For @superpowerwolf :3 The next oc rating will be Flamefang.

Name: Echoeye

This name is... strange. It doesn't really make sense. While I'm glad you used eye, a very underused suffix, echo- is also probably.. like.. THE most overused prefix. The double e (triple actually) makes it kinda odd to say.

But I've never seen this name before, so great job for originality! It's also pretty cool, in a way.

Gender:Tom

*throws confetti*

Age:18 moons

Very young. That's cool.

Appearance: Gray she-cat with emerald eyes,dark grey stripes.

He isn't a tom anymore? ....... disappointing. I like the appearance though, it's simple. Gray, but not plain gray, it's somewhat unique. I guess. The emerald eyes are a nice touch.

Clan: WindClan

My favorite!!!! Nice

Personality: Depressed,too shy,nice,caring

I'm glad that his personality reflects his backstory, that's good. Realistic. I'm also glad that he isn't flawless, bonus points for you!

Rank: Med. cat apprentice

Nice !! He's young, so it's good that he's still an apprentice.

Back story:he was born,then when he grew up,found a mate,he wasn't able to have kits as 1 moon later he was forced to slaughter her in battle,after that he became shy and wary of other cats,not wanting to ever find love again."

Very short. I'm hardly given any details on his life, apart from that one event. I like how he was forced to kill, most people don't like to put their ocs through that kind of pain. Its also good that he had a realistic reaction to that, emotionally. But! You didn't really give me the reason that he had to kill her. There's also nothing about his apprenticeship: Why did he choose to be a medicine cat, for example?

·~*OVERALL*~·
5/10. Not to say he's very bad, but you didn't provide much information, thus, I don't have much to judge. He needs a much more developed backstory.

Sorry, and thanks for entering! (v·-·)>