Mohabbat ,Nafrat aur Sazhizon ka safar
I have changed the way I used to write dialogues as when more characters or dialogues are there
Like
Veer:"dialogues"
Because this way it is more convenient and also there won't be n any compromise with describing expressions of characters
also this book is more of what if , different perspectives of Naagin 5 and Covering up the loopholes of Naagin 5
a try at creating different storyline than Naagin 5 some scenes that were iconic would be added but writing won't be same as most of the aspects are changed from original story.
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The wedding rituals finally concluded, leaving behind a soft glow of celebration. As the guests began to disperse, Veer found himself surrounded by his mischievous cousins, their eyes twinkling with playful mischief.
Tapish:"Veer ,Dad muze bhula rahe hai mai jaake guest sambhalta hun."
And he left towards the guests.
Ponky: "Arre, Veer bhai, ab toh aap humare liye paraye ho gaye ho. Bhabhi ke aate hi aapka raj khatam!"
Monil: "Haan bhai, ab hume bhool mat jana! Ab toh sirf bhabhi ka hukum chalega. Aap bas unka kehna maanoge! Hume toh bhool hi jaoge na "
Daksh: "Sahi kaha Monil! Bhai, ab humari sunne ka time gaya. Ab toh bas bhabhi ki chalegi. Humara kya hoga?"
Veer trying to suppress a smile, looked at them.
Veer(in calm but firm tone): "Dekho, maine pehle hi sabko samjha diya tha na.Sunlo tum sab, Bani ab tumhari bhabhi hai. Uske saath koi shaitani ya badtameezi nahi chalegi. Main mazaak samajhta hoon, par don't you dare to disrespect her by any chance. Samjhe?"
The cousins exchanged looks, knowing exactly what Veer was talking about . They knew the boundaries he had set.
Ponky: "Arre bhai, humne toh aise hi kaha. Aap tension mat lo, hum bhabhi ko bilkul pareshan nahi karenge. Lekin hum bhi bhoolne wale nahi hain ki aap hamare bhai ho!"
Monil: "Sahi baat hai! Bhai, aapka saath kabhi nahi chhodenge. Lekin haan, ab bhabhi ko naraz nahi kar sakte, warna..."
Daksh: "Haan haan, warna aapka gussa hum par aa jayega!"
Veer finally let out a small chuckle, shaking his head at their antics.
Veer: "Tum log sudharne se rahe."
Ponky: "Arre bhai, aap bhi na! Apko kehne ki bhi jarurat nahi hai hum Bani Bhabhi ko kabhi nahi satayenge .Vo bhi ab family hai."
Veer gave them a pointed look that softened into a fond smile. The cousins, despite their usual banter, were family, and they understood the unspoken rules.
As their banter continued, Meera pulled Bani into corner to give luggage to Bani and also because she was concerned for her little sister even if she was Aadinaagin Meera can't help.
Meera: "Bani, tu theek hai? Tera yaha rehna sahi nahi hai Bani ?"
Bani's gaze hardened, her determination unshaken.
Bani: "Main Aadinaagin hoon, Meera di. Darne ka sawal hi nahi. Veer ko meri sachai pata hai, lekin uske pariwar ko nahi. Main apni pehchaan ko chhupaye rakhoongi. Aur apna badla bhi zaroor lungi. Aap bas apna aur papa ka khayal rakhna."
Meera nodded, still worried but trusting Bani's strength.
Meera: "Bas apna khayal rakhna. Kuch bhi ho, main yahan hoon."
Bani gave her a reassuring smile, taking the luggage from her hands.
Bani: "Thanks, Meera di. Now travel safely.Kuch bhi problem ho toh muze jarur batana."
"Take care, Bani.We will leave now."said Meera as she hugged her sister before leaving her in her enemies or battlefield.
Bani's POV
Bani watched Meera leaving towards Sharma family to go home.Home does she even has a home now Even if her chachi hated her she had found a home temporary one in Sharma house.Then she had to leave that place too.Now that she had a place to call her home,her rented apartment ,she had to leave that too because of a forced marriage.She can't help but laugh on her own fate.She is a married women now but she has no home or a family to call her own.Well is this what all the orphan people out there feel .She is Aadinaagin,she is supposed to be strong but what about the women she is ,the little girl she was,who always wanted love and home to call her own .The only fear she had was to die lonely will that come true. ..?Fate has not been kind to her.There were chances that it will never be .She had some hopes in her life too but they were crushed and ruined.
