Judge: The_Clumsy_Koala

Book Name- Getting Her Back
Author- Tanvitango
Title- 3/5
Cover-. 5/5
Blurb- 5/5
Prologue-. 3/5
Grammar-. 7/10
Plot-. 10/10
Character Development- 8/10
Flow Of The Story-. 4/5
Creativity-. 4/5
Interest in reading?- 5/5
Overall Opinion- 7/10
I enjoyed my time reading the book, your writing engaged me the whole time. The title was way too common so you could have kept something unique like "I want her" or instead you could have tried our Generator Shop, that would have surely helped you. The cover is really good and I am seriously loving it. Blurb was apt for the story, so no changes needed. About the prologue I think this would have been not the right scene to put in the prologue, it should be something related to which the whole story is about. Me being the Grammar Nazi person, says that yes there were mistakes like some problems with tenses and spelling mistakes were there, and I think you can edit it yourself. The plot was nice and engaging, so very good. Character Development was good for all the characters, but I think Netra Ji's outburst towards Rohit was unexpected and a bit too over. I think the story was rushed at some points, so I would like you to look at that. There was not much creativity in the plot as these types of plots are common when a man questions a girl's character, and when the girl leaves the man tries to gain her trust back, you could have added something onto it, to make it more unique. I really enjoyed reading it, and seeing Rohit cute antics and specially that lizard scene, and when it was shown like Rohit was caught in an accident I was hell scared, but thank god it was not him. You are a good writer, you describe scenes well, but there is always a scope for improvement. Keep Up With The Good Work.
TOTAL- 61/75
*****

Book Name- Ending Questions
Author- LxMendes_Lover02
Title- 3/5
Cover-. 3/5
Blurb- 5/5
Prologue-. 0/5
Grammar-. 10/10
Plot-. 8/10
Character Development- 9/10
Flow Of The Story-. 3/5
Creativity-. 4/5
Interest in reading?- 3/5
Overall Opinion- 6/10
You are a good writer, and I truly liked the book. The title was okay but it has been a couple days of me reading this book but I still didn't understand how was the title apt to the story, this title gives something like crime/thriller vibes and I didn't see something like that in the story. The cover is surely very good but if the main leads of the story are Elizabeth and Shawn then I feel that the cover should consist of both of them and not only Shawn. The blurb was great and gave me a proper rough image of the story before starting to read it.There was no prologue which I could have found, and I suggest you to add it, you could show the scene where Shawn asks Beth (Elizabeth) for a date, I think it would be good as a prologue or you can write something related to the climax of the story. The grammar was perfect, and no objections with it are there. The Plot is very nice but at some point it got boring, and I would like it if you could look at that. Character Developments were good, I liked how Beth changed by time, Shawn was I think the same throughout, no major changes. And also I would like to suggest if you could have defined the characters (main leads) at the beginning of the story it would have been better. The flow was story was rushed at the beginning and in the middle it got really slow which made it boring to read further. And if you think why rushed in the beginning so I think it was pretty quick for Beth's and Shawn's first kiss, it has been just a week, they have not even understood each other properly at the beginning, and slow in the middle of the story as we know that both the leads are dating, but there wasn't any twist or turn which could have made it interesting to read. Creative? Yes it was a creative and unique plot for sure. You have a very good descriptive language which made it easier for me and the other readers to understand the scene properly.This book was a pretty good read but I think you need to improve at some points which I've mentioned above. That's all. Keep Up The Work.
TOTAL- 54/75
*****

Book Name- Burning Desire
Author- Maraj312
Title- 2/5
Cover-. 4/5
Blurb- 5/5
Prologue-. 0/5
Grammar-. 8/10
Plot-. 9/10
Character Development- 9/10
Flow Of The Story-. 5/5
Creativity-. 3/5
Interest in reading?- 4/5
Overall Opinion- 7/10
The title Burning Desire is way too common, come on be creative also I think it's not much related to the plot of the story, the title says something else and the story something else. The cover was simple and nice but then this says something else compared to the title. The blurb is very nice and perfect, it's apt to the story. There was no prologue which I could have found out, a suggestion is here, that the scene you have written in the blurb you can make it as a prologue and no need to add it in the blurb you can simply explain the base of the story in it. The grammar was perfect mostly but at some places you used would instead of could and also I could find some problems with the sentence structure at some places, please look into them. The plot is very nice, but I found this doubt that Jasmine fell in love with Andrew and after she told Raymond that she has trust issues, so how can she fall in love? Also when she knew that Andrew was already in a relationship though there were some problems with it, but he and his girlfriend can come back together anytime, so I see there is no fault of Andrew here, he just wanted to try with Jasmine, but he got another lady or his girlfriend back. The only fault I think he had was that he could have informed Jasmine about it.I also wanted to ask something else about her, that you mentioned she was financially weak, but she acts like that she is financially stable and has enough money, how can this happen?. I think I already mentioned Jasmine now about Raymond. I have no doubts with him. The flow of the story was good and smooth. It lacked creativity, as this plot is so common between a rich guy who mostly does flings and a normal girl who has failed in love once and is financially weak, you could have added something more to the story. The story was nice and kept me hooked all the time, so very good. That's all but please look upon the points I have mentioned. Keep Up The Good Work.
TOTAL- 56/75
*****

