For @CloverpawWarriorCats. Next oc will be Peachstar.

Let me just say that when I first saw this name, I absolutely loved it. I saw you mention it in your Name That Apprentice or something, and I FREAKING LOVE THIS NAME! I was so excited when I saw that you entered it in this book ;-;

Cloverpath

I've never seen this name before, and I adore it. Clover- is one of my favorite prefixes, and it isn't used very often. -path is used a bit more often, but I love it too. This name.. is... AWESOME.

She-Cat

Ok.

ThunderClan (formerly RiverClan)

The two most overused Clans. Oh well, that's okay.

Fluffy black she-cat with bright leaf green eyes, white front paws and a clover shaped patch on her right shoulder. Her left ear is torn in two places and she has a scar poking out from under one shoulder.

Bright green eyes are overused, but in this case, it really adds to her appearance. This fits her perfectly, and I LOVE it! This is so descriptive, I love the torn ear and the scar. Black and white is pretty common, but in this case, it seems so.. unique.

Senior Warrior/Queen

Nice. Thanks for specifying what kind of warrior.

For backstory, please read Cloverpath's Tale :3 if unable to pls tell me and I will give backstory

Shameless self promotion, nice. I'll check it out and be back.

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Okay I am back. I read a bit of the book, and I liked it. The grammar is good, at least. I'm just not going to say anything about this because I don't want to spoil anything..

Mate: Addertail- dark brown tabby tom with black stripes, orange eyes and a long, pointed tail.

NICE! This is so cool, I love it. I like the orange eyes.

Kits: Echostar (fluffy black she, amber eyes), Lilystep (dark brown tabby she, ice blue eyes), Badgerstripe (fluffy black he, white stripe down spine, white striped tail, Amber eyes), Ravenflight (black tom, white underbelly, chest, muzzle, green eyes), Cherrykit (tortoiseshell and white she, Amber eyes)

Lots of kits, nice. I love it.

·~*OVERALL*~·
10/10!!! I've been excited about this for a while. This oc is amazing. I wouldn't change anything. Great work!

Next time, please include the backstory / personality in the comment. But I can tell from the book that she isn't a Mary-Sue, so good job.