"I will not forgive you for this Veeranshu , ye galat Kiya tumne .Meri majburi ka fayda nahi uthana chahiye tha tumhe."
As Bani turned back towards the crowd, Veer's eyes met hers.The world seemed to slow down for him and he went into her thoughts.
"Bani... tum meri zindagi ho. Main apni mohabbat har pal tumhe dikhata rahunga, chaahe kitna bhi waqt lage.Mera tarika bohot galat hai paar tumhe khone ka koi chance hi nahi . Specially jab muze pata chala ki vo dhabewala vo , saala Aadinaag hai .Maine isiliye ye kadam uthaya kyuki Bani vo tumhare layak nahi aur tum ye baat kabhi nahi samjhti.Jab muze tumhare Aadinaagin hone ka sach pata chala tabhi muze uss dhabewale pe Shak ho gaya tha phir maine uski saari kundali nikalwayi well Cheelo ka rajkumar hun ye kaam mere liye aasan tha Uss Jai ki sachai bhi mere samne aa gayi.Tumhe khona muze manjoor nahi tha."
As the last of the guests left, the mansion fell into a calm. Veer approached Bani, who was organizing her things in the guest room.
Veer: "So, here we are. A new chapter of our lives begins tonight."
Bani looked up, her eyes flashing with a mix of anger and disturbance.
Bani: "A new chapter? You mean one where I'm forced into a life I never wanted?"
Veer's smile faltered, but he quickly regained his composure.
Veer: "I know our marriage happened in a wrong way , but give me a chance to make things right. I promise you, I'll do everything I can to make you happy."
Bani: "Promises are easy to make. It's keeping them that's difficult.And we are enemies not from this life but from past life. "
Veer's gaze softened, his voice sincere.
Veer: "Just trust me a little. I'm not asking for everything at once. Just... a chance."
As Bani turned away, organizing her things, Veer remained, watching her with a mixture of hope and determination.
'Bani ab hum saath hai bhale kuch duriya ho .Main tumhe mera pyaar sacha hai ye prove karke rahunga .Tum ziddi ho toh mai bhi tumhara forever wala jivan saathi hun Main bhi bohot jununi hun.'thought Veer leaving guest room .He would never consider that room as her room .His Bani would not stay in that guest room for more days and he will make sure that.
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In the early morning
Location Naaglok,
Bani rushed through the corridor following Varun who guided her to the chamber where Shreya was admitted.Bani was informed that Shreya wake up some hours ago and was willing to talk to to her . Wasting no time Bani came to meet her .
"This room.I will leave to give you guys privacy now her condition is stable "said Varun.
"Ok" replied Bani entering the chamber.
"Aadinaagin pranam."said Shreya trying to sit up.
"No need for this, Shreya Don't sit just lay down your health isn't fine."said Bani.
"Aadinaagin something bad is coming our way "
"What do u mean Shreya.?"
"Aadinaagin I was kidnapped by a of group of supernatural beings like us some of them felt from Naag clan ,some from cheel and some from other clans all shapeshifters.They were performing black magic and all these members felt like soldiers working for some superior person.They were following someone's order.None of them of Naag clan felt from Naaglok as if they are from some another world or just anywhere but not Naaglok."
" How can you be this sure ?"asked Bani.
" I used to keep records of all members of Naaglok hence I can confirm it.They took me away in bright day and I remember listening to some spells of ancient time.One of them who felt like some magical priest kept his hand on my head and and I felt that many of information from my mind where transformed to his .I know this thing because I was once a wide reader of such tricks that warriors use to gain information from culprits . They tried to remove my memories too of this whole incident but I know magic tricks against such tricks my father was a strong magician I have learnt enough from him to survive my memories in such cases .After their work was done they left me on the border .Some people are coming after Naaglok.Their motive isn't clear."
"Shreya it seems, a powerful enemy of Naaglok waiting for attack.I will look into this matter and everything will be fine you just take rest and please don't share this information with common people .They deserve to live in peace .This information can create a fear in them.You need proper rest and care so stay here for some days let the doctors treat you hundred percent if you feel uneasy or anything wrong you will tell me I would try my best to get you help."said Bani with worry and care.
"I won't need much Aadinaagin I am fine and healed."said Shreya feeling touched by Bani's care for her.