Book Name- Undeal
Author- Brownieislove
Title- 5/5
Cover-. 3/5
Blurb- 5/5
Prologue-. 0/5
Grammar-. 9/10
Plot-. 10/10
Character Development- 8/10
Flow Of The Story-. 5/5
Creativity-. 5/5
Interest in reading?- 4/5
Overall Opinion- 6/10
I truly enjoyed my time reading your book, very good. The title is a nice and unique one. The cover is good, but I feel it can be better, it was not very eye-catching. The blurb mainly told us about the base of the story, which makes it perfect and intriguing. There was no prologue as of now, so I would like to suggest you to put up one, the scene could be that of when Manik and Nandini decide to make a deal with each other. Your grammar is very good but there were slight punctuational mistakes, for which I had to cut down the marks. The plot is unique, creative and very intriguing, Manik being married was really unexpected and the last line he spoke which was "I never cheated on you, Nandini." made me hell confused, but yeah this helps in keeping the readers glued to the story. Character Development was good for both the leads, but I felt Nandini was too arrogant and short-tempered even more than Manik in KYY. The flow is going
perfect as of now, and I would like you to keep the story at the same pace. The story felt a bit boring and cliché in the starting but the later chapters brought my interest back. That's all, you are going very well and your writing style is also very nice. Keep Up The Good Work.
TOTAL- 60/75
*****

Book Name- Yeh Ishq Nahi Aasan
Author- Nakuul_is_love
Title- 4/5
Cover-. 3/5
Blurb- 3/5
Prologue-. 4/5
Grammar-. 5/10
Plot-. 8/10
Character Development- 8/10
Flow Of The Story-. 5/5
Creativity-. 3/5
Interest in reading?- 3/5
Overall Opinion- 6/10
Your book is really nice, but I think it lacks at some points so I am mentioning them below.  The title is very good and apt for the story but not that much eye-catching, also Wattpad has both Indian and Non-Indian readers so it could have been better if the title would have been in English. The Cover is nice and creative, but first of all the title is not visible, the words have gotten overlapped by the pic, also the spelling of your username is mentioned wrong on the cover, so see if you can get it changed. The blurb is okay, you wrote that this book will show that love can win over religion but the book shows another plot which is Shivaay loves Anika but she doesn't believes in love, so I would like you to edit your blurb and also tell the readers about the second track you gonna show us. The prologue has many scenes, I think you can delete the first scene from the prologue in which Anika compliments Shivaay, also the prologue and blurb have the same scenes which makes them same, so you can remove the scenes from the blurb and instead explain the whole story base. The grammar is really poor, and it needs heavy editing, in many places you used She instead of He and vice versa. You are having problems in tenses and forming a sentence, so please edit the book. The plot is nice but I think it's too common nothing creative was there which I could have found. Character Developments were good but I found Anika too cold, her mood changed in seconds which is not that much realistic. The flow of the story is perfect, so please try to keep writing the story at the same pace throughout. Poor grammar made me lose interest in reading the book, also I think the plot is a bit cliché, see if you can make any changes. Your writing style is nice but there is always a scope for improvement. The book was a nice read but I think you really need to improve at some points. Keep Up The Great Work.
TOTAL- 52/75
*****

Book Name- Undeniable Love
Author- RealityOfSociety
Title- 3/5
Cover-. 3/5
Blurb- 2/5
Prologue-. 0/5
Grammar-. 8/10
Plot-. 8/10
Character Development- 9/10
Flow Of The Story-. 3/5
Creativity-. 3/5
Interest in reading?- 4/5
Overall Opinion- 8/10
The title is good but I am confused about how it is related to the story? The cover is nice, but it's not very eye-catching, you can make it more creative. Blurb was too short, just 'You'll learn the difference between Zaroorat and Pyaar in this story'. This line was not much related to the story, you could have explained the main track of the story. There was no prologue which I could have found, you should add a scene in the prologue which is related to the story's main track. Grammar was perfect mostly but used 'Thier' everywhere except for 'Their', also there were some problems with sentence structure, and punctuation mistakes. The plot is nice and intriguing but not something new, the only thing which you added was that Mishti too had a type of dark past. I felt good seeing the transformation in the characters of Abir and Mishti and how their relationship got stronger. The pace of the story was a bit slow. I enjoyed reading the book a lot, it was a nice read. Your way of describing is too good. Keep Up With The Good Work.
TOTAL- 51/75
*****

