Chapter-28

About the story

At first I would like to thank you for your valuable comments regarding the story.Going through all of your comments and suggestions and now I am in a danger situation.

So, some of you want storyline should get fast forward and some of you don't want.Some of you want zarun parents should  understand  zarun's pov and others not.

I have two choices.I can show ill zarun and realization of his parents.In that case sara played a vital role showing d diary.
The advantages or disadvantages of this plot story will be finish soon and they remain child.

And other option is my original concept and it's a long way.Their misunderstanding is increasing.Zarun dislikes his father like kartik and there exists a cold relation between them.Sara feels guilty as zarun leaves house and continues study from boarding school.There is a vividness and voidness in heart and she falls in love and fears to express it.Some situation makes them life partner but there is a hate love relationship.There is a long separation and their daughter plays an important role to mend their relations.
The advantages and disadvantages of this plot it will be a long and take time.

Which one you would like to read??
Plz comment.I would like to according ur choice Personally I like the second choice as it's my first thought about the story.

N.B-New update is coming soon.Thank you for your patience.

Keeps me in your prayer.🙂

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