Dreamrunner
For @WolfSerenade63. Next oc will be Treestep.
I have sooo many OCs (mainly because I was trying to populate my Clans), but I'll tell you about my main OC.
Bro I relate to this a lot..
Name: Dreamrunner
Hmmm... I don't really like Dream- as a prefix. It makes it seem like she's more special than other cats or something. But -runner is nice, you don't see it very often. I've never seen this name before, so good job on that.
Des: long-haired pale gray she-cat, dark gray overcoat, with darker tabby stripes, one set of white toes, darker gray face and lynx points, dark violet eyes (it's a family trait)
This is very cool! So descriptive. The lynx points are awesome, you don't see that often. The white toes are cute too. I love this.
Family:
I didn't ask for her whole family but thanks :3
Mate: Blueice
Blue- is overused, but ice isn't used as a suffix often so I love that.
Parents: Springflower and Adderstrike
We just had an Adderstrike, didn't we? I hope you used Spring as in "jump," because the warriors don't know what Spring is. They call it Newleaf.
Sisters: Fernshade, Leoparddapple
I like Fernshade. The double d in Leoparddapple kinda annoys me, but it's a cool name.
Daughters: Dayflower, Speckledsnow, Fireflyleap
I like Dayflower and Speckledsnow. You normally don't use compound words like Firefly as prefixes, but I love fireflies, and the name is adorable.
Sons: Forestkit (StarClan), Wolfclaw
Poor Forestkit. Wolfclaw is an overused name, but I like it.
Bio.:
Dreamrunner is a sweet loving cat and loves challenges. She is very determined to succeed at anything that is thrown her way. She can be quiet at times, but when she speaks her mind, she REALLY speaks her mind. She loves teasing Blueice and Briarfox. She is a skilled hunter and has a sharp sense of hearing. Dreamrunner is a stickler for the Warrior Code. It is her goal to protect her friends and kin. Though, she can be very stubborn once she has set her mind. And sometimes she is quick to judge when it comes to giving her feedback. But, she is a very good friend.
Very long, I like it. She has flaws, but she's still a wonderful cat. This is an awesome personality. That's all, I guess.
·~*OVERALL*~·
You didn't fill out the whole form, but what I know about her, I love. 6/10. I'd like to know her Clan, backstory, etc. Please fill out the whole form next time, because I have a hard time judging a cat that I know little about.
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