Book Name- Love Is Deep
Author- MishbirXcherish
Title- 4/5
Cover-. 2/5
Blurb- 2/5
Prologue-. 0/5
Grammar-. 8/10
Plot-. 7/10
Character Development- 8/10
Flow Of The Story-. 4/5
Creativity-. 4/5
Interest in reading?- 3/5
Overall Opinion- 6 /10
As you it’s just the beginning of the story I can’t give a proper review but I will tell you about the things I felt till now reading the story. The title, I have still not learnt how it is related to the story but will see after a few more chapters of the story. The cover is not at all good, sorry to say. First of all, you have put the pics in the middle so the rest of the cover is empty, then it doesn’t have a title nor your username, it’s not at all eye-catching. There was no prologue, and I wonder if you could add one. The grammar was pretty okay, just some typos were there. About the plot it’s a bit too common, business tycoon with his childhood love, also in the last chap when you showed us a bit of Mishti’s bitter past, but I think it’s nothing in it which can affect Mishti a lot in the present, not a valid reason to call this a part of bitter past. Every character was wonderful, I liked the characters of Dadaji and Dadiji, also about Mishti I felt she was acting a bit childish. The flow is perfect except that I think you started revealing Mishti’s past too soon, you could have waited a little longer to increase the reader’s curiosity, to help keep them glued to the story. The story is nice, but I want to find something unique and creative in it, as this plot is pretty common, I don’t want you to lose readers further in the story. That’s all. Keep Up With the Good Work.
TOTAL- 48/75
*****

Book Name- A Unique Psychological Love
Author- Artistic_Pri
Title- 3/5
Cover-. 5/5
Blurb- 5/5
Prologue-. 0/5
Grammar-. 8/10
Plot-. 10/10
Character Development- 9/10
Flow Of The Story-. 5/5
Creativity-. 5/5
Interest in reading?- 5/5
Overall Opinion- 7/10
You are a really good writer, and your writing style is amazing. The title was nice but I think it was unnecessary to make it this long, you could have kept 'A Unique Love' or 'A Psychological Love' instead. The cover is very beautiful and creative, you chose a very good Graphic Designer. The blurb is too good to be true, it's intriguing. There was no prologue, and I think it's needed as this story is perfect in all aspects and I don't want it to be too lacking at this point. You have a really good grammar, just some minor typos were there. The plot is so intriguing, creative, unique, I have never read a love story of a Psychologist and a Psychopath and then there is another twist in it. The character developments are good for all characters but I think Prerna is just too confused, maybe confused with herself, and I have loved the side of Romantic Anurag since the last chapter. The flow is going perfect, and I would like to suggest you keep moving at the same pace. As the plot is really intriguing and with a good grammar, it kept glued to the story and maybe it happens with other readers too. That's all. Keep Up With The Good Work.
TOTAL- 62/75
*****

Book Name- Kiss Me If You Can
Author- Roxydog05
Title- 4/5
Cover-. 3/5
Blurb- 3/5
Prologue-. 1/5
Grammar-. 10/10
Plot-. 9/10
Character Development- 10/10
Flow Of The Story-. 4/5
Creativity-. 4/5
Interest in reading?- 3/5
Overall Opinion- 8/10
I have never seen Happy Days, but this book was really nice. The title was really nice and gave a hint of comedy so perfect. The cover was nice but it was messy, it was a type of overloaded, also those white borders at the top and the bottom added onto it. The blurb was okay but you probably should change the scene, put up the scene where Helen realises her feelings. It was good that you put up a prologue but it felt more like the chapter of the story it was too lengthy, a prologue is always short which is related to the climax of the story, this was more like an intro to the story. The grammar is perfect, there were not even typos but you should try to divide the text into more paragraphs so it makes it easy to read. The plot was really nice and creative. There was not much of a
major development in characters but it is going smooth and perfect,and I loved the character of Potsie. The flow is smooth but I felt that at some points your writing is a bit rushed, making it difficult for me to understand the scene. The book was a good read, but I felt you need to be more descriptive in your language, it feels rushed. I also want to advice you to write the story from a 3rd person's pov, we are reading the story from Helen's pov so we only know what happens with her, or what she feels, but what about the other characters then? That's all. Keep Up With The Good Work.
TOTAL- 59/75
*****

Book Name- Thrist For Revenge
Author- UfitinemaYvette
Title- 3/5
Cover-. 3/5
Blurb- 3/5
Prologue-. 2/5
Grammar-. 7/10
Plot-. 9/10
Character Development- 10/10
Flow Of The Story-. 4/5
Creativity-. 4/5
Interest in reading?- 4/5
Overall Opinion- 8/10
The title was apt for the story, but first of all I think it would have been Thirst For Revenge not Thrist For Revenge right. Also, there is no need to put tags in the title, it makes it to look unprofessional. The cover is nice, but I think you could have shown Kabir too in it, also it can be more creative, I didn't like the way it was written 'By UfitinemaYvette', you could have written this near the border. According to the blurb it seems that Ishani and Siya are also a part of the main characters but it didn't feel like by seeing the cover and their contribution in the story. Prologue was okay but you could have shown the scene where Riddhima challenges Kabir in it, it would have made it related to the base of the story. Grammar is okay but it has many typos. I don't want to offend you but the plot of this story is a bit cliché, you could have added something creative to it so that it could have been more unique. Character Developments were good and I liked Riansh's determination plus their cute moments. The story was a good read but I think it needs to improve at some points, with so many typos at some point I felt to not read it further. Your writing style is okay but still you need to improve it. That's all. Keep Up With The Good Work.
TOTAL- 57/75
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