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Judge : sarcastically-sane

Not A Disney Fairytale by hsblisss
Title - 2.5/5
Cover - 1.5/5
Book description - 0.75/5
Prologue - 2.5/5
Grammar - 8/10
Plot - 7.5/10
Character(s)/Development - 3.50/10
Flow of the story - 4/5
Creativity - 2.25/5
Your interest based on the content - 3.25/5
Overall opinion - 4.5/10 
Total - 40.25/75 

The title is very unique, but it doesn't tell much about your plot. I can see the efforts you put in for your cover to be aesthetic, attractive, but the fonts turned the whole vibes off. The blurb is very short and gives us no idea about the main character or the plot. I'm taking "Logophile" as the prologue. I loved your vocabulary, but the prologue gives us no idea about what is going to happen in her life. There are absolutely no grammatical mistakes, also the descriptions were on point. The plot is understandable, the way it's described fascinated me the most. The character doesn't have any flaws, or they weren't visible to me. I can understand how she is, but I couldn't connect through her. Though the title is 'Not A Disney Fairytale', I felt it was similar to fairy tales, except for the fact her 'prince charming' didn't arrive yet, lol. The author explained it will be little different than other stories, but I felt it was similar.

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Retrouvaille by _starflies_ 
Title - 4/5
Cover - 5/5
Book description - 3.75/5
Prologue - 4.25/5
Grammar - 6.5/10
Plot - 7.5/10
Character(s)/Development - 8.5/10
Flow of the story - 2.5/5
Creativity - 3.75/5
Your interest based on the content - 4.5/5
Overall opinion - 7.5/10 
Total - 57.75/75 

The title, except for the fact it's in a different language, tells the concept of the book perfectly. The graphic design has done an excellent job in the cover! The book description attracted me, but the grammatical mistakes stopped me from clicking the read button. There were grammatical mistakes and names are misspelled. In one chapter I read 'Rhea', but she's nowhere in the cast or mentioned previously. I liked how the concept is not that original but it's your presentation and writing style, also the plot, which made the book stand out. In the starting chapters I felt, 'Too many characters to remember', but as the story progressed, each and everyone of them made their own place. The flow is going smooth but the GIFs in between interrupted my reading trance.

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Haan Sekha Maine Jeena~Manan OS by xdazzlerxx 
Title - 3/5
Cover - 4/5
Book description - 0.25/5
Prologue - 0/5
Grammar - 7.25/10
Plot - 8.5/10
Character(s)/Development - 8.5/10
Flow of the story - 3.25/5
Creativity - 4.95/5
Your interest based on the content - 4.75/5
Overall opinion - 6.5/10 
Total - 51.95/75 

The title seems perfect, except a spelling mistake in it, it will be either "Seekha" or "Sikha". Also, you can remove the "~Manan OS" as it is clearly visible from the cover and tags. The blurb is just one sentence, which doesn't tell us much about the OS. The plot and character development were just perfect, but the grammar was a little off. I have never read a book like this, the concept about love and healing is my favourite. I loved the cute and fun loving scenes between Manik and Nandini. 
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The Train Story by The_Clumsy_Koala 
Title - 2.5/5
Cover - 3.5/5
Book description - 1/5 Prologue - 0/5
Grammar - 6.5/10
Plot - 7.5/10
Character(s)/Development - 3.5/10
Flow of the story - 2.5/5
Creativity - 3.75/5
Your interest based on the content - 4/5
Overall opinion - 6.25/10 
Total - 41/75 

The title is although justified, but it failed to grab my attention. I would suggest changing it. The bottom part of the cover is good but the face claims part doesn't look good. You can try asking your GD for a redo, maybe? The blurb needs major editing and also, try adding something about your characters. There were many grammatical mistakes, also, the punctuations weren't properly placed. As the two shots were just based on their meeting in a train, so there was no character development to be seen. There are just needed characters but their traits aren't clear. I liked the open ending, it will depend on the reader's mind. 

