I know this person. So I may not ask as many questions.

Name: SpiritPaw

  Cool. I don't think I've seen that name before

Gender: She-Cat

Okay.

Age: 6 Moons

That's a pretty common age.

Appearance: White cat with flowers in her chest and tail very fluffy and very long tail she has a Santa hat from a wildcat named Grey who collected hats to give to other people for food.

Okay. The hat is interesting. But what's her eye color? What is her body type? 

Personality: Kind, Playful, Fast, Hyper, Creative, Curious, and a little Mischievous

Okay. Those traits are pretty common I think. But other wise it's okay.

Rank: Medicine Cat Apprentice 

Cool.

Clan: WindClan but people think she's from RoseClan (My made up clan)

Yay WindClan cat!

Skills: Healing, Hunting, Running

So normal cat skills plus healing? Not very helpful.

Hobbies hanging out with RoseClan friends and healing other cats

Alright makes sense I guess. But why would she hang out with RoseClan? Isn't she in WindClan?

Mentor: BraveHeart a strong mentor who try's to get SpiritPaw stronger

But... SpiritPaw is already a good hunter... what's he training her with?

Apprentice: None (Yet...)

ok.

Family: BrambleThorn (Dad) WolfClaw (Mom) BloomTail (Sister) Deputy DragonHeart (Brother)

Neat. I like the names a lot. I've never seen Dragon as a prefix. It would be better if you included more information about them though. What do they look like? What's their personality?

Friends: RainPaw and not really but kinda FoxPaw

Okay, since I know you and know these ocs I know what they look like and their personalitys but next time put it on the form.

Mate: None she becomes a medicine cat

Ah okay.

Kits: None

Obviously.

Crush: FoxPaw but RainPaw likes him too so she let RainPaw have him.

Eh. Okay.Residence: Sometimes in her brothers den but usually with her sister.

Yeah... but where does her brother live? And her sister? 

Backstory: She grew up in WindClan but often visited RoseClan she loved to play around in the meadows of RoseClan but always went back to WindClan after awhile. She sometimes snuck into RiverClan to play with RainPaw. The first time she saw the nursery she knew she wanted to become a medicine cat. So when she became an apprentice she started working really hard lots of time BraveHeart doubted her but she just kept working harder.

So she's part of three clans? Or what? Wouldn't she just stay in WindClan? And seeing the nursery and wanting to be a medicine cat makes no sense. And if she wants to be a medicine cat why does she even have a mentor who teaches her other things? Isn't she a medicine cat apprentice?

Other: She is scared of big cats and predators but she only goes where they are if either it's a place where they can't smell her or she's with BraveHeart.

Alright seems like a decent fear I guess.

So this oc is alright other than one main thing. If she is a medicine cat apprentice then why doesn't she have a medicine cat training her? Or is Braveheart a medicine cat? Lots of questions.