Henlo Everyone!!

I made an edit on Alan Walker and I want you feedbacks coz I am thinking to email this to Alan..... And I'm way too nervous...... Can you plzz tell me should I email this or not.... and How much will you rate it in the scale of 10?? Is there anything that I should redo?? PLZZ TELL ME!!

PLZZ GIVE ME SOME HONEST REVIEWS. I WILL NOW FEEL BAD EVEN IF IT'S A NEGATIVE REVIEW :)