Guys sorry about this but i decuded to unpublish my other story. because I'm afraid that if try working on both stories i might not finish. them so my plan is to finish with this story first and once im done i'll publish the other story.  also i decided im gonna write the other story  with lines but when describing what's going on i'll use paragraph form. i still need time to think about it but don't worry i'll still be writing the other story the only thing is you won't see it until i complete this one. I'm truly sorry about this.