The Crumpled Paper by TheGirlWho_Cares

Title: The Crumpled Paper

Author: TheGirlWho_Cares

Genre: Short Story

Sub-Genres: Romance, Teen Fiction and Chick Lit

Primary Intended Audience: 13 to 18

Mature Themes: No (Not even a swear word)

LGBTQ+: No

Status: Complete

No. Of Chapters: 4

Description:

1st in #Teenfictionfallinginlovecontest

What will you do, when you find out that the boy you're crushing on, has a crushed heart? Will you help him to smoothen it out or tear it apart? What will you do to fix his crumpled life?

Of course, you throw a message, more like a question written in a crumpled paper at him. Well, at least that's what Amethyst did.

So what happens next, when the Cupid's arrow hits his head? Will he read it or stomp on it? Will he search for his secret admirer who leaves inspirational quotes at his doorstep or will he just ignore it? Will he find his real smile before it's fake can dominance?

READ THIS CUTE LOVE STORY WTITTEN FOR #Fallinginlove contest to find out the answers for yourselves.

Review

Summary/Blurb: It gave me the perfect amount of things I needed to know about the book, but I think the description is (in my opinion) too much. It's a short story not a full length novel; try to reduce the amount of things you wrote in the description. You're giving the readers too much info of the possible things that could happen. You can draw the readers in to your book by just giving them a small pinch of the cake. Not half of the cake

Summary Rating: 6/10

First paragraph of the first chapter: Your first paragraph gave me a sweet feeling that ran down to my toes; I would literally feel my toes curling at the joy of reading this. Describing the feeling I had in one word Eager. This paragraph made me wonder, who was this boy and why he felt this way

First paragraph of the first chapter Rating: 9/10

Plot:

Original!!!, I love originality. Although, it has a few cliché bits here and there, the main concept is original.

Plot Rating: 7/10

Cover Relevance/Design:

The cover portrayed what the book was all about, a bittersweet romance.

The cover is quite beautiful

Cover Relevance/ Design: 7/10

Dialogue/Description:

The author stayed on the topic at all times, a lot of books add in unnecessary things that just to make their chapters longer. I didn't see any of that here.

Dialogue/Description Rating: 8/10

Interaction with Readers:

The author replied every comment, building a better relationship with her readers. This is really good; I've noticed that when you maintain a good relationship with your readers, they are encouraged to read more

Interaction with Readers Rating: 8/10

Grammar/Spelling:

The grammar and spelling was nice, I didn't notice any mistakes. The words used were really pleasant; you know those really sophisticated words that make the book more interesting.

One thing I didn't like was how the conversations were made bold.

Grammar/Spelling Rating: 6/10

My Opinion:

This was a nice book; I feel it would be an amazing book if it is made into a full length novel.

Kindly consider making it into a full length novel.

I had a good time reading it as it was an easy read, it also had a bit of diversity in it. If you're looking for something nice and sweet, this is the book for you.

My Rating: 23/30

Overall Book Rating: 7.4/10

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