reviewed by (your username)

HalieNobles

title of the book you reviewed:

Calytrix's Journey

author of the book you reviewed:

_LadyBex_

review on title(what you think):

I really like the title, it lets you in on what the story will pretty much be about. It doesn't spoil anything from the book though.

review on the cover:

The cover is different, and I don't think I have seen one like it before.

review on the grammar:

From what I've read, the grammar is really good. I have not seen any grammar mistakes in this book so far. If there are any grammar mistakes at all, then they weren't that big of a deal for me to notice them.

review on the punctuation:

Everything seemed to be in the correct place throughout each senrence and paragraph.

review on the character development:

Character development was really good. You could tell that she is slowly srarting to develop her skills for the better.

review on the plot:

Everything seems to be in line. The story isn't rushed, which I like. Who wants to read something that is quickly ran through? So, you did very good on that. Your characters are described well, and we are able to get to know them.

overall review (your general thoughts):

Overall, I think that your story is well put together and that you have a lot of potential. You keep writing girl!