This chapter is 20000+ words. Just a heads up.

Today I will be reviewing my first Fangan ever. It's really cringy so I removed from Wattpad, so consider this a Critic Book ExclusiveTM.

Like half of these OCs were mine and then the others belong to a friend of mine. I'll probably say which ones are mine as they characters are introduced.

*NOTICE! Parts of this story have been edited or completely deleted due to how bad they originally were. I will not elaborate because I'm embarrassed by it. Just know that this is not the raw version like all the other stories. (I was like 11-12 when I wrote this and I not influenced by the best of things.)

TW: death, blood, gore, swearing and other usage of harsh words, underage drinking (technically they are all adults, but in my country the drinking age is 21 so... still illegal), malnorished mentions, implied sex and sexual comments, implied nudity, eating disorder mentions, vomiting, self harm implications, self harm, violence,

Today my commentary will be like {this}, due regular bold being used for evidence collection and the class trial.

Also, I typing this on my computer. I am bad at typing so there may be more spelling errors than usual lol.

00: Prolonge

{We've literally just started and I've spelt something horribly wrong.}

Cody Point Of View~~~~

A lavender and black teddy bear jumped off the stage.

{King!}

Noir: I'm your Headmaster. Noirkuma!

Athena: Why can't we leave, Mr. Headmaster?...

{Let's pretend that me skipping the entire Prologue and actually introducing the characters was a creative choice and not me being lazy. (I did introduce the characters in the "high school" era of the story, but we aren't going over it so it doesn't count.)}

Noir: Oh? That's the fun part. Your graduation!

Dexter: And, when is that?

Noir: One of you will graduate when you win my game.

Lola: A game! Like chess!

{No.}

Noir: Not exactly, but I like your enthusiasm!

Erin: Then what kind of fucking game are we playing then?!

Noir: A killing game! One of you must kill one of your classmates and get away with it. Simple enough, yes?

Skyler: K-kill someone?...

Noir: It's fine to be nervous. I'll give you a motive tomorrow after you get a feel for things.

Zoey: Motive?

Noir: A reason to kill someone, of course.

Athena: I'm gonna be sick...

Lola: Me too... What if we run out of paper? The origami!

{Oh no! People could kill me at any second, but what if we run out of paper?!}

Noir: Supplies and rations are restocked every now and then so no need to worry about starving. Oh! I almost forgot. Your Jen Pads. They'll serve as a handbook, and a key.

And like that Noirkuma was gone. Everyone grabbed a Jen Pad and began to explore it.

{This is the world's laziest Prologue lmao.}

Bonnie: Oooooh. It's says Erin's chest size is flat.~

{I stole this line from the Fangan that inspired me to make this Fangan.}

Erin: Hey! They must have gotten it wrong, it's clearly B...

I checked my profile.

{This is the closest thing to an introduction that we get. Just Cody reading everyone's profiles.}

Name: Cody Cavel

Age: 18

Bust: N/A

{I only did busts for the girls because I didn't know that guys can also have chest sizes. So the "bust" info just kinda translates to cup size.}

Height: 5'4

Weight: 123 lb

Ultimate Talent: Ultimate Feretrophob

{His talent is being afraid of caskets and coffins. There isn't even a creative or thematic reason for it. I just ran out of talents.}

Everything is correct. I guess I should check everyone's profiles, just to get on idea of who I'm trapped with.

{That's a little weird, but you do you.}

Name: Enoja Williams

Age: 18

Bust: A

Height: 5'11

Weight: 140 lb

Ultimate Talent: Ultimate Mercenary

{Not my character.}

Name: Taylor Hoppkins

Age: 18

Bust: B

Height: 5'10

Weight: 145 lb

Ultimate Talent: Ultimate Harpy

{So these characters are from that one fantasy world that I have (if you know, you know) so therefore they have fantasy-ish talents. Also she is my character.}

Name: Cho Maddison

Age: 18

Bust: C

Height: 5'5

Weight: 137 lb

Ultimate Talent: Ultimate Pastry Chef

{Not mine.}

Name: Hailey Floud

Age: 18

Bust: Flat

Height: 5'3

Weight: 98 lb

Ultimate Talent: Ultimate Accomplice

{Mine. Also what's that talent lol?}

Name: Neo Disglace

{It's everyone favorite man.}

Age: 18

Bust: N/A

Height: 5'6

Weight: 120 lb

Ultimate Talent: Ultimate Wizard

{Mine.}

Name: Kai Amelia

Age: 18

Bust: C

Height: 5'7

Weight: 135 lb

Ultimate Talent: Ultimate Fencer

{Not mine.}

Name: Gavin Cavine

Age: 18

Bust: N/A

Height: 5'1

Weight: 103 lb

Ultimate Talent: Ultimate Gardner

{*happy noises* I love this man! (He's mine.)}

Name: Dexter Bloodscale

Age: 18

Bust: N/A

Height: 6'0

Weight: 147 lb

Ultimate Talent: Ultimate Acoholic

{Mine. Also his talent is kinda illegal, but the law never applied in this world.}

Name: Athena Rom

Age: 18

Bust: A

Height: 5'6

Weight: 124 lb

Ultimate Talent: Ultimate Successor

{Mine.}

Name: Erin Dunez

Age: 18

Bust: Flat

{Pfft.}

Height: 5'7

Weight: 115 lb

Ultimate Talent: Ultimate Scientist

{Mine.}

Name: Lola Grapprin

Age: 18

Bust: E

Height: 5'5

Weight: 156 lb

Ultimate Talent: Ultimate Origami Artist

{Best girl! Mine.}

Name: Jamie Echoes

Age: 18

Bust: N/A

Height: 5'6

Weight: 142 lb

Ultimate Talent: Ultimate Bookworm

{Mine.}

Name: Skyler Hart

Age: 18

Bust: N/A

Height: 5'7

Weight: 119 lb

Ultimate Talent: Ultimate Peace Keeper

{Mine.}

Name: Bonnie Bolt

Age: 18

Bust: DD

Height: 5'8

Weight: 156 lb

Ultimate Talent: Ultimate Surgeon

{Mine.}

Name: Zoey Shanghai

Age: 18

Bust: C

Height: 5'7

Weight: 147 lb

Ultimate Talent: Ultimate Bodygaurd

{Not mine.}

01: Scarlet Angel

Intercom: Everyone, report to the gym for a special announcement!

I got out of bed and made my way to the gym. Once everyone was there, Noirkuma popped out of the stage.

Noir: Alright, it's motive time.

Lola: Motive? Like a reason to do something?

{I've only had Lola for one "prolonge" but if anybody hurts her-}

Noir: Exactly!

Bonnie: But in this case your referring to our motive to kill someone, yeah?

{Who gave you access to the script?}

Noir: Correct.

Taylor: What's our motive, stuffed bear?!

Noir: Your first motive is called Criminal Minds.

{*insert that noise you make when something is cringy*}

Sky: Isn't that a TV show?

{I have only seen a single episode of that show. It was pretty cool.}

Erin: What does it fucking do?!

Noir: Every one of you have a committed a pardonable criminal. Kill someone and get away with it; you'll be pardoned.

{Translation: Kill and you will be paraded for your undisclosed crime.}

Enoja: What if we don't kill anyone?

Noir: You'll all die!

Athena: W-what?!!

Taylor: I'm too sexy to die, though.

{She is pretty, though. The best bicon.}

Bonnie: Guess one of us needs to plot a murder...

{You've given up so easily, it's kinda funny.}

Kai: Stay away from Bonnie she's planning to kill us.

{Kai being the only one with a working braincell.}

Noirkuma disappeared while we argued.

{It's like part 3 and Cody hasn't said a word.}

Erin: Which one of you cunts is planning to kill someone?! I'll take you out now.

{Language! That is not a very nice word, Erin!}

Hail: Wouldn't that make you a killer?~

{Does it make me sound smoother if my sentence ends with this?~}

Erin: Agrhh...

Bonnie: Since all of you are stupid little whores, I'll guide you.

{This dialogue is so bad. I was exposed to Brandon Rogers at too young of an age and it shows.}

Enoja: What's that supposed to mean?! You were talking about killing us earlier!

Bonnie: Yeah, so?

{Bonnie is the best character. I love how unhinged she is already and nobody has died yet.}

Enoja: Your not making any sense!

Dexter: Though, I agree with you Enoja, a leader would be nice.

{When did he say that?}

Jamie: When the stress of the killing game weighing us down, someone acting as a guide would be beneficial.

Lola: So many big words...

{11 year old me after writing that line.}

Athena: A leader would be nice.

Kai: What if they turn on us? Betray us?

{Who gave you access to the script?}

Zoey: We'll to pick someone trustworthy.

Cho: Like N-

Dexter: Taylor. You seem to be keeping your cool.

Taylor: Yeah. I'll be a great leader.

Athena: Then, it's decided.

Gavin: We've already explored the place...

{Lazy writing alert!}

Lola: Really?

Athena: I don't remember.

Bonnie: Let's give the slow ones a recap.

Cody: In the kitchen Jamie and I discovered that we have enough food to last forever since Noirkuma told us that they restock every so offend.

{So offend? *insert laughing emoji here*}

Sky: There's a cafeteria beside the kitchen, with a 16 chair table. Just enough seats for all of us. And a restroom beside the cafeteria's exit.

Zoey: There's a group of classrooms that contains special equipment.

Kai: Yeah. Science Lab, Art Room, a Drama Classroom and a Music Classroom.

Neo: The library has a computer, though it doesn't work...

Hail: There's also a door connecting the library to the outside area. There's a 100 ft tall concrete fence, making to where we can't leave.

Cho: There's a swimming pool.

{They have the entire school unlocked instantly, holy crap.}

Gavin: We have locker rooms to change into our swim suit, which are found in our dorm. We have to use our Jen Pad to enter.

{Jen Pads are like their MonoPads. I think their name is explained later.}

Taylor: The teddy bear said boys couldn't go in the girls locker room and vis versa.

{Nonbinary people: ...}

Cho: Oh, there's another restroom near the swimming pool.

Cody: The dorms are simple. A closet with clothes, a desk and a bed. Outside our dorm are nameplates, showing who's dorm is who's.

Bonnie: We need a person's specific Jen Pad to enter their dorm, without them opening the door or it being open.

Erin: That's fucking it! Hope you two remember now.

{That's actually really nice. 2 people didn't remember so the entire group gave them a recap.}

Sky: They passed out.

Lola: Huh. That's why we don't know.

Athena: Makes sense...

Gavin: I have an idea. Why don't we met every morning in the cafeteria?

Bonnie: To make sure we're all alive and shit? I like it!

Afterwards we dispersed all over the perimeter.

{That's a big kid 7th grader sentence right there.}

Free Time

I scanned the area and saw Neo sitting under a tree alone. I decided to join him.

{Leave him alone. He got two very cringy books and we've seen enough of him.}

Cody: Hi Neo.

Neo: Oh, hey Cody. I'm not much of a extrovert, or a talker in general...

{LGMDF and SGAYOF readers: We know.}

Cody: That's fine. I just didn't want you to be lonely.

Neo: It's fine. Hail will probably show up after annoying a few people.

Cody: You seem to know Hail, more then the rest of us. Are you two friends?

{More like a onesided friendship.}

Neo: It's hard to tell sometimes. But, I think so.

Cody: How did you two met?

Neo: Our parents were friends.

Cody: Oh, I'm sorry I have to go. It was nice talking to you.

{Wow. Way to be subtle in not liking him, Cody.}

Neo: Alright...

Neo's isn't an extrovert. Though, he's not hot-headed or paranoid like a lot of the other people. I guess he's okay, though I'd like to talk to some other people next time.

Free Time End

I decided to stop by the kitchen for snack. In there, I saw Cho cooking something on the stove and Hail sitting at the bar waiting for her to finish.

Cho: Hey Cody. Wanna join us?

Hail: Cho's making me ravioli! She's so nice.

Cho: I'm making a lot, and I don't think Hail and I can eat it by ourselves.

Cody: I guess I'll join. I did come for some food.

I sat beside Hail and waited for Cho to finish.

Cho: Here we are. Some nice homemade ravioli.

{I think the only reason I had Cho make food for Hail is because my friend pointed out that she(?)'s underweight.}

Cho set three plates of ravioli on the bar area. She sat beside me and we ate her delicious dish.

Hail: You should make pancakes for breakfast tomorrow! I could for some pancakes within the next 10 hours...

{Don't check my math, it's probably wrong lol.}

I noticed Hail ate really fast, as if she was starving. Cho gave her a second serving of ravioli, before responding to her request.

{...I feel bad now. Hail has like the most sad backstory and I do her so dirty in like every story she's in.}

Cho: I'd be happy too. It puts a smile on my face to know your eating probably, Hailey.

I thought back to her file on the Jen Pad and then I understood. Hail weighed 98 lbs. That's extremely underweight, and unhealthy. Cho, being a chef, probably doesn't like to see that.

{I need to update the trigger list again.}

Cody: Thanks for the meal, Cho.

I handed Cho my plate when I finished eating.

Cody: Bye, see you two tomorrow!

Cho: Bye.

Hail: Sleep tight!

I noticed Hail reached for her third plate of ravioli just before I left the kitchen.

