Name: Silverfall

Silverfall is a nice name and has a nice ring to it but Silver quite common in RiverClan.

Clan: RiverClan

I can't really judge the clan.

Personality: She battles with herself a lot, is very sweet, best swimmer in the clan, never really liked toms much, enjoys sharing tongues as well as hunting alone. When it comes to her clan, she will do whatever it takes to protect them

Good mix of good and bad traits.

Appearance: Silver with green eyes and white chest and tail tip

Quite an overused appeareance but it fits her name.

Backstory: Born into riverclan, though her grandpa is from ShadowClan. At about 7 moons, her sister Leafpaw died and it left her depressed all the way up till she was 15 moons old. After that, she met Acornbranch and also got an apprentice. During a terribly cold leafbare, her mother died. Then, during the same leafbare, her father was killed in a battle with Thunderclan. She pushed everyone out of her life except Acornbranch and Pumpkingaze. At this point, she was 24 moons old. At 29 moons, she found out she was expecting. She had three kits, but two of them also died, leaving just Lilackit. Right before her daughter became an apprentice, Silverfall was brutally murdered by a Windclan warrior, leaving her family scarred. Not even a moon before this, her sister became Pumpkinstar.

Aw, so sad for Silverfall. Cross-clan relationships between River and Shadow are quite rare. Did WindClan attack the camp? If so, who would murder a nursing queen?

Family: 

Mother- Tawnyfern: Pale brown she-cat with green eyes and a few grey spots.

Father- Cloudstep: White and light grey tom with ice blue eyes.

Sisters-

Leafpaw: Light brown tabby and white she-cat with amber eyes.

 Pumpkinstar: Pale brown, white, and grey striped she-cat with pale green eyes.

Nice names. They fit with the apereances and I can see where Silverfall gets her coloring.

Mate- Acornbranch: Light brown time with a dark brown belly and paws and lighter brown ears and back, also has light green eyes.

Nice name. His coloring similar to Pumpkinstar's. What a coincidence. 

Kits- Lilacdrift: calico she-cat with light green eyes and tufted ears.

Nice name. Sounds like her personality would be calm and imaginative. The description fits with her parents'.

Overall, I rate Silverfall 75/100. Silver is a slightly overused prefix but apart from that, the names were very fitting and creative. (I love the name Pumpkingaze). The backstory was quite quick but moving and I look forward to reading the book.