Brokenleg / Windchaser

For, you guessed it, @EspeonMeister. Next oc will also be for @EspeonMeister. Help me

Name: Brokenleg(used to be Windchaser then Windchaser again)

He was Windchaser and then he was Windchaser again?? What, did he chase the wind TWICE? Slow down, Wind Runner II...

This name is a bit too close to Wind Runner for my liking. Wind- is also considered sacred because cats aren't supposed to be named after the Clans. (Windflight being the exception..) Clan leader totally pulled a Rainflower, jfc.

Gender: tom

O^O

Appearance: molten brown with a white chest and black paws and tail tip, one eye is brown the other is amber/golden

Nice. I'm not a fan of ocs having 2 different eye colors, because it's quite overused. However, I like that you used brown and gold instead of blue and green or blue and amber.

As for his fur color, I like it. It's simple, but I like how you added the white and black. Good job.

Clan: WindClan

Why is he named Wind- while he's in WindClan? That isn't allowed..

Rank: new warrior then Medicine cat

I like this, you don't see warriors become medicine cats too often.

Personality: rude, sassy, caring, kind, stubborn, very clumsy

Hello, Jayfeather?

Nah, I like this. He has flaws, which is good, and he isn't the stereotypical shy medicine cat.

Backstory: when Brokenleg was born his name was Windkit. His mother was Fuzzyfeather and his father was Oakflight. He and his sister Reedkit were very playful. When he became an apprentice he was a fast learner. He and his sister soon became warriors his name was Windchaser and his sister was Reedshine. When they were out on a border patrol they saw some cats from ShadowClan crossing the border. He chased them across their border and was returning to his sister when a monster came. It hit his back right leg, crippling it( like Cinderpelt) He was left crippled. He decided to become the medicine cats apprentice. Jupinerberry took him on, the Clan leader at the time was a terrible leader and re-named him Brokenleg. Brokenleg hated his name and told his loved ones NEVER to call him that. Finally once a new leader came given the chance to get his name back. He got his name back to Windchaser.

Oh, that's why he was Windchaser then Windchaser again. This is good, I'm glad that he got his name back.

This isn't the most unique backstory. I get too many Cinderpelt feels, it kinda feels like reading her backstory combined with Brightheart(Lostface) ??

Mate: none
Kits: none

No cliches here :D

Mother: Fuzzyfeather

Adorable!

Father: Oakflight

I see this name a lot..

Siblings: Reedshine

I feel like this name is canon but I'm not sure. Oh well, it's very cute.

·~*OVERALL*~·
7/10. Basically, his name is not really allowed, because Wind is a sacred prefix. (Damn you Windflight, making everyone break the rules...) I like the backstory, but it isn't very.. original. That's all.

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