{If/When I revise this Fangan with this universe's characters, I'm gonna give Hailey the arc and development she deserves.}

I woke up to the mourning announcement and headed to the cafeteria afterwards.

Erin: Thanks for finally joining us!

Athena: We thought you died.

{Like 95% of this dialogue radiates "I don't talk to people IRL energy".}

Cody: Huh? I woke up to the mourning announcement.

Taylor: You think? That wasn't the mourning announcement.

Jamie: It was the body discovery announcement.

{This is both really funny and embarrassing at how none of the characters have a reaction to someone being dead.}

Bonnie: We're waiting for everyone to eat and wake up before we start investing. We do have to fine the killer, after all.

Lola: And if we don't?

Dexter: We all die.

Lola: Oh. Who are we waiting on?

Enoja: Gavin and Zoey.

{That's kinda sus.}

Hail: Cho's making pancakes!

Just then the two arrived in the cafeteria.

Kai: Guess what?

Zoey: What?

Gavin: Where's Sky?

{I wonder...}

Erin: He was fucking murdered last night! Which one you of did it?!

{If I had a nickel for everytime someone named Skyler died first...}

Athena: ...can we settle this after breakfast?

Hail: I couldn't agree more!

{Pancakes > finding the killer so you don't die.}

Cho pasted our a plate of pancakes for everyone. Syrup was also provided. We seemed to forget that Sky was dead. Until we finished eating.

Noir: It's time to investigate the crime scene. If you open your Jen Pads you'll find some info on the crime.

We opened our Jen Pads and found that Sky's profile had been updated with evidence on his murder.

Name: Skyler Hart

Age: 18

Bust: N/A

Height: 5'7

Weight: 119 lb

Ultimate Talent: Ultimate Peace Keeper

Time of Murder: After 10:00

{After 10:00? That's so vague.}

Weapon: ???

Room Found In: Art Room

Myself, along with Bonnie, Gavin and Jamie headed to the Art Room.

Jen Pad file Added to evidence.

Gavin: Oh my...

Sky's body was propped against the back wall. Bloody scissors, and rulers were scattered on the ground beside his body. Bloody cuts covers on his arms and wrist. Bonnie looked at the back of his head to check the wound.

Sky's Body Added.

Bonnie: Yep. That definitely a blow hard enough to kill someone.

{Why were the scissors there if the killer killed him by hitting him in the head?}

Bonnie's Account Added.

Gavin: Is that a a blood trail?

Cody: Where does it lead?

Jamie: It seems to lead to his room.

We followed the trail to Sky's room where we found Athena, Dexter and Enoja investing there.

{Either the Art Room was near Sky's room or the Sky lost all the blood in his body to make that trail.}

Dexter: Do you know where the blood trails ends?

Bonnie: In the Art Room. Where Sky's body was found.

Athena: Wouldn't that mean he was killed in his room then?

Jamie: Exactly.

Blood Trail Added.

Bonnie: No offense but this place is a mess. Are all the guys room like this?

{This implies a fight broke out, maybe. I think.}

I looked around to find a broken lamp on the floor, with a popped pilliow case and a few bloody feathers on the ground.

Broken Lamp Added.

Popped Pilliow and Feathers Added.

Cody: I'm going to check out what the others found.

I walked into the hallway. I saw Neo and Hail outside of Hail's dorm.

Hail: Cody we figured something cool out!

Cody: What is it?

Neo: The walls are soundproof.

{I was going to insult Neo here, but I couldn't think of anything that sounds cool. :/}

Hail: If we all had out doors closed and were in our rooms at the time of the murder we wouldn't have heard anything.

Hail's Account Added.

Cody: Thanks. I'm going to head to cafeteria.

On my way, I saw Erin, Taylor and Cho outside the girls restroom.

Taylor: Yo, Cody! Come take a look at this!

I went over to the girls but, stopped as they walked into the bathroom.

Cho: Oh.

Erin: It's fine! It's for the sake of fucking evidence!

Erin pulled me in the restroom.

{O-Okay then.}

Taylor: Look at that. Pilliow feathers in the shower drain.

Erin: It's fucking gross!

Cho: We thought maybe it could be connected to something else.

Cody: Hmm. Yeah. A busted pilliow was found in Sky's room.

Popped Pillow and Feathers Updated.

Erin: Pheww. I was about to request Noirkuma to clean these if they were naturally this disgusting!

Cody: I going to check out some other stuff.

I made my way back to the Art Room to examine Sky's body again before the trial.

Lola: Hey Cody, why is there glass here? Glass isn't part of the human body according to my biology teacher...

{This is a reference to LGMDF. Somehow...?}

Lola was holding up a small piece of glass from the lamp. There was a few more on the floor. I also saw some bloody feathers.

Broken Lamp Updated.

Popped Pilliow and Feathers Updated.

Intercom: Everyone report to the gym. It's time for a Class Trial!

We all made our way to the gym, preparing our evidence to expose the killer.

-Evidence-

{The best part about this Fangan is the Deadly Life. Everything else is cringe and dry or both.}

Jen Pad- Time of Murder: After 10:00 pm Weapon: ??? Room Found In: Art Room

Sky's Body- Head trauma, bloody cuts all over arms and wrists, bloody scissors and rulers around body with some scattered small pieces of glass and bloody feathers.

Bonnie's Account- the blunt object that Sky was hit with killed him.

Blood Trail- there a trail of blood from Sky's room leading to the Art Room.

Broken Lamp- a broken lamp was found in Sky's room. Some of its glass was found in the Art Room near Sky's body.

{Broke Lamp Evidence? I wonder what it contains.}

Popped Pilliows and Feathers- a busted Pilliow was found in Sky's room, and feather were found in Sky's room, the Art Room and the girl's bathroom next to the cafeteria.

Hail's Account- the walls are sound proof.

Trial Begin

Noir: The way class trials work is all of you must talk and discuss evidence to find the killer. When your ready, you'll all vote on the killer. If you vie correctly the killer will be executed. If you vote incorrectly, everyone but the killer will be executed. Now, let's do some debating!

Lola: Hmm. When was Sky killed? It was in our sleep, right?

Jen Pad.

Cody: According to the Jen Pad, the time of murder was after 10:00 pm. Meaning it was nighttime.

Bonnie: The pool, lockers rooms by the pool, gym and outside area are all restricted at nighttime.

Erin: Yeah? Your point is?

Taylor: Meaning the killer couldn't have gone there.

Athena: Then, what did they have access too?...

Art Room.

Cody: The group of classrooms. More specifically, the Art Room. They took Sky's body there after killing him.

{Cody is speed running this trial. What he lacks in the Daily Life he makes up for by being OP during the Deadly Life.}

Zoey: If we were all in our rooms, how did he die? The rooms are safe, right?

Kai: What if they stopped to talk to him before he closed his door?

Gavin: That's very possible. I saw a lot of people group up and chat before they went to bed.

Erin: Great! Now, we're back to square one!

Jamie: Not exactly. We now know how Sky was murdered.

Enoja: What about the murder weapon?

Broken Lamp.

Bonnie's Account.

Cody: Remember the broken lamp in his room, Enoja?

Enoja: Yeah.

Cody: The killer hit him in the head with that, killing him instantly.

{What about the scissors? Did everyone forget about those?}

Athena: ...oh my.

Cho: What an awful way to go...

Dexter: What about the busted pilliow?

Cody: Umm... It-

Hail: It was a diversion!

Erin: The fucks that supposed to mean?!!

Hail: I checked the pilliows. They don't have feathers in them.

{Where could the feathers have come from? If only there was a participant that had feather attached to their body.}

Bonnie: Wait, Taylor?

Taylor: Yeah?

Bonnie: Your the Ultimate Harpy. Don't you have wings?

Taylor: Yeah. Why?

Popped Pilliow and Feathers.

Cody: We found feathers in three different places related to the crime. They were all the same.

Erin: Plus, we found them in the girls restroom.

{Wait, eww. The shower was in the public restroom.}

Taylor: Huh? Are you saying I killed Sky?!

Hail: Naw. We just suspect you. That's all!

Bonnie: Innocent until proven guilty.~

{NO! You're doing it too!}

Lola: Braking a lamp makes a sound right? Why didn't we hear it?

Hail's Account.

{This trial is so easy. I retract my statement about the Deadly Life being the best part.}

Cody: The walls are sound proof. The killer closed the door once they entered Sky's room, making us not here anything that happened inside the room.

Cho: What about all the bloody scissors and rulers on the ground? What were they for?

Hail: Another diversion. If Bonnie wasn't here to share her doctor knowledge then, we could've thought that Sky bleed to death.

Athena: So how did things play out?...

Dexter: Who's our killer?

{It's so funny how Cody goes straight to the closing argument.}

Cody: Sky was about to go inside his room, when our killer stopped him. The killer, once everyone went inside their rooms, went inside Sky's room with Sky in it. They grabbed the lamp and hit Sky on the head with it, killing him instantly. The killer then dragged his body to the Art Room. They tampered with evidence to make it look like Sky bleed to death, though we know that didn't happen. The killer returned to Sky's room and busted a pilliow open to make it look like the the feathers come from the killer. And she, our killer is a she because feathers were found in the girls bathroom and she's the only one with wings, is none other the Taylor Hoppkins.

Cho: Taylor?!

Athena: I thought you were our leader...

Taylor: I am your leader! I fucking comfort you! Cody's the damn liar!

{I dunno... Cody's the protagonist and therefore is never wrong.}

Dexter: Taylor, are you really?...

Taylor: Cody's a liar! I bet he killed Sky!

Cody: Taylor, I don't know what to say-

Taylor: Of course you don't, you guilty killer! How dare you take advantage of sweet little Sky!

Hail: How do you know Cody could take advantage of Sky?

Taylor: Because I did it last night!

{*gasp*}

Bonnie: Ha! Guess somebody's guilty?~

Taylor: Wha-

Athena: Taylor?...

Gavin: ...

Cho: Did you really?...

Enoja: You killed, Sky. Didn't you?...

Dexter: And I trusted you. We all did...

Taylor: ...

Jamie: I guess we should vote, now.

{Way to kill the mood, Jamie.}

We all voted.

Noir: Ding, ding! You voted correctly!

Taylor: I'm...

Noir: I've prepared a execution for Taylor, the Ultimate Harpy!

Taylor: ...I'm so sorry, guys. I- I wanted to go home...

Hail: Don't we all?...

Noir: It's punishment time!

Noirkuma slammed a hammer down and Taylor execution started.

Execution: Feather Duster

A chained coller came down and cuffed around Taylor's neck. It brought her up really high, really fast. Taylor was terrified, though she hid behind a face of confidence. She was then brought down fast and dragged across the floor mutiple times. It got faster and faster. Noirkuma began to chuckle. Taylor was the dropped through the floor, killing her instantly...

Cho: Did she... *cries*

Lola: The floor... *sobs*

Athena: She's gone...

{There's actually a reaction to someone dying, character development has been achieved.}

Dexter: That's what you get for committing murder.

Bonnie: You know you'd do the same. Surely, you'd kill to go home to your family.

Dexter: ...

{Dexter backstory potential horribly wasted. *shaking my head*}

Gavin: *sniffles* Maybe we should have some dinner and head to bed? Cho?

Cho: I'm on it.

Hail: Can you make Mac and Cheese? Pretty please?!

{Someone just died... Time to eat some mac and cheese!}

Cho: I can't say no to that.

Hail: Yay!

Erin: I'm going to my room. And you fuckers better not follow me.

Bonnie: Whatever, whore.

{I kid you not, this is how their enemies to lovers starts.}

Erin stomped away to her room as we waited on our meal.

02: Fate Vines

Before Sky's death and Taylor's death everyone gathered in the cafeteria for breakfast. Now, it's just a few of us. Those being Cho, Lola, Jamie, Gavin, Neo, Hail, Athena and myself. No Bonnie, Zoey, Kai, Erin, Enoja or Dexter.

{Hailey and Athena are here, so we're good.}

Lola: What do we got today, Master Chef?~

Cho: Bacon and eggs, with a side of toast.

Bonnie: That's sounds pretty basic, if you ask me.

Everyone turned to the hallway, as Bonnie walked in.

Jamie: Sometimes, basic is better.

{Is that why you have a crush on Cody?}

Bonnie: I guess...

Athena: Yesterday... I don't think... I can do this...

{She's losing it already.}

Gavin: We're here for you, Athena.

Athena: What if, you guys betray me and I die... Like Sky and Taylor... I don't want to be murdered!

{Good thing you don't get murdered.}

Athena left the table in panic and dashed to her room. We all looked around at each other wondering what to do.

Lola: Should I follow her?

Neo: Give her some alone time.

Bonnie: That's probably best.

Lola: Okay, then...

After breakfast we dispersed, like always. I didn't really have anything to do and I decided to hang out with my classmates.

Free Time

I decided to hang out with Cho. She seems nice and her food is delicious.

Cody: Hey Cho.

Cho: Hi Cody. What brings you to my side of the kitchen?

Cody: Well, you seem like the safest person who isn't locking their selves in they're room to talk to right now. And your really nice.

Cho: Aww, thanks. I suppose we should make conversation somehow. Anything specific you want to talk about?

