For @TheSilverSunset :3

Name: Bramblefang

Nice name. I'd say that Bramble- is a somewhat overused prefix, but who am I to speak, I have an oc named Brambletail sooo. -fang is a common suffix, but not every cat has to have some special unique name.

Sometimes, we just need a simple Bramblefang.

Also it matches the description well :D

Gender: tom

Thank goodness ^-^ not overused!

Clan: ShadowClan

WOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Appearance: Golden tom with dark brown tabby stripes and copper eyes. One fang sticking out.

I like this a lot. Gold and brown aren't seen together a lot, so this is great! I love the copper eyes. I do not see that eye color often. And his appearance matches his name! Everything is great!

Rank: Senior warrior

Ppl normally don't specify whether they are a senior warrior or not so thank you!

Personality: loud, outspoken, very respected in ShadowClan. But he is stubborn, and he snaps at apprentices and kits. Always thinking of others, though.

He kinda reminds me of my grandpa. Ok that was a weird thing to say. Sorry.

But I actually like this! It's very descriptive. Good amount of flaws and all. But if he fell in love w a WindClan cat, and changed Clans for a while, I don't think he would be respected? Is there a specific reason for this? Like, did he do something to help his Clan and gain their respect?

Backstory: As a kit, he really wanted to be a medicine cat. But when he began training it was too much for him, so he trained to be a warrior instead. Then, as a young apprentice, he mistakenly fell for a WindClan she-cat named Sandpaw. After they became warriors, she got pregnant, and he moved to WindClan to help raise his kits. When his kits became apprentices they broke up and he returned to ShadowClan. There, he fell for a she-cat in his own Clan named Dapplelight. They had 2 litters together.

Okay, this is alright. I'm kinda meh on the different Clan love, but I like this anyway. He was a good father and left his Clan to help raise his kits, but he was loyal to ShadowClan and returned when they were old enough. I think this is a cute way of finding where his loyalties lay :3

Mates: Sandlight (formerly) Dapplelight

It's kinda weird that they have the same suffixes. -light isn't all that common. Was it done on purpose?

Kits: Darksplash and Juniperclaw, Ferntail, Cinderflame, Greeneyes, Jaypaw, Deerpaw, Wolfpaw.

That is a lot of kits o-o but I guess that's what happens when you have 3 litters. Darksplash is a cute name, and I love the prefix Juniper. Ferntail is nice too. Cinderflame is a pretty overused name, but hey, I love it. Greeneyes, I think, is canon? Like I think she was in RiverClan or ShadowClan? Anyway, like I said before, naming kits after their eye color is eh.

·~*OVERALL*~·

Pretty good! Probably 7.5/10. I like his name and appearance, but his backstory and personality might need a little bit of work. That's all :3