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Dear Stranger by rsakshir 
Title - 5/5
Cover - 4.5/5
Book description - 2/5
Prologue - 0/5
Grammar - 6/10
Plot - 8.75/10
Character(s)/Development - 8/10
Flow of the story - 4.5/5
Creativity - 4.5/5
Your interest based on the content - 4.5/5
Overall opinion - 7.5/10 

Total - 55.25/75 

The cover and title are perfect, but I feel you can give some 'letter' vibes in the cover. The book's blurb couldn't grab my attention, it was only the last line which intrigued me. The plot and the originality is amazing! Books like this are very less found. There were some grammatical errors, rest all is perfect. The best thing about the book are the characters, I could relate to both of them so well! 

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Her Worth by Veiled_author 

Title - 5/5
Cover - 1.5/5
Book description - 3/5
Prologue - 3.5/5
Grammar - 4.5/10
Plot - 6.5/10
Character(s)/Development - 5.5/10
Flow of the story - 4/5
Creativity - 3/5
Your interest based on the content - 3/5
Overall opinion - 6.75/10 

Total - 46.25/75 

The cover needs proper editing, the vector is not merging well with the background, and the subtitle looks unclear. Although the book description is well written, I feel you can add something more to it. The characters aren't introduced properly, I can understand Vaani and her family but your supporting characters aren't introduced well. Especially Avni. There were many grammatical mistakes, which broke my reading trance. 

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Key To My Heart by MishbirXcherish 
Title - 1/5
Cover - 0.25/5
Book description - 0.25/5
Prologue - 0/5
Grammar - 4/10
Plot - 5/10
Character(s)/Development - 4/10
Flow of the story - 1.25/5
Creativity - 2/5
Your interest based on the content - 1/5
Overall opinion - 3.5/10 

Total - 22.25/75 

The title, cover and book description needs a lot of improvisation. The plot had so many flashbacks that I couldn't clarify what is happening in the present, and the flashbacks came into the story without any proper reasons. Usage of pictures broke my reading trance, as well as the flashbacks. I have read many fanfics like this in different fandoms. So I can't say it's a very original plot. Though their fights were "entertaining", but it felt like they were in a toxic relationship. 

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Her Past (Riansh- Os- Novel) by UfitinemaYvette 
Title - 0.50/5
Cover - 0.50/5
Book description - 0.25/5
Prologue - 0/5
Grammar - 3/10
Plot - 5/10
Character(s)/Development - 4/10
Flow of the story - 1/5
Creativity - 1.25/5
Your interest based on the content - 0.75/5
Overall opinion - 3.5/10 

Total - 19.75/75 

The title, cover and blurb needs improvements. Using emojis in between made the whole story look unprofessional. The plot can't be understood by a judge or reader who hasn't watched the show, so I can't say anything for the plot. But yes, there are many grammatical mistakes. Also, try to describe everything, it's like everyone is just saying their dialogues. No emotions, describing the surroundings, nothing. I'm not a RiAnsh fan, so I don't know anything about this plot. 

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Musubi by KyotoKumkum
Title - 0.75/5
Cover - 2/5
Book description - 2.5/5
Prologue - 0/5
Grammar - 3/10
Plot - 3/10
Character(s)/Development - 3/10
Flow of the story - 1/5
Creativity - 0.5/5
Your interest based on the content - 0.5/5
Overall opinion - 2/10 

Total - 15.25/75 

First of all, I had no idea what the title means, which language is the title in. I used Google Translate and it said, "Musubi" in "Japanese" means "Conclusion". I'm not completely sure about this. But if the translation is right, then I suggest "Conclusion" can be a better title. The font in the cover looks childish. Even after reading 7-8 chapters, I'm not sure of the plot. The blurb and plot, looks like, have no connection. 

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I Witnessed A Murder by themysteryisme975
Title - 4.75/5
Cover - 1.50/5
Book description - 0.75/5
Prologue - 0/5
Grammar - 6/10
Plot - 1/10
Character(s)/Development - 2/10
Flow of the story - 2/5
Creativity - 2/5
Your interest based on the content - 3/5
Overall opinion - 1.5/10 

Total - 24.5/75 

The title is very intriguing and catchy but the cover and blurb could be better. There was no introduction, like casually, in the story. She is a little clumsy, that's it, which was normal in that situation. The book was very short and had no proper descriptions regarding the happenings. It was very interesting each passing second, but two things it lacked - the character's emotions and a proper plot. 

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