Cody: How do you feel about all this? The killing game, the other people, motives. That stuff.

Cho: Well, not everyone will make it out but those who do, can prevent it from happening again.

{Everyone is so negative. Where's Lola to be the hopeful one?}

Cody: Right. I'll leave you to your cooking.

Cho's really nice and I'm glad not everyone here is like Erin. To bad Athena's locked in her room. She's seems really nice, too. As well as, Lola. Though, she probably playing in the Art Room.

I left Cho and began to walk around. As I passed the outside area I saw Neo alone. I decided to pay him a visit.

Cody: Hi Neo.

Neo: Huh? Oh. Hey Cody... Did you need something?

{My friend kept wanting to hang out with Neo because they liked him from LGMDF and our Roleplay. Did I mention that are these characters originated from a Roleplay?}

Cody: I came to talk to you again.

Neo: Cool.

Cody: If you don't mind me asking, why do you seem so bored? I don't know if it's your tone but, you don't really show expression when you talk.

Neo: I guess I'm just annoyed to be here.

Cody: I guess that's one way to describe this killing game...

Neo: Sorry if I'm boring you. I don't show much expression around others. Excluding Hail.

Cody: I see.

Neo: ...

Cody: I'm going to go now. Bye!

Neo: Oh. Okay. Bye...

Free Time End

Intercom: Please head to the gymnasium. It's super duper important!

I made my way to the gym.

Dexter: Where are those two? They're taking forever!

Cody: Who?

Zoey: Erin and Bonnie.

{Fastest enemies to lovers ever, holy sh*t.}

Hail: What if they turned their hatred into love?~

{That is what happened.}

Kai: That seems unlikely...

Lola: That's less of a possibility then them have a battle to the death.

Athena: D-death?!!

Cho: Stop, your scaring Athena. I'm sure their both okay.

Jamie: There they are.

Bonnie: Perfectly unharmed!

Erin: I wish I could say the same...

{Uh... What does that imply?}

Noirkuma appeared out of nowhere, as expected.

Noir: I bet all of you youngsters are dying to hear your next motive.

Enoja: What's our motive, Noirkuma?

Noir: I call it Snuggle Buddies!

Hail: Kinky.~

Kai: How does it work?

Noir: I assigned all of you a sleeping partner. You pick between one of your rooms to sleep in each night.

{The motive is literally having a forced sleepover with the same person every night.}

Cho: I don't get how this will motivate us to kill someone.

Noir: Well, if you dislike your buddy-

Erin: You know we'll never do that.

Noir: Everyone, look at your left wrist.

We all looked down and there was a metal bracelet on each of our left wrists.

Noir: Tap it and you'll see your buddy, a target I assigned for you to kill and your reward.

{They have targets too?}

Bonnie: Do we have to kill our target?

{I stole the target thing from the Fangan that inspired this one.}

Noir: No, but you won't get the reward that way.

Erin: Why would you ask that?!

Bonnie: You see.~

And like that Noirkuma was gone.

Gavin: Let's tell everyone our sleeping buddy. Just so we know. I'm with Dexter.

Dexter: That's better then what I expected.

Gavin: Thanks?

Lola: I got Enoja!

Enoja: Awesome...

{I think I paired opposite gender together because Lola is a lesbian and Enoja is like probably gay.}

Hail: Yes! I got Neo.

Neo: ...

Cho: Looks I'm with you Athena.

Athena: Okay.

I tapped my bracelet.

Buddy: Jamie Echoes

{This chapter was not so subtle ship fuel.}

Target: Hailey Floud

Reward: A new friend.

{Cody is lonely. :(}

I don't understand my reward, plus I don't want to kill anyone.

Cody: Your my buddy, Jamie.

Jamie: Wonderful. I got lucky on this one.

Erin: What's that supposed to fucking mean?!!

Bonnie: Asking pointless questions will be your downfall. Oh, look! We're buddies!

Erin: Fucking damn shit!!

Lola: That's not an expression.

{It is now, because our queen said it.}

Kai: Guess your with me Zoey. I'll try not to kill you in your sleep.

Zoey: You too.

{These two are so chill compared to everyone else.}

Noir: Lucky us! It's nighttime. Lights out.

We all headed to our rooms, prepared for a different kind of night.

I woke up before Jamie. I decided to wait until he woke up before I went to the cafeteria. I'd rather we go together. Then he woke up.

{Cody: *causally wakes Jamie sleep because he's that awkward and doesn't know it's weird*}

Jamie: You ready to head to the cafeteria, Cody?

Cody: Yeah. Let's go.

We made our way to the cafeteria. I noticed Athena wasn't there, but Cho was.

Cody: Where's Athena?

Cho: She won't be joining us.

Cody: Oh.

Lola: I'm starting to worry about her.

Hail: Your just now doing that?

Lola: That wasn't very nice!

Hail: I'm not very nice.

{Hail like's an angel compared to Bonnie and Erin.}

Lola: You were all 'yay pancakes' like three days ago. What happened?

Hail shifts uncomfortably in her seat.

{...that's concerning.}

Hail: ...nothing. I'm just hard for all of you to read.

Bonnie: Sup, losers.

Bonnie walked in late. Erin with her.

Dexter: Look who finally joined us.

Erin: Shut your shithole, Dexter!

{*laughs*}

Dexter: Why don't you close your legs, whore?

{Dude. That's not okay. We're cancelling Dexter.}

Bonnie: Only I can insult her. So shut your face, Dexter.

{The enemies to lovers is here,}

Dexter: All the the hot lesbians are so mean to me...

{Aren't you gay? Also- We're cancelling Dexter. Again.}

Cho: Wh-

Hail: How dare you! I'm offended!

{You aren't even a lesbian! You and Athena are like the only non-lesbians here.}

Lola: I don't even know what kind of bug a lesbian is so, yeah. I have to sit the one out.

{This joke does not land. Also I think Lola is actually aroace, but I didn't know that was a thing yet.}

Enoja: Really, Lola? And I thought I was the stupid one.

Gavin: Guess you thought wrong.

Zoey: How did we go from Hailey to lesbians?

Kai: The same way we went from school to a killing game.

Zoey: And that is?

Kai: By-

Lola: We should have party! With cake and games and cake and-

{We're trapped in a death game. So naturally we should have a party where we lower our guards because nothing can possibly go wrong.}

Enoja: Cake?

Lola: No. I was going to say dancing. But we'll have cake too.

Bonnie: Who will plan this party?

Lola: Me! ...and anyone who wants to help.

Cho: I can make the food.

Gavin: I can do decorations.

Dexter: I suppose I'll assist Gavin.

{Gay gay homosexual gay.}

Kai: I'll still trying to accept the fact that we're having a party.

{Kai being the smartest on here is funny, because Kai was supposed to be the dumb character.}

Zoey: I guess that will be good for our spirits.

Lola: Yep! That's why Lola thought of it!

{Lola speaks in third person now?}

Kai: Oh no, she's taking in third person. Leave while you still can!

Kai got up and left. We were all unphased. Except for Lola who felt a little offended by Kai's comment.

Free Time

Since I wasn't helping with the party I decided to hang out with Jamie. He was in the library reading. I hope I'm not bothering him.

Cody: Hey Jamie.

Jamie: Hi Cody. I thought you'd be help with the party.

Cody: I'm not really good at planning or setting up events. It's just not my thing. What about you? Why stay in the library?

Jamie: It's peaceful. And I like all the books. I am the Ultimate Bookworm, after all.

{The Ultimate Bookworm liking to read? What a shock.}

Cody: Yeah, it is peaceful. So is this what you do in your spare time?

Jamie: Pretty much. Sometimes I chat with Erin about Science Fiction, though that normally results in me being called an uncultured swine for not knowing as much about science as she does. It's kinda funny, actually.

Cody: Hehe, I bet. Do you have a favorite genre of book?

Jamie: I read a lot, though I find myself reading more fiction and expository, or information texts. I can't say I have a favorite genre though. I love all books. What about you?

Cody: This might seem weird but for some reason I like those preteen adventure books, with romance and comedy sprinkles in. I feel like I should read books aimed more torwards my age.

{*coughs in Percy Jackson*}

Jamie: I really like those too. Plus, most of the books for our age are those sappy romances. I don't have a problem with them but, they don't seem like your style.

Cody: Yeah, that's not. I'll stick to my adventure books. I'm going to leave you to your. Bye Jamie.

Jamie: Bye Cody.

I realized I still had some time left. For some reason I decided to talk to Hail.

Hail: Cody, come with me!

Hail grabbed my hand and took us to the swimming pool.

Hail: You gotta be quiet, now.

Cody: Okay?...

{They are peaking on the lesbians.}

Hail and I hid behind a beach chair, near the pool. Erin and Bonnie were in the pool. Erin was wearing a black one piece and her hot pink hair was in two high buns rather them her normal low pigtails. Bonnie had a fairly revealing white with purple stripes bikini and some of her blonde hair was pulled into a ponytail while the rest was down. This was different then her normal hair, which was down.

{This is the best and like only description we get of any characters all book. Also, can you tell what my favorite couple is yet?}

Cody: What are-

Hail: Shhhh.

Hail covered my mouth, not trusting me to be quite.

Erin: Last night was-

Bonnie: Your first time?~

{They actually had sex, lmao what?! I was like 12 when I wrote this!}

Erin: Yeah. I've just never felt so much emotion before. It's scary but, nice.

Bonnie: You in a swimsuit is nice.~

Erin: Can we talk serious before we go into flirty stuff?

Bonnie: Yeah sure. Go ahead.

Erin: What if... What if we don't make it out of this killing game? Or one of us dies? I can't lose you... You mean too much.

{These two are the only characters with any sort of development throughout this entire story.}

Bonnie: That's not going to happen. I may have considered it before but, now I promise you I won't kill anyone if you don't.

{The death flags...}

Erin: I promise.

Bonnie and Erin share a lot kiss before Erin unties Bonnie's bikini top causing it to fall off in the pool. That's when I look away.

{In the pool?! Do you know how dirty public pools are?!}

Bonnie: I see you wanna play dirty. Don't you?~

Erin just giggles as Bonnie tickles her, I think.

{This is very cute. But Bonnie is like half naked.}

Hail: If only Neo would go swimming with me... Then my life would be perfect.~

{Hailey has this one sided crush on Neo and it makes me sad to think.}

I don't want to be involved in whatever this is anymore and I leave. I guess Hail was right about Erin and Bonnie's hatred turning to love. I really don't know what to think of Hail anymore. Or Bonnie and Erin for that matter. They're always teasing each other. I wonder when it stopped being legit and became an act to hide their relationship?

Free Time End

{Finally.}

At last, it was time for Lola's party. Everyone but Neo was there. All 13 people in a room together breaking into groups of choas and more choas.

Hail: Dexter spiked the punch. Pass it on.

{It's very clear I have never been to a party before.}

Hail informed me before going to talk to Cho. I turned to Kai, who was standing fairly close to me.

Cody: According to Hail, Dexter spiked the punch.

Kai: Sweet!

Kai made her way to the punch bowl. The Hail came back over to me with a cup of punch.

Hail: Cody you should try some.

Cody: No thank you.

Hail: Please? Just taste a tiny, itty bitty drop. For me!

Cody: Just a little bit.

{Cody gave into peer pressure so fast-}

Hail: Alright.

I drank the punch for 3 seconds then handed the cup back to Hail.

{That's like half the cup or something.}

Hail: Thank you for service!

Cody: Yeah. No problem.

I then made my way to Athena who and started chatting about crushes. I'm not sure how I got involved in the conversation.

Athena: I'm into Zoey or Bonnie for the girls. For guys I have to say Dexter or maybe Enoja. You?

{50/50 Bicon.}

Cody: I'm not really into the girls here. Or most girls in general... Though, for guys definitely Jamie.

{Cody is bisexual, but looking back on this he seems demiromantic as well..}

Athena: Your lucky you get to sleep with your crush.

Cody: I wouldn't really call him a crush-

Athena: It's okay to have a crush. Most people do. Even-

Athena passed out mid sentence and luckily, I caught her. I noticed she wasn't the only one passing out. My eyes closed and I slowly sat down, not wanting to fall...

{You just let her fall?}

I woke up around the same time everyone else did. A grusome site awaited us.

Athena: No... not again... Please... T-tell me it's just a bad dream... That I'll be waking up soon...

Kai: Uh... Okay...

Erin: Who's mind is this broken?! What kind of insane bashit person are you?!

Before us was the body of Lola Grappin, the Ultimate Origami Artist. Her body was tied to the wall of the cafeteria. A pentagram of blood, her blood, surrounded her. Their was a cut on her arm from a knife maybe?

{This scene makes absolutely no sense considering who the killer is.}

Athena: I can't take this! We're all going to die playing this damn game!

{The build up for Athena's snap makes a lot of sense (considering my writing skills) and I like how I "somewhat" forshadowed it.}

We all stood there in awe, or terror while the body announcement went off. That was our que to start investigating.

Neo joined us for the investigation.

Gavin: The Jen Pad file was updated.

I check Lola's file.

Name: Lola Grapprin

Age: 18

Bust: E

Height: 5'5

Weight: 156 lb

Ultimate Talent: Ultimate Origami Artist

Time of Murder: ???