"You are supposed to say Yes.Naagin or not you still need care and medicines."told Bani being caring Aadinaagin.
"Ok Aadinaagin I will inform you for any help."replied Shreya with a smile on her face.
"Good I must leave now.Take care "said Bani raising from her place as Shreya nodded as her response.
As Bani moved out walking in the corridor she thought about how her clan was killed in Satyug and how much of it made her feel guilty and the guilty flows through even now .
Satyug me jo hua vo bohot bura tha .Mere log maare gaye mere ek galat decision ki wajah se .Is baar ye koun si musibat aayi hai pata nahi .Bass itna pata hai ki iss baar koyi marega nahi .My people will survive whatever may come.Mai is baar emotional hoke koi decision nahi lungi.Is baar mai apne vansh ko bachaungi jarur.Shreya ne jo kaha vo yaad rakhna hoga.Hey bhagwan mere logo ki raksha karna please."thought Bani.
Bani left for Singhania Mansion it ,was five in the morning.She then decided to make the day memorable for all cheels .
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The first morning at the Singhania Mansion as their daughter-in-law dawned, and Bani was already up, planning her day. She had a plan to disturb the peaceful lives of the Cheels without revealing her true identity as Aadinaagin.
As the first light of the sun filtered into the mansion, Bani began her task by pulling back the heavy curtains in the grand hall, allowing sunlight to flood the space. The sunlight, which weakened the Cheels, immediately caught the attention of Balwant, who stormed into the hall, his face set in anger.
Balwant: "Bani! What are you doing? These curtains are always kept closed."
Bani turned to him, her expression one of innocent surprise.
Bani: "Oh, I’m so sorry, Daddyji. I thought the hall could use some fresh air and sunlight. It’s such a beautiful day! Doesn’t it make the room feel more lively?And also I have washed the curtains."
Balwant gritted his teeth, swallowing his frustration. She was just a human, after all—what harm could she mean? He forced a tight smile.
Balwant: "Yes, well, we usually keep them closed. Later put them back too."
As Balwant retreated, Bani smirked slightly, knowing she had already made her first move.
Later, as the household began to stir, Bani took charge of the morning activities.Ponky, Monil,Tapish and Daksh came in the living room when Bani appeared, a mischievous glint in her eyes.
Bani: "Good morning, everyone! I thought today would be perfect for a little... house cleaning."
Ponky: "House cleaning? But Bhabhi, we have staff for that!"
Monil: "Yeah, Bhabhi. We’ve never done that before."
Tapish:"We have house help for that Bani."
Bani smiled sweetly, her tone leaving no room for argument.
Bani: "That’s exactly why it’ll be good for you. Everyone should do house work once in a while, even if there are helpers. It builds character!"
The cousins exchanged nervous glances, but the sight of Bani’s determined expression made them sigh in defeat. Veer’s chachu, Pawan, entered the room just in time to hear Bani’s orders.
Pawan: "What’s all this commotion?"
Bani: "Oh, Chachu, you’re just in time! I was just telling the boys that everyone is going to help with cleaning today. It’ll be a family activity!"
Pawan opened his mouth to protest, but couldn't do it just like his sons. Shukla, the family pandit, who had just arrived , was the next target.
Bani: "And Panditji, I’m sure you don’t mind helping out a little too? It’s good for the soul, isn’t it?"
Shukla looked like he’d swallowed a lemon but nodded weakly. How could he refuse?
Meanwhile, Veer had just woken up and was heading downstairs when he heard the commotion. He stopped at the landing, taking in the scene below: his cousins and brother dusting the furniture, Pawan awkwardly trying to mop the floor, and Shukla balancing a stack of books.
Veer (laughing to himself): "What is she up to now?"
But when Bani noticed him, she smiled and handed him a broom.
"Good morning, Veer. Ready to help?"
said Bani with a sarcastic smile.
Veer raised an eyebrow, but seeing her playful grin, he couldn’t help but chuckle. He took the broom from her and sighed.
Veer (thoughts): "Well, if it’s for her, I can handle a bit of sweeping."
Veer (teasingly to his cousins): "Chalo, everyone, let’s make sure Bhabhi is impressed. No mischief today, got it?"
Ponky: "Bhai, you’re already on her side? Don’t forget us now that Bhabhi is here!"
Monil: "Yeah, bhai! Aap apna raaj nahi chalayenge, ab to Bhabhi ka raj chalega!"
