For @Stardustdragon345. next oc will be Shadowheart.

"Bloodmoon (don't think he's bad cause his name)

Eh. I do like that he isn't bad, Bloodmoon definitely sounds like a generic bad guy name. But the prefix Blood- is just.. eh. Who would look at a kit and decide to name it BLOODKIT? That's just mean. -moon is cool though, and it looks cool with the prefix blood, too.

Tom

Ok

Large white tome with blood red eyes.

He is a tome? Wow

Is he meant to be albino or something, with the red eyes and white fur? Because I don't think that's.. possible. I mean, for a cat to have red eyes. I get that they're talking cats and all, but I'm not a fan of the red eyes. The white fur is a bit plain. I'd do something interesting with it, like.. flecks, dapples, patches, anything. Plain white fur is just boring.

Shadowclan

Mmmm, ShadowClan

He's introverted, but caring today's he loves. After he died he was sent to the dark forest where he just wanted peace and quiet but that never came.

Why'd he go to the dark forest? I thought u said he wasn't evil. Liar liar pants on fire

I like this personality. I think he should have more flaws tho. Like.. introverted is just more of a personality trait, not bad. Make him snappy, bossy, or something else to add a bit more of an interesting character.

He was born in Shadowclan under a blood moon, thus the name. As he grew up he developed feelings for his friend Fallingpaw. When they were made warriors Bloodmoon confessed his love for Fallingsun and they became mates. They had one litter of kits. When Fallingsun became deputy they realized the leader wasn't the good leader they had always seen. He planned to kil every deputy until he had a deputy with the same intentions. Due to the threat on his mate, Bloodmoon killed the leader, Hazelstar but was caught. Fallingsun had to watch him be banished from the clan. Her kits even wanted him to leave. A few moons later Bloodmoon was in a group of rouges who led an attack on a Shadowclan patrol. In the attack Bloodmoon accidentally kils Fallingsun now Fallingstar. She said she forgave him but Bloodmoon ran away and was kiled by dogs a few moons later. He went to the darkforest and was forced to train a Riverclan med. cat named Shardlight and make her kil as many cats a she could. He regretted this but he would've been kiled if he hadn't. Moons later Shardlight bore a single kit and named her Fallingkit. Bloodmoon recognized his old mate Fallingstar as soon as the kit was apprenticed. He decided to go into her dreams when she became a warrior. During one of their meetings Shardlight discovered them and had a fight with her daughter. Bloodmoon felt bad about this as well and he stopped his visits with Fallingsun. After Fallingsun died she went looking for him and brought him to Starclan where he was finally accepted by both his kits and old clan mates.

Oh, there is a reason behind his name. Still, Bloodkit? Why not something like Redkit? How did his mother know that he would have the suffix moon when he was older?

Other than that, this is cool. I love the evil leader, and how his mate was the deputy instead of him. And he isn't evil, Hazelstar is, so why did he go to the dark forest and not Hazel? Oh well, I likey this.

Mother: Sagemist

Coool. I like Sage-.

Father: Acornberry

Nice

Mate: Fallingstar/sun

The name Fallingstar seems really cliche, but I like Fallingsun. . .

Kits: Secretbranch and Snakeear

Secret? What an odd prefix.

·~*OVERALL*~·
Like... 5/10. His name is just kinda.. meh. He needs a more interesting fur color and personality. The backstory is good, but I had a few questions. Cats can't really have red eyes so...