Weapon: Vadika Bottle

Room Found In: Cafeteria

Erin: This thing it won't tell us the fucking time of murder! Zero damn consistency!

Cody: Last time the weapon played a big part of the case. Maybe time is really important for this one.

Bonnie: That makes sense. Everyone, excluding Neo and the killer was passed out during the murder.

{They just didn't invite Neo lol.}

Jen Pad file added to evidence.

Enoja: Dexter, you spiked the punch, yeah?

Dexter: Yes. I spiked it with alcohol.

Enoja: What did you use?

Dexter: Vadika.

Erin: That means he fucking did it!

Gavin: Not exactly.

{Yeah Gavin! Defend your boyfriend.}

Jamie: The killer could've grabbed the first thing they saw, that was light enough to carry and used that.

Jamie's Account added.

I examined Lola's body again. There was a cut her arm. I don't think it was caused by a knife, though.

Cody: Hey Bonnie?

Bonnie: Yeah?

Cody: What do you think this was caused by?

Bonnie: Let's see.

Bonnie looked down and stared at some bloody glass shards.

Bonnie: Those little things caused all this blood.

Cody: Aright then.

Glass shards added.

Gavin: Cody, you know the tape and rope holding Lola to the wall?

Cody: Yeah? What about it?

Gavin: I saw some tape in the boys bathroom floor earlier, just before the party. I didn't think anything of it at the time.

{I don't think tape would hold a body to the wall...}

Tape in Boys Bathroom added.

I began to investigate the punch bowl.

Cody: Dexter, do you still have some Vadika left from spiking the punch bowl?

Dexter: Uhh, yeah why?

Cody: We're going to set up a little experiment.

I poured a cup of Dexter's Vadika and a cup of punch. I then gave the Vadika to Hail and the punch to Neo. About 10 minutes later Neo passed out.

Drink Experiment added.

Erin: Cody! Get your ass over here!

I went over to Cho and Erin who were on the ground close to the end of the table.

Cho: We found something. Look.

Under the table was some duck tape, that held a small piece of rope to the bottom of the table.

Erin: Since Lola was crucified with tape and rope I thought maybe the killer stashed the rope under the table and cut it with something, uneven. I mean look at the end of this rope! It's like they were cutting it with fucking glass!

Cody: You might be on to something, Erin.

Rope Under Table added.

Glass Shards updated.

I made my way back to Gavin.

Cody: You mentioned seeing rope in the bathroom, earlier?

Gavin: Yeah, over here.

Gavin and I went to the boys bathroom and found a hanger on one of the stall doors. And that toilet was clogged for some reason.

{Somebody pulled a Nekomaru.}

Hanger In Bathroom added.

Clogged Toilet added.

Gavin: You think the killer made preparations in advance? And as we started to wake up they could dispose of the all the evidence?

Cody: That seems very likely.

Gavin went back in the stall with the clogged toilet.

Gavin: Cody look, is that a glove? In the toilet?...

Jamie: It seems too much clothing was flushed. As if the killer was in a hurry to dispose of evidence quickly.

{These are powerful toilets if they could flush any clothes to begin with.}

Clogged Toilet updated.

Jamie: Oh, I'm sorry to intrude but it's time to start the trail.

Cody: Okay, thanks Jamie.

I hope I have enough evidence. Maybe the others got some info on the time. Because that's the one thing I didn't get.

-Evidence-

Jen Pad File- Time of Murder: ??? Weapon: Vadika Bottle Room Found In: Cafeteria

Jamie's Account- the killer didn't plan on the weapon they'd so they just grabbed the first thing they saw

Glass Shards- glass was found next to Lola's body and was most likely used to cut the rope from under the table

Tape in Boys Bathroom- there was tape in the boys bathroom before the party

Drink Experiment- the punch was drugged, not the alcohol

Rope Under Table- a cut rope was taped to the table. It look like it was cut with a piece of broken glass

Hanger in Bathroom- there was a hanger on the stall with a clogged toilet, implying that the killer flushed thief clothes down the and changed into clean ones

Clogged Toilet- the toilet was clogged with the killers dirty clothes

Trial Begin

Erin: Which one of you fucking cunts killed the dump one?!

{Erin, you really need to control your language.}

Bonnie: That won't work.

Erin: At least I tried.

Enoja: Shouldn't it be obvious?

Athena: I-it should?...

Hail: Gone on. I'm listening for your wrong answer.~

Enoja: It was Dexter! He spiked the punch, he must have drugged the alcohol it too!

{Things really picked up from the last trial. The first person accused was the killer last time.}

Dexter: Sorry to rain your parade, but no. I didn't kill Lola.

Drink Experiment.

Cody: The alcohol wasn't drugged. Just the punch.

Jamie: Which everyone, except the killer, drank.

{And Neo. He didn't show up, remember?}

Hail: Oh? But I didn't drink any.~

Athena: Y-you didn't?...

Hail: Yeah. Because I killed Lola.

{Hail being a rival was such a bad choice. Bonnie, Erin, or Dexter would have been so much better.}

Erin: What the fuck wrong with you?!!

Kai: Yeah. You went from super childish to super weird.

Zoey: Hold on. Why would admit to the crime without any resistance?

Hail: Well, the killer didn't pass out and neither did I.

Athena: B-but, t-that's be-cause you t-throw it u-up in the b-bathroom w-with all t-the f-food you a-ate at t-he p-p-party. I h-heard you w-when I used t-he b-b-bathroom...

{Oh... I forgot it went there.}

Cho: Hail!

Hail: Sorry, Mom... As for you Athena, mind your own business.

{This is a reference to the Roleplay. Hailey called Cho mom in that.}

Bonnie: You know who the killer is then! Right?...

Hail: Yep!

Enoja: So Hail isn't the killer?

Hail: Nope!

Erin: You fucking lied earlier!

Hail: Did I?

Erin: You little-

Bonnie: We need to focus.

Jamie: The murder weapon?

Athena: I-it was a k-knife, r-right?...

Jen Pad file and Glass Shards.

Cody: No. It was the Vadika bottle and the glass shards.

Dexter: Where did the tape and rope used to tie Lola up come from? There's no way the killer had time to run to the Art and Music Rooms and get back in time to tie her up and somewhat dispose of the evidence.

Tape in Boys Bathroom and Rope Under Table.

Cody: The tape was in the boys bathroom before the party. And the rope was under the table until it was later cut by a glass shard.

Cho: The killer must have gotten blood on their cloths. They paint a pentagram in Lola's blood. How did they clean themselves off?

Hanger in Bathroom.

Cody: There was a hanger in the boys bathroom, the same one with the duck tape. The killer must brought a change of clothes knowing they'd get dirty.

Bonnie: What happened to the dirty clothes, Cody?

{Antagonist Bonnie supremacy.}

Clogged Toilet.

Cody: The killer flushed most of them down the toilet. All that was left was a rubber glove.

Erin: None of us wear gloves, though.

Cho: Enoja, didn't you have on rubber gloves? When you came to help clean for the party.

{*gasp*}

Enoja: That's just a coincidence.

Dexter: That's when he could have prepared for the murder.

Gavin: What about the weapon? He just used a normal Vadika bottle to commit the crime.

Jamie's Account.

Cody: The killer either didn't have time or couldn't sneak one pass the other. Whatever that may be the killer grabbed the closest thing that could be used as a weapon.

Zoey: Which was the Vadika bottle.

Hail: Hey Cody, gives a run down of the case. I have to make sure we vote correctly.~

Cody: The killer volunteered to help with Lola's party, only to ultimately kill her. The killer made many preparations such as bringing an extra uniform, rope, tape and drugging the punch bowl, which would later be spiked. The killer made sure not to drink any punch at the party. Once everyone else passed out the killer went to work. They grabbed a Vadika bottle and broke it on Lola's head. They then cut her with the glass to make her bleed out. The killer tied Lola's dead body to the wall with the rope and tape they brought. The killer proceeded to draw a pentagram around Lola's body to through us off. Afterwards, the went into the boys bathroom and changed their uniform. The flushed the old uniform, along their gloves. They then left the bathroom and pretended to wake up with the rest of us. The killer is none other than, Enoja Williams!

Enoja: You must have gotten something wrong, why would I kill Lola? It's not like I was offered an entire nation or anything...

Hail leads over and taps Enoja's metal bracelet.

Buddy: Lola Grappin

Target: Lola Grappin

Reward: An entire nation of your choosing

{Where is Noirkuma gonna get an entire nation from? Ebay?}

Kai: Wow. I can't believe you fell for that.

Enoja: Guys, you don't... Actually believe Hail, right?...

Zoey: You've given us no reason to not suspect you.

Erin: You fucking sick bastard!

Dexter: How could you?...

Gavin: Lola was the mold lighter... The sprit lifter... and you fucking killed her! Why the Hell would you do such a thing!...

Bonnie: I assume we're ready to vote?

Cody: Yeah.

We all voted for Enoja.

Noir: I've prepared a special punishment for Enoja.

Enoja: Guys... Do something! You can't just let me die...

Gavin: Yes, we can. A-and that's what we will do!...

Dexter: ...Gavin? You good?

Gavin: Enoja deserves his punishment!...

Erin: Okay that's a little extreme! Even for me.

Bonnie: None of us deserve this. We're being forced to play this game, remember?

Gavin: But he-

Kai: So did Taylor. And you semi forgave her.

Gavin: Okay...

Noir: It's punishment time!

Enoja: *sobs* Noooooo!... I'm to young to die...

Noirkuma slammed the judge hammer down and Enoja's execution starts.

Execution: Thorn Beam

Enoja stood in the middle of a tightrope. Noirkuma was carefully watching him. Enoja took a step and stepped on a sharp thorn that pierced his foot. Enoja ignored the pain and took another step. He continued to hold in his pain and screams, while trying not to fall off. He was almost to the end then- Noirkuma summoned a string wind and Enoja fell, but he was holding onto the rope with his right hand. He was still holding back his screams. The thorns pierced into his hand, the blood began to flow. He wasn't falling. Then Noirkuma walked onto the tightrope like it was a crosswalk. He began to jump and it, causing it to go up and down. And the then it snapped where Enoja was holding it and he fell into a bottomless pit. Screaming the whole way down.

{This execution makes no sense what so ever.}

Athena: *harshly sobbing*

{You barely knew him.}

I noticed that our metal bracelets were gone, also meaning we had not motive once again.

Hail: Oh well. It was better him then one of us.~

Erin: How could you fucking say that?!!

Kai: Do you even have a moral compass? It really seems like you don't...

Hail: Maybe I do, maybe I don't. There's really no way to know.~

Noir: Alright, nighttime everyone. Sleep tight. Don't let the exicution guilt bite.~

And like that Noirkuma was gone again.

03: Burn & Boil

The cafeteria just keeps getting emptier and emptier. 16, to 14 to 12. It's still hard to believe we are being forced to kill each other.

{Cody, after witness 4 deaths: We're in a... killing game?}

Hail: Everyone's here together. And to think last time we were in this room together, there was was a murder. There no doubt it will happen until you can't play detectives anymore.~

Athena: W-what?!! W-w-we c-can't die h-here...

Bonnie: We have to survive. No matter what!

Erin: Yeah we fucking will!

{Famous last words.}

Dexter: Cho? What's for breakfast today?

Cho: Cinnamon rolls.

Hail: But we can't eat Athena!

{If I had a nickel for everytime Hailey made this joke, I'd have 2 nickels.}

Gavin: I probably should have mentioned this earlier, I can't have cinnamon...

Kai: Why?

Gavin: I have a cinnamon allergy that's very simulator to a peanut butter allergy.

{Is that a thing? I don't know if it is...}

Bonnie: Meaning, you could die if you eat some and don't get an EpiPen plus proper treatment?

Gavin: Yeah.

Zoey: If your going to plan a murder Bonnie, do it in your head.

Hail: Yeah! That's it more fun if we have a long confusing trial!

Kai: Do we have a doctor we could take her too?

Bonnie: I'm the closest thing you have to a doctor right now.

Kai: You know what, I'm just going to head to my room.

Kai goes to her room.

Erin: What the fuck do we do now?

Bonnie: I guess we explore there is a nurse's office now. It was locked before the first trial.

Jamie: And we forgot to check it out last time.

Bonnie: How about Erin and I check it out?

Kai: Since when do you two not want to kill each?! Did I miss something important?

{Your back already?!}

Athena: C-can I c-come?...

Erin: Ugrhh... Fine. But don't touch anything! Medicine is just science with more negative effects.

Bonnie: Excuse me?~

Erin: That's basically what you-

Kai: Are you two going to the Nurse's Office or are you going to flirt?

Erin: We're going. Sheesh! Have some fucking patience.

Bonnie, Erin and Athena then went to the the Nurse's Office while the rest of did whatever.

Free Time

I decided to hang with Dexter today. I found him drinking what I assumed was alcohol of some sort in the cafeteria.

Cody: Hi Dexter.

Dexter: Hey Cody. Want some?

Dexter held out his cup offering me some of his alcohol.

Cody: Not really-

Dexter: It's not that strong. Plus, it has a nice kick to it.

Cody: Umm, okay. I have a little.