Daksh: "But don’t worry, we’ll follow orders... for today."
The cousins laughed as they continued their work, secretly plotting how to get back at Bani—just a little bit of harmless fun, of course.
A The mansion, usually so still and quiet, was alive with activity.
By the two hours , the Singhania Mansion was spotless, and the family was exhausted. She had managed to turn their world upside down, all while maintaining her image of a sweet, innocent bride.
As Veer watched her from across the room, he couldn’t help but feel a swell of admiration. She was more than a match for him and for his entire family.
Veer (thoughts): "She’s incredible. I can’t wait to see what she does next."
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As the Singhania family, along with Shukla, completed finally sitting down to catch their breath. Just as Shukla was about to relax, his phone rang, the shrill tone breaking the temporary calm.
Shukla: "Hello?"
On the other end, Jai’s voice was cold and furious.
Jai: "Shukla! What is this I’m hearing? Bani got married to Veer Singhania? Why didn’t you stop this? How could you let this happen?"
Shukla: "Jai, I had no idea. The wedding happened suddenly, and I was out of Mumbai at the time. I only found out when I returned this morning."
Jai: "This is unacceptable. You know what this could mean! If Bani falls for Veer, our entire plan could be ruined. We need to act fast."
Shukla: "I understand, Jai. But the Singhania mansion is heavily guarded.We need to be careful."
Jai: "I don’t care about the guards or their so-called security.We need to eliminate them both before it’s too late. Do you understand?"
Shukla: "Yes, Jai. I understand. I’ll start working on a plan immediately."
Jai’s voice turned even colder.
Jai: "Good. I’m calling Bani now. I want to hear her reasons for this marriage, but make no mistake, Shukla—we’re running out of time."
With that, Jai hung up, leaving Shukla with a sense of impending doom.
Meanwhile, in the Singhania mansion, Bani was enjoying her small victory over the Cheels. The family had spent the morning toiling under her direction, and now they were all too exhausted to keep up their usual airs.
Suddenly, Bani’s phone rang. She picked it up and saw Jai’s name flashing on the screen.
She walked out of earshot of the Singhanias and answered the call.
Bani: "Hello?"
Jai: "Why, Bani? Why did you marry Veer Singhania? You know what he is. You know what they are. How could you go through with this?"
Bani’s voice remained calm, but there was a steely edge to it.
Bani: "Jai, it’s complicated. I had my reasons, and you don’t need to worry about me. I can handle myself."
Jai (angry): "This isn’t about you handling yourself! This is about our plan, our revenge! You can’t just throw everything away because of some... some impulsive decision!"
Bani: "Jai, I haven’t forgotten our mission. You need to stay calm and let me handle this.I have done this to save Meera di from marrying Veer."
Jai: "I’m running out of patience, Bani. If you’re not careful, you might fall into Veer’s trap. And then what? We’ll lose everything!"
Bani’s grip tightened on the phone, but she forced herself to stay composed.
" Jai maybe you should work on your plans yourself because I am so done with you" said Bani being frustrated at Jai and his childish behaviour.
"Bani ,listen I am.sorry news has angered me I am angry because I care for you .I am your saathi how can I see you with someone else..?" asked Jai playing his Saathi card .
"Well you are no saathi to me in actual manners Jai.We are not bonded in any relationship in this life.So leave it ."said Bani cutting the phone call.
Well Bani was done with Jai and his changing mood swings she understands he was frustrated by the news but he has no right to be so angry or selfish to care only about his plans .
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Bani returned to the hall, her face carefully blank. Veer noticed her tense expression .
Veer: "Everything okay?"
Bani forced a smile, nodding.
Bani: "Of course just a call from a friend.Your should care about yourself now that I live here. "
Veer didn’t look entirely convinced, but he let it go. He watched as Bani moved around the room, her mind clearly elsewhere.
Veer (thoughts): "She’s hiding something. But what?"
Bani, on the other hand, was already thinking ahead.
Jai’s call had made her realise Jai doesn't actually care for anyone but his so called plans. Her Aadinaagin sense somehow showed Jai as negative forces .She needed to stay one step ahead of both Jai and the Singhanias if she was going to survive this.
"I will not fall. Not for Veer, not for anyone. This is my game now."thought Bani to herself.
Only if she knew ,this time destiny has actually made a way for love in her life.
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