SleepWalker
Author: roYaltEE-viXXen
Genre: Fantasy
What I liked about this book:
It was short.
What I did NOT like about this book:
The primary things this book seems concerned with are:
-What the characters are wearing
-What kind of makeup the main character puts on her face
-What kind of nail polish the main character wears
-What the possessions of the main character, such as her cars and house, look like
-How hot everyone is
Everything else is secondary. There are long paragraphs of description that give a certain infamous harry potter fanfic a run for its money in how cringey and over the top they are. No one has any depth, it's all just clothing and accessories, like I'm reading about dolls.
There is an absolutely cringe-inducing sex scene in the second chapter that I couldn't actually get through without spitting my drink all over my keyboard. That sounds painful and unpleasant, and also the way it's being written about reminds me of the same awful fanfic.
This book is bad. There is no plot. Turn back now.
Overall:
Unsalvageable. Start over.
Rating:
This one gets a 0/10 because I honestly don't think there's any way to redeem it.
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