{If I had a nickel for everytime Cody was pressure into drinking alcohol, I'd have 2 nickels.}

I took the cup from Dexter's hand and drink a little of it before quickly handing it back to him and dashed to the bathroom.

Dexter: Told you it wasn't that strong!

I heard Dexter give laugh a faint before the sound of my throwing up drowned him out.

{Why did he throw it up? Was it bad?}

Free Time End

Jamie walked out the stall beside me and noticed I was on the floor, bracing myself to throw up again.

Jamie: You okay Cody?

Cody: Yeah, just drank some alcohol... I'll be fine.

Jamie: Really? Huh. You don't strike me as the type to drink.

Cody: It was only a little and I was peer pressured...

Jamie: Do you want me to get help?

Before I could answer, I throw up in the toilet.

Jamie: On second thought, I'll wait will you until you feel better.

Cody: Thanks...

Jamie stayed with me for a bit. By the time I was feeling better, Cho had made dinner. Tonight was a turkey dinner.

Zoey: Is it just me or did any of you realize that Noirkuma hasn't given us a motive yet?

Kai: He could be giving us some cool off time or something.

Hail: I doubt it. It's probably super big and he wants to reveal it in the mourning. That's what I'd do, anyway.

{Sus...}

Gavin: ...

Dexter: Are you behind all this? The killing game? Noirkuma? Are you... The mastermind?

Hail: Huh? What do you mean?~

Dexter: Did you imprisment all of us here? ...and force us to play a killing game?

Hail: Secrets can only be kept for so long. You caught me!~

Erin: What the fuck is wrong with you?!!

Bonnie: Now for- OH MY FUCKING GOD! GAVIN ARE YOU OKAY?!

Our attention turned to Gavin who was having an allergic reaction.

{NO! Gavin!}

Bonnie: Erin, get everything ready! Dexter, grab Gavin and run like Hell to the Nurse's Office! I'm right behind you, two!

Dexter grabbed Gavin and him, Erin and Bonnie made their way to the Nurse's Office in attempt to save the Ultimate Gardner's life.

Kai: Really Cho? You couldn't have poisoned him or something? We have all this creative murders and then your failed murder attempt is using allergies?

Cho: I didn't do it... I made sure not to use cinnamon.

Jamie: Someone must have snuck into the kitchen when your back was turned and sabotaged the dinner.

{This chapter and chapter 4 are the best ones. Everything flows together so well. (In relation to my writing skills and this cringe story.)}

Athena: B-but why?...

Zoey: We don't even have a motive yet. Unless...

Cody: Unless, what?

Zoey: What if it was a distraction of some sort?

Hail: That was pretty distracting.

Kai: That didn't make any sense.

Cho: Maybe it will make sense later.

Cody: Maybe...

Before we knew it was night time.

For some weird reason I woke up in the middle of the night, my left arm is itching. I scratched a little and went bad to bed.

Intercom: Wakey, wakey, my dear students. Everyone head to the gymnasium.

As I got out of bed I happened to notice my appearance. My eye bags were terrible, and my arm looked like I'd cut myself with knife over and over. To avoid attention, I slipped on my jacket, covering my arm. Then I made my way to the gym.

Cho: Cody?...

Dexter: Did you sleep last night?...

Cody: Yeah... Why?

I began to worry that they were on to me. The killing game puts enough pressure on them. I can't let whatever is going on with me bother them too.

Erin: Then why do you look like a fucking zombie?!

Noir: That's part of the motive!

{Plants vs. Zombies.}

We turned to Noirkuma why just appeared out of nowhere.

Noir: I call it Insane Sanity.

{AKA the Despair Disease with a different name.}

Athena: H-how d-d-does it w-work?...

Noir: One student has their reality altered, meaning they may think their doing one thing but are actually doing another. One student has their mind altered, meaning everything they don't want to do, they do. And another student has their personality altered, whatever it was, changed to the opposite.

{This is dumb.}

Gavin: Who has what?

Noir: That's a secret! You have to find out yourselves.

{Honesty, I think this chapter should have no motive since the killer simply snapping on their own (with the Despair Disease to kinda "excuse" their murder) would work so much better.}

Hail: A mystery? I love mysteries!

Cho: I don't think Hail has any of them...

Kai: Noir- And he's gone.

Zoey: What should do about the infected ones?

Dexter: How about we call them the motivated ones.

Erin: It doesn't matter what we call fucking them! All that matters is we do something about it.

Bonnie: Right. We should find out who they are and *sighs* lock them their dorm so they don't hurt anyone.

{That wouldn't work because you can't lock the dorms.}

Gavin: Or themselves.

Bonnie: Right...

Dexter: And how do you expect to find them?

Jamie: That seems a little difficult, don't you think?

{Oh?}

Bonnie: Yeah, but the first two seem pretty dangerous. And I don't want anyone else to die.

Dexter: None of us do. ...so I'll help you find the inflected 3.

Zoey: I thought we were calling them the mo-

Dexter: Infected sounds better.

Zoey: Whatever... *rolls eyes*

Cho: I still don't understand how we're going to figure this out.

Bonnie: Interrogation!

Jamie: Will that-

Suddenly, the power went out. And as expected, everyone began to panic.

{It's time.}

Athena: W-what h-happened to the l-lights?!...

Dexter: Someone must have cut the power or something. Hey Erin? Could you make your way to the generator outside?

Erin: Ughh... Whatever. Bonnie, come with.

Bonnie: Alright-

I heard the footsteps of Erin and Bonnie as they left the cafeteria. Though, they sounded louder then they should have been.

Cho: What if something happens? We can't see in the dark...

Hail: A perfect time to kill someone.~

Athena: K-kill?!!...

Zoey: This is still the killing game. We plot each other's doom right under our noses.

{Zoey... Are you good?}

Gavin: Yeah...

Jamie: Though, all of this is weird. Gavin almost dying yesterday and now this black out.

Cody: What if it is just a diversion? Like Zoey said.

Dexter: I don't doubt it. Though, that's a lot of work for just a diversion...

Athena: I-it doesn't m-make any s-sense.

Then the power came back on.

Gavin: They did it. Bonnie and Erin turned the power back on.

Bonnie: Correction. The power turned itself back on.

Erin: Apparently, the power was supposed to go out from 7:30 to 7:45.

Dexter: Interesting. That's only 30 minutes after the morning announcement and nighttime officially ending.

{Somebody can do math.}

Jamie: Maybe we should dismiss this and move along with our day. A murder still hasn't occurred so we have not reason to deeply look into this.

{That's the last thing anyone should do, Jamie.}

Gavin: Good point.

Bonnie: You'll never guess what Erin, Athena and I found we explored the Nurse's Office!

Cho: Medical files?

Zoey: Drugs?

Kai: A horse!

{What?}

Erin: What? No!

Cody: Then what did you find?

Bonnie: A game room! Last one there has to play Erin at chess!

{You found a whole game room in the nurses office?}

Zoey: Sorry, but Cho and I are going to hang out.

Kai: Whatever.

Hail: Neo and I also won't be joining you guys.

Neo: Yeah.

Erin: Suit yourselves!

The 8 of us raced down the hall to the game room.

We played for an hour or so before. Something happened.

Intercom: A body has been found! Every please report to the cafeteria.

We headed to the cafeteria to find Hail and Neo standing a few feet from the body of Cho. Then, Zoey's body was on the other side of the kitchen floor.

Intercom: A body has been found!

Gavin: Why did it go off a second time?...

Neo: Because Zoey was alive for a few minutes after Cho and that counted torwards her witnessing the body.

Hail: At least 3 people have to witness the body for the announcement to go off.

{It is Ch. 3 and the BDA mechanisms are just now being mentioned. I feel bas for the people who actually read this.}

Dexter: So our killer killed 2 this time? Interesting.

Athena: ...why? T-they d-didn't d-deserve this... N-none of t-them d-did...

Athena began to harshly sob and grief for Cho and Zoey, the rest of us we doing it mentally.

Erin: Alright, let's get investigating. Cody, do your miracle magic and find important shit that will be useful in the trial.

I turned away from everyone pretending to examine things, though I pulled up my sleeve. I checked my scratch and conformed it was from a knife. I then knew I have the reality altering insanity. I can't let that stop me from gathering evidence though. Even the reality altering stuff is still in my head...

I checked Zoey and Cho's updated Jen Pad files.

Name: Cho Maddison

Age: 18

Bust: C

Height: 5'5

Weight: 137 lb

Ultimate Talent: Ultimate Pastry Chef

Time of Murder: 9:00 am

Weapon: ???

Room Found In: Cafeteria

Name: Zoey Shanghai

Age: 18

Bust: C

Height: 5'7

Weight: 147 lb

Ultimate Talent: Ultimate Bodygaurd

Time of Murder: 9:03 am

Weapon: ???

Room Found In: Cafeteria

Erin: The bear won't tell us the damn weapon!

Jen Pad files added to evidence.

Dexter: It had to be something like strangling, drowning, etc. Something bloodless.

Jamie: Like poison?

Athena: P-poison?!!

Kai: Sounds like a cruel was to go...

Bonnie: Correct you are Jamie. It looks like someone dropped a lid to the poison.

Lid On Floor added.

{So this killer when through the trouble of giving Gavin an allergic reaction and causing a blackout, only to leave the lid to the poison in the floor?}

Dexter: Whoa... Look at this.

There was an empty poison bottle inside the cabinet Dexter opened. He grabbed the lid and twisted it on. It fit perfectly.

Lid On Floor updated.

Gavin: It's weird.

Kai: What?

Gavin: It's like they were in a hurry and didn't have time to clean up.

Cody: Maybe they were. Remember the black out?

Erin: You'd have to be fucking dumb to not remember that!

Cody: You said that the power set to go off from 7:30 to 7:45 am, right?

{Love the foreshadowing, hate the execution of the actual crime.}

Dexter: I get it, now! The killer gave themselves a 15 minute window to put their plan together.

Jamie: But why choose Cho and Zoey? And how did the killer poison them?

Hail: What if the killer was targeting someone else?

Cody: What do you mean?

Hail: What if they instead were targeting me? If you look closely at this pot, the Cho using when she makes small meals, like the extra ones she made for me, you'll see some of poison stained the pot.

{The killer targeting Hail is weird when you consider their lore connction.}

Cooking Pot added.

Hail's Hypothesis added.

Erin: So your saying that the killer was actually targeting you?!!

Dexter: Reasonable, I suppose.

{Dexter. My guy. Do we need to cancel you a 3rd time?!}

Bonnie: But since you didn't eat with Cho after the black out, her and Zoey died in your place, right?

Hail: Right.

Noir: I'm bored... Time for the trial!

Athena: W-we need m-more t-time to i-investigate...

Noir: Uhh, fine! Make it quick though.

{Pushover mascot? That's a surprise.}

Cody: Did you two see any poison like this bottle in the Nurse's Office?

Athena: Y-yeah. O-only a f-few...

Erin: Like two maybe?

Cody: Chances are the killer prepped most of the crime last night. Before we had our motive.

Gavin: Why?... With no motive-

Kai: They didn't a motive. They just wanted to leave. Simple.

{There was no need for a motive. The killer killing out of pure selfishness and malice after growing to hate the group would have been so much better.}

Noir: Time's up! Time for a class trial!

We made our way to the trial room to find out which classmate killed Zoey and Cho.

{No complaints? This group expected this way too fast.}

-Evidence-

Cho's Jen Pad file- Time of Murder: 9:00 am Weapon: ??? Room Found In: Cafeteria

Zoey's Jen Pad file- Time of Murder: 9:03 am Weapon: ??? Room Found In: Cafeteria

Lid On Floor- on the floor was a lid that fit an empty bottle of poison in the cabinet

Cooking Pot- the pot Cho used to cook for herself and Zoey with had poison stained to it

Hail's Hypothesis- Hail believes she was the real target because Cho made her extra meals throughout the day using that pot that was poisoned

Trial

Gavin: Where to start?

Dexter: The killer is definitely smart. And able to work well under pressure..

.{Baby me has like +10 foreshadow skills and then -100 everything else.}

Kai: Hmm. Wait. During the investigation we established that the lid fit the bottle of poison, correct?

Lid On Floor.

Cody: The lid on the floor was in fact the lid to the poison bottle used to kill Cho and Zoey.

Gavin: Why was the killer so careless with evidence?

Erin: I know, right?! It's like they didn't even fucking try to dispose of the poison bottle!

Jamie: But that was because of the small time window.

Dexter: It was like 15 minutes, right?

Cody: Yeah. 7:30 to 7:45 am.

{I hate having to read this time over and over again, but I'm glad I actually tried during this trial and despite lack of setup, the evidence goes together.}

Bonnie: I guess you could slip your way into the kitchen, put poison a cooking pot and quickly throw the bottle in a cabinet, in 15 minutes or less.

Kai: That's probably what they did since the lid and bottle weren't together or in the trash.

Cody: I guess it would also benefit them that the kitchen and cafeteria are connected, making easier to travel in the dark.

Erin: How?

Hail: Duh, you keep you hand against the wall and walk until you find the door, or maybe a window.

Erin: So the killer didn't poison the food?

Athena: N-no... T-they d-did s-s-something e-else...

Cooking Pot.

