Book title: The boy with the snow hair.
Author: PrincessRoyal343. 

Title: 4/5.

Book cover: 4/5.
The cover is beautifully done. I like the fact that it literally translates the title from words to image.

Blurb: 4/5.
The blurb was absolutely amazing. I like what you did with the first paragraph. And I like the fact that while the blurb was short and precise, you effectively introduced the main characters. Good job!

Introduction: 5/5.
Your introduction was bomb. You were able to effectively hook readers. It's a great feat really.

Prologue and first chapter: 5/5.
Your prologue was absolutely amazing. The detailed descriptions went a long way into building reader's imagination. The mysterious air and talk in parables also went a long way in hooking readers. I like.

Plot/Theme: 4/5.
I am not much of a fantasy reader so, the theme of this novel came off as interesting to me.

Now to the plot.

To be honest, what came into my mind the first time I saw the theme (fantasy) was, ridiculous events. But you have proved me wrong.

I like the fact that there is no loophole in the plot. There is always an explanation. Like the fact the MC was able to use her power even when there was a blocking spell on her. It was exciting really. I also like the way you kept the mysterious air, makes it all more intriguing.

Pacing and Writing:
I'll break it down below;

» Description:  Your description is one of the main reasons why your book is so interesting. Considering the fact that you are writing a fantasy, descriptions are really important. I like the fact that you did not leave out the tiniest detail. This went a long way into helping visualize the story. Good job!

Note: Try to write the MC's thoughts in italics so as to distinguish them from her narration.

» Grammar: Your grammar was amazing as well. Good job!

» Tenses: One of the most important aspect of writing is tense use. I appreciate the fact that you excelled in this aspect. It made the reading much more interesting.

» Punctuation marks: You did really good with this as well. Good job!

Characters: 9/10.
Your characterization was really amazing. From the mean Mrs Margaret to her niece to the nice old lady across the street, every single character worked together to create a beautiful tale.

Rating: 🌟🌟🌟🌟

This novel is simply amazing. I am not much of a fantasy reader but you have successfully brought me in. Good job! I wish you all the best.

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Reviewed by _Modupeolu_.