For @xXEchowhisperXx. Next oc will be Grizzlytoe.

Name- Addersplash ((As in a splash of evil in him, like a splash of venom.))

That's cool! Thanks for providing a reason behind it. Adder- is used a bit often in "bad" guys. Though he isn't really evil, I'd like to see a bad guy with a simple, non-evil name like Ripple- or something. This is great though, I love the reason behind it.

Gender- Tom

Nice.

Rank- Senior warrior

Thanks for specifying what kind of warrior!

Clan- WispClan

I've seen this a few times. I think it's cool.

Looks- A long furred tabby tom with a light hazel pelt. White muzzle, paws, and belly to chest. Light green eyes with a hint of gold in them. Has flecks of white around his muzzle, signaling that he is a little old. Long and completely sharp claws.

Brown tabby and white is pretty common. By hazel I assume you mean light brown, not blue-green. I think this is pretty cool, the added detail about his muzzle makes him seem a lot more interesting. Green eyes are overused, but I like the hint of gold.

Personality- Hyper, confusing. Slightly murderous. Selfish. When around cats who he cares for, kind, sweet, goofy, lazy.

Not your typical ~bad guy.~ He has good and bad personality traits, which is good.

Backstory- When Adderkit was born, he had a sister who was soon wiped out by a train of WhiteCough. He was trained by a murderous warrior, Fallenblood. Adderpaw's mentor was replaced after Fallenblood had led a raid on the camp and had gotten Shockstar to loose his last life. Berrytoe, the deputy, became the new leader and banished Fallenblood out of the clan. Adderpaw earned his new warrior name, Addersplash, due to the small bit of murder that was taught by Fallenblood. No cat trusts Addersplash, except one cat, Clovertail. Clovertail fell in love with Addersplash, and he felt the same way. Soon, Clovertail gave birth to 3 kits. Featherkit, a she kit who soon became the next medicine cat. ((Feathersong)) Clovertail also had two toms, Talonkit and Bouncingkit. Bouncingkit died during the first snow after he was born, leaving only Talonkit and Featherkit alone together. Talonkit, later being named Taloneye because of loosing an eye to the talon of a hawk, was killed by a FlamingClan rain party. Addersplash refused to let his last kit die. He protected her, an now she is the newest medicine cat of WispClan. Addersplash was soon getting warmed up to the clan, and so he became the next deputy.
Only time may tell what happens to dear Addersplash next.

This is AWESOME! I believe that Clovertail is a canon name, so points off for that, but other than that this is very cool. He was assumed evil, but he was a good father and all... I like it.

Mate- Clovertail

What's funny to me is that Clovertail is a canon SkyClan cat, and she had a kit named Bouncekit. Your Clovertail's kit is named Bouncingkit... whut.

Kits- Talonkit, Bouncingkit, Featherkit.

Love these names.

This took quite a while ; ^ ;

I believe you... it is long.

·~*OVERALL*~·
He's awesome, 9\10. Clovertail is a canon name so I had to take points off for that. Maybe change his eye color, but other than that, this is pretty good.