Cody: We can infer that from the stain from the poison at the bottom of the pot was caused by the poison that was once in the empty bottle.

{Cody really steps up his game in the class trials. To bad he doesn't get any character development.}

Bonnie: We have evidence for the weapon and the distractions, but not any idea on the killer.

Cody: That's it! The Nurse's Office.

Gavin: What about it?

Cody: Surely, there's a cabinet of poison of something. That's were it came from.

Erin: That doesn't really help us determine who took it...

Dexter: 3 lovely ladies went to explore it the other day.

{With all the comments he makes about women, I'm starting to think that he's like bi or pan.}

Athena: ...

Erin: Are you fucking accusing me?!!

Bonnie: We're suspects. All we have to do is prove our innocent!

Kai: Go ahead then.

Bonnie: When Erin and I checked the generator, it had the settings locked since they'd been previously tampered with.

Erin: In the amount of time we checked it the killer could've went through with their plan.

Everyone glanced at Athena.

{❤️}

Athena: Y-y-you g-guys d-don't really t-think I k-killed t-them, r-r-right?... Right?!...

{It's pretty obvious.}

Gavin: We should reconsider our evidence.

Kai: Yeah. Athena can't even hurt a fly. Much less plan a murder.

Hail: Your doubts on Cody will be your downfall.~

{Yeah. Cody's the protagonist. He can never be wrong.}

Jamie: Are you saying Athena is our killer?

Dexter: What if Hail's lying? How do we know we can trust you, Mastermind?

{I thought Dexter was talking about Jamie for a second. 😂}

Hail: The same way you trust Cody. Believe that I will always be there, to enlighten all of you.

Bonnie: That's really hard to do.

Gavin: Yeah, sorry.

Erin: Though, I guess it makes sense if Athena did killed them. When we explored the Nurse's Office, I saw her constantly glance at the cabinet which contained the poison.

Dexter: Though, you didn't think anything if it because it didn't occur to you to be suspicious of her?

Erin: Yeah.

Athena: M-me?... Killing m-my friends... The f-friends who s-stood up f-for m-me... And p-p-protected me?... I-I c-can't... This- It can't be possible. Not at all possible...

{Snap, snap.}

Gavin: Athena?! We don't think you did it we just-

Athena: No... I see where this is going. Why the fucking Hell would you would you accuse a hopeless, pathetic weakling little me?!! I didn't kill Cho and Zoey! I didn't kill anyone! Why can't you dumbasses see that?!!

{Best breakdown of the first game. 👌}

Hail: Before you have your little outburst let's have Cody review the case.

Cody: The killer wanted to kill the mastermind and end this killing game. They carefully snuck into the Nurse's Office and grabbed some poison, which was vital to their plan. The killer then went to the generator and set it to turn the power out for 15 minutes the next mourning. During this power outage they put the poison in a pot Cho used to cook with and hoped that Cho would cook for the mastermind. Due to the pressure of the killer's time window, the killer didn't have time to dispose of the poison bottle, leaving the lid in the floor and the bottle in a kitchen cabinet. Though, Cho didn't cook for the mastermind today and the killer ended up poison two innocent people. And, the only person the killer could be is, Athena Rom. The Ultimate Successor.

{Athena thinking Hail's the mastermind is so funny.}

Athena: You got it all wrong! Hail-

Neo: Hail was with me.

Athena: I was with 7 other people!

Bonnie: But you prepared in advance. Why else would have volunteered to check out the Nurse's Office if you didn't want to scope out your poison?

{I'm so happy with Athena's murder plan, you have no idea.}

Athena: ...

Gavin: Wait, you actually killed them?...

Athena: ...

Dexter: I guess we found our killer.

Noir: Then it's voting time!

Everyone voted for Athena.

Noir: Ding, ding! You voted correctly! As for the killer-

Athena began to hysterically smile.

{Let's pretend the motive doesn't exist and Athena did this on her own. (Technically she did, since she planned the murder before the motive was announced.}

Noir: Your friend here, had the second mind alteration.

{Noirkuma lies.}

Gavin: Who had the other two?

Noir: Guess you'll find out when die, or be executed. They could also tell you...

Bonnie: So is they Insane Sanity motive still in place or just the effects?

Noir: Just the effects. Anyway- I've prepared a special punishment for the Ultimate Successor! Not everyone gets executed will two double blood on their hands.~

Athena: C-cody...

Noir: It's punishment time!

Athena: Cody, protect me!...

{Cody and Athena had a bi for bi relationship and you can't change my mind.}

Noirkuma slammed the judge hammer down and Athena's execution starts.

Execution: Comfort Zone

Noirkuma attached metal coller to with a chain to Athena's neck. A helicopter then came and pulled her up. She reached for me but couldn't grab my hand in time. The helicopter accelerated towards two mountains that were extremely close together. It looked impossible to get through. Athena's skin was scrapped and cut on the rocks of the two mountains. Her clothes began to rip, and fall down as light was visible. By the time the helicopter made it through the two mountains, Athena was covered in cuts, bruisesand bleeding a lot, with addition of being in her undergarments since her clothes tore off. The helicopter then hit a third mountain and the chain broken, leaving Athena hanging from a large rock. She managed to strugglingly climb onto. She then smiled, seeing as she survived her execution. ...or at least that's what all thought. The helicopter blades came spinning down and cut her to tiny, her to see pieces.

{But why did her clothes come off...?}

Bonnie: That was brutal...

Gavin: When see made it and... This is cruel...

Dexter: An eye for an eye... An awful rule.

Hail: I can't wait to see who's next!~

Just then Erin had grabbed Hail by the throat holding her up. Seeing the two together Erin and Hail weren't much bigger then one another.

Erin: What the fuck is wrong with you?!! I may just have to kill you myself, your so annoying.

{I love how the group is actually angry and annoyed with Hailey's bull💩.}

Bonnie: Erin stop!

Erin proceeded to drop Hail onto the floor where Neo quietly ran to her aid.

Bonnie: We'll worry about Hail, tomorrow. Right now we need time to mourn...

Kai: Yeah. You make a good point Bonnie.

{Bonnie always has the good points.}

Jamie: ...and to think about two weeks ago their were 16 of us.

Erin: Guess, we drop like flies...

Noir: On that note, goodnight. It's officially night time!

We headed to our dorms, grieving, heads down. As I lied awake in bed I think back to the execution. I could have grabbed her hand. I could've saved Athena... But, I didn't. I failed... I failed everyone. I'm such a failure...

{This is supposed to hint at Cody having the despair disease as well.}

04: Cold Marble Stones

I can't say I'm used my reality being altered and waking up to blood gushing out of my arm. I can't say I'm used to sprinting down the hallway to get a bandage from the Nurse's Office. And I surely can't say I'm used to the people I feel close to plotting to kill me behind my back. Though, that how things are.

{What kind last ditch effort character development is this?}

Gavin: Cody? It's like 4 am. What are you doing in the Nurse's Office?

Cody: I, uh, needed a band aid. You?

{Cody: Tis but a scratch.}

Gavin: Sleeping pills. In the blue cabinet beside the blood packs, there are various pills. I can't sleep with all-

{I feel like Cody should be concerned that Gavin is taking medicine that he doesn't necessarily need in order to sleep.}

Cody: I get it.

Gavin: Thanks. And don't tell anyone. It's kinda embarrassing...

Cody: I won't. Your secret is safe with me.

I left Gavin in the Nurse's Office and my back to my dorm. It's much easier to sleep without your arm bleeding.

Intercom: To the gymnasium, my students!

I guess it was time for another motive.

Erin: Haven't you killed enough of us already?!!

Dexter: We're down to 9.

{And we'll be down to 2 at the end.}

Hail: How many more class trials will there be?~

Noir: The answer to all of your questions is, until someone wins!

Jamie: By win, you mean get away with murder and survive the class trial?

Noir: Exactly! Since, the past few motives were a bit long, we're doing a timed motive.

{Skyler who died like on the first day: Am I a joke to you?}

Kai: Timed? What does that mean?

Noir: It means you have to kill someone before you all die!

Bonnie: How is that going to work?

Noir: For those of you who haven't noticed it snowed outside. I'm giving all of you tends, and sleeping bags to sleep outside.

{This is a reference to the "high school" arc that we aren't going over just yet.}

Cody: Are you freezing us?

Noir: Yep! Each night it will get colder, and colder until someone commits a murder!

Erin: ...or we fucking freeze to death.

Noir: I call this motive, Freeze Your Knees!

{#BestMotive}

Before we could throw more questions at Noirkuma, he was gone.

Erin: Gavin, Bonnie, with me in the Science Lab. Dexter, keep the others under control or whatever the leader fucking does.

{Dexter is the last person I would nominate as leader.}

Dexter: I assume you have a plan?

Erin: To delay us freezing to death in two days, into three.

{3 days? That's nothing!}

Dexter: I guess that will have to work.

Erin, Gavin and Bonnie headed to the Science Lab while the rest of us stayed in here.

Kai: Does anyone know how to cook food? Cause, umm, this meal is cold. And gross.

Kai held up a microwave meal, that wasn't microwaved yet.

Neo: Did you try putting it in the microwave for two minutes?

Kai: On right. I'm dumb.

{#KaiIsSmart}

Hail: That's the toaster, stupid.

Cody: The microwave is above the oven.

Hail: You do what the oven is, right?

Kai: Yeah.

Kai microwaved her food, and then sat back at the table.

Neo: Does it taste better, now?

Kai: Yeah. I was just so used to Cho cooking I forgot how to actually do it...

{*sad noises*}

Hail: You probably didn't know in the first place.

Kai: Hey! Let me eat my microwaved single person dinner, then you can yell at me.

{^ Best line.}

Hail: Fine...

Dexter: I really hope after the next trial this is it.

Jamie: How do you know their will be a next trial?

Dexter: Well, I assume no one wants to freeze to death so-

Cody: Your assuming that there will be another murder?

Dexter: Yes. That's exactly what I'm doing.

Gavin: I really hope there isn't another one. Athena's was...

Kai: Brutal.

Jamie: Saddening.

Cody: Disturbing.

Hail: Breathtaking!

Gavin: All of those, except the last one.

Kai: Was it just me or did it look like she'd make it for a second?

Cody: I thought she survived.

Jamie: I suppose Noirkuma did that to us to show us that no one survives an execution.

Dexter: Not even the mastermind?

Jamie: Not even the mastermind.

{There's forshadow here, but I'm too lazy to explain it.}

Hail: You killed someone and you were found out by your classmates. What better punishment then a scaring execution to scare the rest of your classmates?~

Kai: You need help. Serious help.

Hail: Someone has to enjoy the killing game.

Dexter: Yeah. You. The mastermind.

Erin: We're back.

Erin, Bonnie and Gavin came with these big baskets.

Bonnie: Everyone, follow us. We're gonna set up our tents.

Kai: But, it's cold outside!

Bonnie: Whybdo you think we're stopping by the storage closet for heavy duty snow gear.

We stopped my a storage closet and bundled up in snow gear. Even with all the gear on, it was chilly. We then set up our tents.

Kai: Why are there only 6 tents? We have 9 people, right?

Bonnie: Erin and I are sharing, Gavin and Dexter are sharing and Hail and Neo are sharing.

Hail: You know, for body heat.

Kai: Anyone want to share with-

Jamie: No thanks. I'd prefer to sleep alone. Sorry.

{You like sleeping with Cody.}

Cody: Yeah... I don't like being close to people while they sleep. Sorry, Kai.

Kai: Its fine.

Jamie: What's in the basket?

Gavin: Vines.

Erin: We're going to put them on our tents and let them grow on top.

Bonnie: To keep more heat in, giving us longer before we freeze to death.

{I thought this was like the genius level thinking at the time.}

Dexter: Can we go back in now? I really don't like the cold.

Bonnie: Sure.

We all went inside and hung out in the game room until night time. Then, we braced ourselves for the true cold and the darkest side of snow.

Intercom: Wake up, it's officially mourning! Last one up gets stall hot chocolate!

With that, everyone bolted out of their tents dashing to the cafeteria. Hot chocolate was waiting for us.

Bonnie: Ahh. Warmth.~

Gavin: Um, how did everyone sleep?

Kai: Cold.

Erin: It's going to be a thousands times colder tonight. We could even freeze to death, if thing don't go according to plan...

Kai: What?!!

Dexter: What plan, Erin?

Erin: The one with the vines keeping the heat in. If they don't grow fast enough...

Hail: I though the genius said they would work.

Jamie: What can do about it? We need to understand that we might all die tonight.

Kai: No! I don't want to freeze to death!

Hail: Simple fix. Commit a murder.

Erin: We'd never-

Hail: You say that everytime yet someone always does. Someone always gets executed.~

Erin: I'm going to the lab to try to find a way to keep the heat in.

Gavin: I'm going to make some more hot chocolate.

And like that they began to leave one by one. I wonder if we were going to freeze to death tonight?

{The way Cody thinks about things is so causal. 😂}

Free Time

I decided to hang out with Bonnie. Mostly because she's one of the few people I haven't hung out with that's still alive.

{The Bonnie FTE was just too powerful.}

Cody: Hey Bonnie.

Bonnie: Hey Cody. What are you up to?

