For @Starlingfall_Potato)

Name: Brambleheart

This is the second Bramble we've had here. It's ok, I support Brambles. Always. God bless Brambles.

Gender: tom

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Appearance: Brown tortoiseshell tom with ginger paws and amber eyes.

Can tom cats be Tortoiseshell? I don't think so. In order for a tom to be tortoiseshell he'd have to be intersex.

But oh well, Redtail was a Tortoiseshell, so no need to point out the fricken inaccuracies of your oc if the Erins can't even get it right.

-_-

Clan: CinderClan

Good Clan I support this

Rank: warrior

Ok

Personality: goofy, clumsy, loyal, funny, rough, awkward

Cuuuuute :o I like this a lot ok. He's kinda immature, but he's also a good and loyal warrior. That is just perfect for a warrior. I bet he's fond of kits. Is he fond of kits?

He better be fond of kits.

Backstory: Lived as a loner in a barn named Bramble. When Starlingfall rushed into his home during a blizzard, Bramble let her stay. Starlingfall told him about Clan life and all, and he decided he wanted to live in CinderClan too. After the harsh blizzards, Bramble and Starlingfall went back to CinderClan. After Bramble proved his loyalty, the leader named him Brambleheart, because CinderClan is where his heart lays. He soon fell in love with Starlingfall after getting to know her.

Aw that is so cute c: it's kinda that loner joins clan cliche, but I like this bc of how they met. The leader wasn't just "holy cow m8 u gotta join our clan." There's reason and backstory behind it. Very good.

Mate: Starlingfall

I like this name a lot :o

·~*OVERALL*~·

This is pretty good! I'm kinda meh about the Tortoiseshell tom thing, but hey, it's fine .-. Bramble- is a somewhat overused prefix, like said before, but I adore it. Sooo :D 8/10 overall.