He's a good cat unless you get on his bad side, which is good for a StarClan cat. It's cute that he supports his sister.

Backstory: As a kit, he was always the quiet one, in the corner by himself while his two sisters played. Growing up he became very close to Shadowpaw, one of his sisters, until he ran onto a thunderpath by GrassClan's territory chasing out a rogue. Right at that moment a monster came by and hit him. It didn't kill him instantly but he didn't have much longer. He had deep wounds on his neck and back paws. He said bye to his sisters and joined StarClan. Shadowpaw blamed herself and later turned evil due to the insanity it caused. He feels that it was his fault that she went to the Dark Forest.

That is so sad! Death is always sad, but making his sister turn evil because of it.. D: it's a great backstory, though. Just one question.. Why did Shadowpaw blame herself? Did she think she could have stopped it? Was she there when it happened? Did she have something to do with the rogue?
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He's pretty great! 8.5/10. Maybe just tell me what his Clan was before he died, and what caused Shadowpaw to blame herself for her death, and you've got a perfect oc!