Cody: Just passing the time. What do you usually do in your spare time?

Bonnie: I usually hang out with Erin, but she's busy trying give us more nights.

Cody: Didn't you two used hate each other? And now you'll friends. What happened between you two?

{"Friends". 😏}

Bonnie: It's all lot to explain- okay, I'll tell you. We were fighting and during the Snuggle Buddy motive and then we slept together, now we're in a relationship.

{They quite literally slept together.}

Cody: Uh, cool?...

Bonnie: It's fine to not have any interest in sex.

{No, you're making him uncomfortable.}

Cody: No, I just-

{He's busy being the protagonist right now.}

Bonnie: Oh! Your not intrested in romance at all? That's fine too.

{He like demisexual biromatic or something. Maybe the reverse, I don't even know.}

Cody: I have to go.

I quickly left because was making me a little uncomfortable and it reminded me of the pool scene and I didn't want to remember that.

{Maybe he's asexual? I honestly can't even remember. Or maybe sex just makes him uncomfortable.}

Free Time End

I came to the kitchen for some more hot chocolate. There I saw Gavin and Dexter.

Cody: Hey guys. I'm just going to grab a hot chocolate.

Gavin: Why don't you stay and talk? We have time some time before bedtime.

Cody: Oh, um-

Dexter: Alright, your joining us.

Gavin: You know how Hail said they were the mastermind?

{Hail using they/them pronouns now? Okay, cool.}

Cody: Yeah?

Dexter: What would happen if we killed Hail?

Cody: ...

I haven't given that much thought. Maybe because a part of me wants to believe Hail isn't the mastermind. And killing anyone hasn't been something I think deeply about. It's always no, and think about something else.

Cody: I don't think the killing game would end. It just seems like Noirkuma would bring in a new or backup mastermind. It would just result in your execution.

{Yeah! Tell them not to kill someone!}

Gavin: That why I said.

Dexter: Okay. Thanks Cody. You can leave if you want.

Cody: Bye.

Gavin: Bye, Cody.

I left with my hot chocolate and made my way to my dorm. I could stay in there until nighttime. On my way I was stopped by Hail.

Hail: Cody, my favorite person.

Oh, and Neo was there two.

Cody: What? Do you need me or-

Hail: I know who the mastermind is.

{It's not forshadowed whatsoever, so how could you possibly know?}

I stopped. My hand got a weakening vibe sent to it an it dropped my glass of hot chocolate. I ignored the sound of glass shattering. Hail sounded concerned and serious for once in this killing game.

Neo: Hint, it's not Hail.

Cody: Then, who?

Hail: I can't really tell you right now. I'll let you know after the next trial. Okay bye!~

Hail and Neo walked off and went back to the kitchen for some napkins and more hot chocolate. After, I finally got to my room without dropping hot chocolate, I planned to enjoy the moment. I was going to slowly drink it-

Intercom: Head to your tents, campers! It's nighttime.

{*Total Drama intensifies*}

I just decided to bring my hot chocolate to my tent. Maybe it will keep my warm through the night.

{Didn't you drop it?}

Intercom: Nighttime is officially over!

I turned over to get up and my hot chocolate, that was still hot somehow, spilt all over me. I got out of my tent trying to not scream and I saw whatever else saw.

Intercom: A body has been found report to the tent area!

Before us lied the body of Gavin, who was covered in the vines we put in our tents. He was propped against the side of the building.

Dexter: G-gavin...

Erin: Gav...

Kai: He was the nicest one... Why do the nice people keep dying?...

{Because they are easy to kill.}

Bonnie: The killers must see them as an easy target...

Hail: One less-

Erin cover Hail's mouth not in the mood to put up with her.

Erin: Say one thing and I'm going to fucking kill you.

Hail just nodded in response and Erin moved her hand.

Jamie: I guess this marks the start of the 4th trial.

-Evidence-

{I remember there being an investigation, but I can't find it. 😭}

Jen Pad- Time of Murder: 11:00 pm Weapon: None Room Found In: Outside

Vines- the vines that were used to keep heat in our tents were used to slow the bleeding of Gavin's chest wounds to potentially delay his death

Dexter's Account- right before Gavin and Dexter were about to go to sleep, Gavin left to go to the bathroom and never came back

Knife- the knife was used to stab Gavin and cut the vines off some of the tents, before the killer buried it in the snow

Hair Pin- a hair pin was found at the scene of the crime; potentially it belonged to the killer

Trial

Bonnie: Okay, so Gavin died an hour after night time officially began.

Jen Pad.

Cody: Correct. He did die an hour after night time. Though, he probably would have died sooner if the killer didn't slow his bleeding by using some vines from our tents.

Kai: How did the killer get the vines off?

Erin: I'm wondering that too. You'd need to cut them off of its growing source.

Knife.

Vines.

Cody: I found a knife buried in the snow. It matches the cuts under the vines, and it would be able to cut threw the vines.

Hail: Pretty sloppy way to dispose of a weapon, if you ask me.

Dexter: Well we didn't ask you, so your imput isn't needed.

Jamie: Hey, why did Gavin leave his tents anyway? It was really cold outside.

Dexter's Account.

Cody: According to Dexter, he got up to go to the bathroom.

{The bathroom is involved in like 3 of the 4 murder cases so far.}

Bonnie: Ahh, okay.

Erin: Yeah, we have all lot of solid helpful evidence but, none of it really points torwards the killer it's just a bunch of facts...

Bonnie: Don't worry, Erin. We'll find them.

{Death flags.}

Erin: Yeah, I hope so. We never got to go on our fancy restaurant date...

Bonnie: ...yeah. We didn't. But, we will.

Hail: I have an idea.

Dexter: We're out of other options so go for it.

Hail: To expose a lair you have to corner then psychologically.~

{Ahduwjgciwbxywicb.}

Kai: But your a liar-

Hail: So, how were your Snuggle Buddy motive experiences?

Kai: Why bring up that motive?

Hail: Because, three pairs of Snuggle Buddies remain. It's kinda funny.

Neo: My experience was as I expected. Nothing new.

Hail: Don't act so down, Neo. You know you enjoyed it!~

Erin: My experience was interesting and filled with self discovery.

Hail: Awww! Adorable.~

Bonnie: Mine was also pretty interesting. I made a wonderful friend.

{You two were already friends, though.}

Hail: Friends are good. Dexter?

Dexter: I really don't want to go into to detail but, mine was much like Erin's.

Jamie: My experience was nice. Cody's super calm in his sleep.

Cody: Thanks? You were too. I didn't have any problems.

Kai: Zoey didn't kill me. I guess that's what I enjoyed most. I really don't understand what your doing or why your bringing up a motive from two trials ago.

{Why are they talking about the 2nd motive?}

Hail: Oh, I don't know. Maybe, I help me clear my mind so we can talk about the killer delaying Gavin's death.

{If Hail has access to script, Cody should too.}

Erin: If he ended up freezing to death, that's it. They didn't want the weapon to be found out.

Hail: Ehh. Think of a more moral reason.

{That's not how you use the word moral in a sentence.}

Jamie: To apologize or maybe say goodbye? Fill any of his final requests?

Hail: Closer.

Cody: He asked the killer too?

Hail: Ding, ding! We have a winner!

{Nora? Is that you?}

Kai: ...but why? That doesn't make sense.

Hail: Sure it does. Gavin told the killer how to defend themselves when they were found out. He didn't want his to effect a certainsomeone.

Dexter: ...that someone was me, wasn't it?

Hail: Correct again! You guys are on a roll!

{I have no idea what's going on.}

Neo: You were listening to their conversation, weren't you?

Hail: It was kinda like watching because I peaked of the tent, but yeah. I was.~

Dexter: Then who killed him?!!

Hail: I won't spoil the best part. That's boring!~

Kai: Was it Dexter?

Cody: I don't think so.

Dexter: Why would I kill my own boyfriend? That's...

Erin: Way to messed up, even for you.

Dexter: Yeah...

Jamie: So we can rule out Dexter? Cody, do you have anymore evidence to present us with?

Hair Pin.

Cody: Oh yeah. I found a pink heart hair pin in the snow. I wasn't sure who it belonged too.

{Cody: By the way, I've kept this very important evidence to myself to add suspense because I don't really care that much about our lives.}

Jamie: One of the girls, maybe.

Hail: Hey Bonnie, didn't you have a hair pin at some point? Though, your not wearing it now...

Bonnie: I...

Erin: No. She didn't have one. You must be confusing her for someone else.

{Yeah. The hair pin must belong to the other Bonnie.}

Kai: Yeah, you did have one didn't you? It was pink.

Bonnie: ...

Hail: It also had a heart, right Kai?

Kai: Right Hail.

Dexter: That matches Cody's description. But-

Erin: Bonnie's not the killer! She was in the tent the whole night.

{*insert Erin defending Bonnie in very cool AA here}

Hail: Oh? Can you prove that?~

Erin: Y-yes, I can! I was laying on her shoulder the whole night.

Bonnie: Erin... I-

Erin: Your not the fucking killer! I can prove it!

Bonnie: No. You can't. Because, I killed Gavin. You said we wouldn't have long before we froze to death and, I didn't want us to freeze...

{😭😭😭}

Noir: Voting time!

We all voted for Bonnie.

Noir: Your correct again! What a smart class you all are.

Erin: B-but, our fancy date... Our hamsters... Our trip to-

{This is reference to something, but I couldn't tell you what.}

Bonnie: That'll happen. Just not here.

{In the rewrite.}

Erin: But if your the killer you'll get executed like the others...

Bonnie: So? I really could care less. I just want you to live on.

Erin: *cries* But, but-

Bonnie: Shhhhh. I'll be fine.

Erin: *sniffles* O-okay...

{This is the most reaction anyone has had to someone being found guilty.}

Noir: I've prepared a special punishment for the Ultimate Surgeon.

Dexter: I guess this is goodbye, Bonnie. Damn! I still can't believe you kill, Gavin...

Bonnie: You don't have to forgive me. Just don't drag Erin it this.

Dexter: Will do.

Noir: It's punishment time!

Erin: *crying* I love you, Bonnie!...

Bonnie: I love you too, Erin.

{*crying* I love Bonnie too...}

Noirkuma slammed the judge hammer down and Bonnie's execution starts.

Execution: Heart Surgery

Bonnie's wrists and ankles were strapped to a hospital bed. Several small Noirkuma clones with stethoscopes and lab coats on, gathered around Bonnie. A bigger one, with a saw stepped in front. Bonnie didn't react though on the inside she was terrified. The Noirkuma with the saw began to draw on Bonnie's clothes marking where it would cut. The staps restraining Bonnie were then tighten, making her skin in those areas turn purple. The Noirkuma with the saw began to cut where he marked with the sharpie. That's when Bonnie screamed at the top of her lungs. The Noirkuma held her heart in his other hand, where the saw wasn't. He then threw it into the crowd of smaller Noirkuma where it was ripped apart without mercy, and Bonnie died.

{Human Anatomy class has taught me that this is not how heart surgery works. You've gotta cut the rib cage open as well as the chest.}

Erin: *crying* You fucking monster...

{That's rich, considering you're the—}

Dexter: That was worse then Athena's...

Kai: I thought the executions couldn't get worse the Athena's...

Jamie: That was definitely scaring...

Noir: Well off to bed! No more freezing this time.

Hail: Nightmares away!

We all headed to our dorms. As Hail said earlier, there was a note containing who the mastermind was. I read and didn't believe it. Hail had to be lying there no way that person is the mastermind. I refuse to believe. I crumbled up the note and went to sleep.

05: Faded Dreams

Intercom: Report the gymnasium! It's mandatory!

I made my way to the gym remembering how we had less people again. We were down to seven.

Erin: Another fucking motive?!!

Hail: I'm so excited for it!~

Noir: Alright, things are starting to get interesting. Especially with this new motive!

Dexter: What is it?

Noir: Secrets & Lies!

Jamie: How does it work?

Noir: Well, each of you will receive a piece of paper containing your darkest or most embarrassing secret. You have today and tomorrow to kill someone or else your secret will be read aloud to all your classmates.

{We went from actually freezing to death to stupid secrets? I hate how I brushed over death like it was nothing, but it's also super funny.}

Kai: No offense but, this motive seems really harmless compared to the others. I mean, its just a stupid secret.

{Yeah.}

Erin: You may have an embarrassing secret from your days in elementary school but, all least one person in this room has a dark secret and they're willing to kill to keep it protected.

{Uh... Erin?}

Hail: I wonder why that could be?

Dexter: You!

Kai: Yeah, you claimed to be the mastermind.

Erin: And it's super fucking believe able!

Hail: Ehh. Oh well!

Then Hail and Neo walked away.

{When there's too much drama at school, I just walk awa-ay-ay-ay.}

Dexter: If I could I'd kill Hail, just for the sake of revenue. But the mastermind has everything in their favor...

Erin: What if we all killed her?

Jamie: That's not possible. Only one person can be the killer.

{How do you know that Jamie?}

Erin: Damn! I and thought I'd gotten a good idea... I'm going to the Science Lad to make things explode.

Dexter: I'll be hanging out in the music room.

Kai: I'm stay here and chill in the cafeteria.

Jamie: I'll be in the library.

