now tell me... how's the grammar?

Boys are weirdly 3 years younger in their mental age.. but as for Chris who is Physically 15 years old and unfortunately...mentally 6 years old, have a large age gap with me and him..

"happy birthday Joy!" Chris shouted at the Sound of the Bell ringing, like a sweet melody of a Bird's tweet

"Uh thanks! Unfortunately, this isn't my clothes yet for my birthday! You have to wait sooner! And you better wear your tuxedo now.."I replied with a sweet smile on my face

"Thats very nice of you! But i prefer to wear these pajamas while you aren't ready my princess. It'll be better if we get ready at the same time as well"He replied

"hmm.. okay then, but if you really want to wear that tuxedo of yours, you can wear it now." After the conversation, Somebody brought a pink box.

"Whats in here?" I asked the man who brought the box here

"Thats your gown Ms. Joy. Now if you'll excuse me i have to ready the Room"The man left leaving me a really nice Pink gown, embroidered with pink glittery strap of fabric, and colorful tiny flowers that surrounds it like vines from a tree

"Thats a really beautiful gown Joy, it fits a really beatiful girl like you ^_^" Chris smiled at his statement

"Aww... thank you Chris! Im pretty sure that tuxedo of yours will fit your handsome face."

"Haha! Thanks for the complement! Anyway, im gonna get ready now, since you have your gown and hairstylist over there... "Chris left bringing his tuxedo with him.

I was left with the gown and my hairstylist

"Are you ready Ms. Joy?"

I nodded at her question.. for i am always ready

She then asked me to wear the Majestic pink gown first. So i walk so gracefully inside the dressing room so i could practice my walk.

after i finished wearing the clothes, everything eventually fitted me..

"Now for your long beautiful hair, i have to curl the ends of it, and put silver butterfly crown on your hair ^_^"

The hairstylist curled my hair and after she's done, she then asked me to stay a while here.

A minute later, she finally came back, but with a handsome man with a tuxedo

"Chris? Is that you?"I asked the Handsome young man

"Yes it is. You look so beautiful in that gown Princess ^_^" Chris then kneeled down in front of me

"May i be your first dance?" He asked.

I then placed my hands on his palm and answered "Yes"

Chris seems to Brighten up

He then gently pull me outside. My gown gracefully dance with the wind as Chris and I twirl around in succession.

"My birthday party starts this noon. But this is the best advance dance ever!"I said, smiling at him and looking directly at his glistening brown eyes.

"Really? Then i am so much happier than you are. Because i made my Princess happier than ever..."Chris replied with a smile on his eyes and Lips

"Chris..."I whispered..

"What is it?"

"Do you really love me?" I suddenly asked. Just then, Silence surrounds both of us, turning to a serious Aura- we stopped dancing after what i asked

"Of course i do.."He stepped closer to me and wrap his arms around my hips.

"Uh Chris... what is this?"I asked, for i cannot move because.. one move... will turn into a kiss

"To show you that i really love you ^_^"He kissed me, his eyes gently closed.

While my face is pinkish red because of myselr blushing..

I have no other Choice but to go on with the kiss... so i closed my eyes and think that it is just a warm breeze of air... surpassing us from between the lakes we were standing at...

"I love you..."He whispered, as he let go from the kiss.

"I... love you too..."I hugged him, tears falling from my cheeks

"Dont cry Joy... your beauty will vanish..."Chris said... stroking my hair.

"... okay... and im sorry for questioning your love..."

at noon, we then went to the Place where my birthday will be held, there are plenty of balloons that surrounds us.. and a beautiful white roses that was paste right through the entrance.

The white marble floor gave me a feeling of a Real princess.

Me and Chris Danced the whole night... and after the dance.. was the parting of ways... it was probably the saddest part of all.. but overall.. my birthday was very wonderful... i hope it'll be so much meaningful next time...