The Rejected Ones
Author: _luvhurtz_
Genre: Action
What I liked about this book:
I guess this is probably good wish fulfillment for someone out there.
What I did NOT like about this book:
I got four chapters in and I think this is the fastest I've ever called something and put it down.
The entire thing reads like a bad anime. Over half of those four chapters are devoted to the cute clothes all the characters are wearing...characters who seem to just accept they've been kidnapped by this dude who wants them to kill people.
They are then given less than a week of training before beginning to go on missions. Did I mention one of them is a six year old girl? Yeah.
No one has any personality. The prose is far too concerned with the kool goffik clothes everyone's wearing and how their hair is done, and there really isn't a story here.
This seems like the kind of thing I wrote when I was fifteen, and that's a problem because I know this author is older than that.
Overall:
Start over.
Rating:
1/10. Painful.
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