Cody: I guess I'll just be wandering around.

Free Time

I decided to hang out with Erin. Her and Kai are the only one I haven't really talked to yet.

Cody: Hey, Erin. What are you mixing?

Erin: Deadly chemicals. Don't touch.

Cody: Um, okay. Is their anything you want to talk about?

Erin: I hate everyone. Is that good?

Cody: You could just say that you don't want to talk. It's fine, I can talk with someone else.

Erin: Thanks.

And then I left Erin to her deadly chemicals.

Free Time End

Intercom: A body has been found! Everyone report to the dormitories!

Erin and I looked at each other before we ran to the dormitories where everyone else was.

Dexter: Hail came and got Kai, Jamie and I. Then, we found the body.

Before us was the body of Neo Disglace, the Ultimate Wizard. He had a sword sticking out of his chest and that was it.

{Finally, he dies. I waited 4 chapters of Neo doing absolutely nothing for this.}

Kai: Why was the body in Athena's room? She's not even here.

{Unless...}

Jamie: To throw us off?

Erin: That would make sense...

Noir: It's investigation time! Collect as much evidence as you can before the trial starts.

Like always I checked the Jen Pad but, it wasn't working.

Erin: What the fucking he'll happened to my Jen Pad?!!

Noir: Oh, the killer must have hacked the system and disabled them for this trial. What a smart kid...

{Lucy the Ultimate Hacker: Am I a joke to you?}

Dexter: God dammit!

Kai: I mean, we just have to find evidence right?

Jamie: Yes that's the point of investigating.

Kai: Wouldn't that sword sticking out of Neo's chest count?

Hail: It sure would, Kai!

Sword was added to evidence.

Jamie: And the fact that we're in Athena's room is interesting.

Kai: I just found that weird.

Athena's Room added.

Cody: Weird or not, it's evidence.

Hail: Erin, what are you doing?

Erin: Doing what Bonnie normal did. Search the body.

Kai: Eww. That's-

Dexter: Wait is that a bandage?

Bandage added.

Hail: It's where the sword wound is.

Bandage updated.

Erin: There's not much we can pull from this. The killer is really smart.

{No. You guys are just really stupid.}

Dexter: Meaning we have to talk a lot during the trial, in hopes of catching the killer.

Kai: Are guys sure that's it?

Jamie: Yeah.

Cody: Without the Jen Pads working we can't form our alibis or check the weapon.

Hail: It's all a mystery then.

Noir: So your ready for the 5th Class Trial?

Cody: I guess so.

-Evidence-

Sword- there was a sword sticking out of Neo's chest

Athena's Room- the body was found in Athena's room

Bandage- there was a bandage where the sword wound was

Trial

Erin: We have so little evidence, it's scary.

Kai: Uh, yeah. I don't want to die because the smart people couldn't collect enough evidence!

{^ I second that.}

Hail: Don't worry. I'm sure you'll be next to die.

Kai: Hey! I made it to the 5th trial.

{And you'll make it to the 6th as well.}

Hail: So did everyone else in this room.

Dexter: Except the killer.

Cody: Wouldn't they technically have made it, since they took part in the trial?

Hail: Exactly!

Jamie: Shouldn't we be focusing on the finding the killer?

{Jamie doesn't want the last thing he hears to be you guys talking about who made it to the 5th trial.}

Dexter: We should. But we won't.

Erin: This could be our last trial. I admit, other then the someone being dead and the killer gets executed at the end, I'm going to miss the class trials.

{They gave up so fast lmao.}

Dexter: And to think we didn't even know each other that well about a week ago.

Kai: What about the trial? We haven't cleared it yet. There is still a chance the killer could win.

Erin: Right, sorry.

Dexter: How about we start with the body?

Jamie: That's the only thing we can start will.

Sword.

Cody: Neo had a sword sticking out of his body. It was also the murder weapon.

Erin: Where did it come from?

Kai: The Art Room. It's like a thing you use to shape the clay after.

{A sword? To the shape clay?}

Jamie: So it a meant to be a model but it's real because we're in a killing game?

Hail: Makes sense to me!

Bandage.

Cody: There was also a bandage were the sword would was.

Dexter: As if the killer stabbed Neo took it out and bandage him, and then did it again.

Kai: That doesn't make sense, though. Unless, they were they were doing that thing Bonnie did with Gavin.

Cody: We mean when she used the vines to slow his bleeding and delay his death?

Kai: Yeah. What if the killer did something like that?

Hail: That was actually something smart and useful, Kai.

{Kai always says things that are smart and useful.}

Kai: Thanks- Hey!

Jamie: Should we question the location of Neo's body?

Athena's Room.

Cody: Neo was found in Athena's Room.

Erin: But how did the killer get in? You need a Jen Pad to enter someone's room.

Dexter: Or maybe they didn't. Since, Athena is dead maybe her room could simply be picked with a lock.

Hail: Maybe so. But, that could be any of us?

Erin: This discussion went nowhere...

In tha moment I noticed something. The scarf Neo wore during the last trial because of the snow was now being wore by Hail. As everyone talked and debated, I thought. Hail is always with Neo, and Hail was the one to go three people because the killer doesn't count as a witness to the body. Otherwise Hail would have needed only two people.

{Last minute plot twist, let's go.}

Hail: Cody? You look like you just realized something.

Cody: Hail, can I ask you something?

Hail: Sure. Ask away.

Cody: Are you really the mastermind?

Dexter: Why would you if you already know she is?!

Kai: Do we really know, though? I mean she could be lying.

Dexter: Fair point...

Hail: I'm more a mastermind then the actual mastermind.~

{Yeah. The worst thing the actual mastermind does is having a random, but brutal execution for no reason whatsoever.}

Cody: Another thing.

Hail: Sure.

Cody: Why his scarf? I don't...

Kai: What?

Dexter: I- Oh.

Erin: I get it, now...

Hail: Well, you know, I want a part of Neo with me when I get executed.~

The fact Hail said that while smiling, really surprised me.

Kai: Huh? That's means-

Hail: Abrakadabra! I'm the killer! Do you mind piecing the case together for us, Cody? It broke my heart when you didn't do it last time because Bonnie confessed.

Cody: The killer grabbed the sword from the Art Room and, along side Neo, the two went to Athena's Room. The killer told Neo to lay on the ground and then the killer stabbed Neo. The killer then drooped the sword and bandaged their friend up. The killer stabbed Neo again killer in him this time. The killer left the sword in his stomach and rushed to alert the others. The killer can be none other than, Hailey Floud.

Hail: Lovely! But, you got something wrong.

Erin: What did he get wrong?

{Cody's the protagonist. He's never wrong.}

Hail: Neo and I had a full on fight on who would kill the other and get executed. He gave in and let me win. I get the fancy execution and everything! Speaking of executions, Noirkuma!

Noir: Ah, right. I've prepared a special execution for the Ultimate Accomplice.

Erin: Hail, we'll miss you.

Hail: Sure you will.

Noir: It's punishment time!

Dexter: No really, we will miss you...

{No they won't.}

Noirkuma slammed his judge hammer starting Hail's execution.

Execution: Waiting Forever

Hail sat in the very back of a classroom. The room slowly starting to fill with Noirkuma's. As it filled Hail dashed out, trying to escape the trial. A bunch Noirkuma grabbed Hail and threw her back in the classroom. The numbers and letters began to fly off the board and hit Hail. Suddenly, a ball of light formed in the middle of the classroom smashing all the Noirkuma against the wall. The ball of light absorbed Hailey, melting her.

{This execution makes no sense. What did I just read?}

Noir: Off to bed, my students!

And that concludes the 5th Class Trial.

06: Middle Ground

Intercom: A body has been found! Report to the gym immediately!

{Let's speedrun the final chapter.}

We don't even have a motive. None the less, I got up and went to the gym.

Erin: Pheww. I thought you were the dead one.

Cody: Why?

Erin: I don't know, I just did.

Erin and I went in the gym together, surprised to see who it was. Dexter. The Ultimate Alcoholic.

{RIP Dexter's potential.}

Kai: Oh my god, Dexter died!

Kai and Jamie walked in behind us.

Noir: Well, well. I suggest you get to investigating. The evidence won't find itself!~

Then Noirkuma disappeared and we began our search. I checked to see of the Jen Pad was working. And it was.

Name: Dexter Bloodscale

Age: 18

Bust: N/A

Height: 6'0

Weight: 147 lb

Ultimate Talent: Ultimate Acoholic

Time of Murder: 1:30 am

Weapon: None

Room Found In: Gymnasium

Erin: By the looks of it, he drowned.

Jen Pad added to evidence.

Kai: How can you tell?

Erin: Did you really just ask that?

Kai: Sorry I'm not as smart as you.

Jamie: Look, the pool. Dexter was probably drowned there.

Kai: Could he have drowned in the toilet?

Cody: Maybe, but it seems unlikely.

Erin: Alright, alibi run down! What was everyone doing at 1 o'clock?

Kai: Sleeping.

Cody: Yeah, I don't think that will work. We need a different approach.

Jamie: What we need is a hint of some sort.

{Where's Nora when you need her?}

Noir: I'll give you kids one hint and one hint only. The killer is the mastermind.

Erin: Can they even do that?

Noir: No. It seems our mastermind broke the rules. Oh well! You kids are so good you'll catch them and I give them their much deserved execution!

{There are rules? We probably should have gone over them at some point.}

And then Noirkuma disappeared.

Erin: We have like no evidence. Are we just going to talk our way throw this?

Kai: I guess...

I hope we can pull this off. I have to say but, I think Hail was right. I know who the mastermind is.

I really don't think I'll need any evidence. I just need to convince them who the mastermind is.

Erin: Finding the mastermind. Shouldn't be anything we can't handle.

{Famous last words.}

Kai: Yeah!

Erin: Who is it Cody? Your the detective or whatever.

Cody: Actually I'm not a detective. I just scarred of coffins, caskets and burning alive.

{There's the explanation of his talent. 6 chapters after we learn it.}

Erin: And all this time I though you were the Ultimate Detective...

Jamie: That is believable since you seem like a detective putting evidence together and such.

Cody: Um, okay. We have to figure out who killed Dexter and who the mastermind is.

Erin: Ha! I forgot Dexter died be he pissed me off? Why was Bonnie even friends with him?!

{She just a complete 180 out of nowhere. That's not suspicious at all.}

Kai: Erin? Your acting weird. Like, weirder than normal.

Jamie: You keep changing the subject everytime we try to focus on the trial.

{Their in a trial right now?}

According to Hail, Erin-

Kai: Are you the mastermind?!!

Erin: Of course not! Why would I be?!

Kai: Wait a fucking minute. I remember when Zoey and I were exploring the library we found a weird book. It was about this school. And most conveniently you three just so happen to have some correlation to the three founders.

{Why are you just now mentioning this, Kai?!}

Cody: How? I can't really remember...

Erin: Yeah. Our damn memories were wiped.

Kai: Erin you are related to Sasha. She was the assistant principal. Cody you are related to Nora she was the main principle. And Jamie your worked under Jennifer's research facility. Also, those three are sisters so your all-

Erin: The Masterminds?!!

{*gasp* Big plottwist that was only somewhat forshadowed with Jamie a little bit.}

Kai: Yeah... Oh my- All three of you are the mastermind!

Erin and Jamie exchange a dark smile.

Erin: Ha! You caught us. Technically though, Jamie should get executed. He killed Dexter.

{Way to throw him under the bus, Erin.}

Jamie: Oh and Cody. He wasn't in on this. Originally, he was but, you know. Memory lose got in the way.

{Cody was the mastermind the entire time, he just got his memory wiped way too much.}

Cody: How...

I thought it was Jamie; making Hail only half correct.

Erin: I knew this would happen.

Jamie: Kai, Cody, you two want to explore the outside world?

Kai: If it means leaving here, yes please.

Cody: I guess but...

{6 chapters all for Cody to do absolutely nothing when in faces of the masterminds.}

Erin: Reality is deceiving.

Noir: Voting time!

We voted for Jamie, since he killed Dexter.

Noir: Ding, ding, ding! Correct 6 times in row!

Jamie: Here.

Jame tossed me his Jen Pad.

Jamie: You'll need it to get outside.

{Peak romantic moment.}

Noir: I've prepared a special punishment for the Ultimate Bookworm.

Cody: I- I...

Noir: It's punishment time!

Cody: I love you Jamie!...

{He said the line. Character development achieved.}

Noirkuma slammed his judge hammer starting Jamie's execution.

Execution: End Of The Page

Jamie, much like Athena, had a coller attached to his neck. Erin reached out for his hand and she grabbed it. The two were shoved inside a giant mechanical pencil as lead by Noirkuma. They were pushed harder, and harder into the pencil. Blood began to spill and it acted as ink for the giant pencil. Then they died, and the pencil was put down. The message on the giant paper read: The End.

{Erin died for no reason. It would be so much cooler if was a mastermind that lived.}

Noirkuma was gone and then a large door was visible.

Cody: Ready?

Kai: Sure.

I used Jamie's Jen Pad and the door opened. Kai and I braced ourselves for what was next.

{It's never explained what happens to Cody and Kai after they leave the game.}

If we get like 5 comments, I'll do the second game.