Out Of The Dark by LonerHoper

Title: Out Of The Dark

Author: LonerHoper

Genre: Teen Fiction

Sub-Genres: Humor, Romance and Chick Lit

Primary Intended Readers: 13 -25

Mature Themes: No

LGBTQ+: No

Status: Ongoing (10 Chapters)

Description:
"Just go away!"

"That sounds more like your thing" He retorts in a voice that screams pain

"You have no clue what you're talking about. You don't even know why!".

"Then tell me. Just let me in, Dan!"

Dan! He has finally called me by the nickname he gave me.

Not Danielle, but Dan.

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Join Danielle with her family friends and relatives on a road trip.

This trip includes funny cousins, cool mothers, protective brothers, sarcasm at its best, living with a past and a lot of confrontations.

And the best thing of all?

What would you do if your childhood love is included on this road trip?

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Review

Summary/Blurb:

The blurb portrays the story as simple and easygoing but the blurb isn't captivating, it didn't make me want to read the book.

It felt bland like it lacked emotion

Summary Rating: 5/10

First paragraph of the first chapter:

Interesting, it's been long since the first chapter of a book was this interesting and funny. I laughed a lot after finding out about his...., I'm not going to say what it is.

Not giving out spoilers

First paragraph of the first chapter Rating: 8/10

Plot Development/Character Development:

The author showed who Danielle was, her relationship with her family. The main plot has a lot to do with family and she portrayed their relationship properly.

Plot Development/Character Development Rating: 8/10

Originality:

The road trip plot used to be a big cliché back in the day but isn't so common recently, apart from this, the story has a lot of originality to it.

Originality Rating: 7/10

Cover Relevance/Design:

Your cover is absolutely beautiful and perfect for a Chick Lit story but a good part of the story deals with romance. Please put that into consideration

Cover Relevance/Design Rating: 7/10

Dialogue/Description:

It had a smooth flow to it, felt like I was present at the scenes. But some parts were a bit bland.

Dialogue/Description Rating: 7/10

Interaction with Readers:

I always talk about how essential it is to reply your readers, I was impressed by this authors' good conversations with her readers. She even made her authors note interesting.

Interaction with Readers Rating: 10/10

Grammar/Spelling:

Not too smooth, the spelling was very good but the grammar wasn't so nice.

Grammar/Spelling Rating: 6/10

My Opinion:

If you're a teen fiction lover, who also loves romance and humor, this is the book for you.

I enjoyed reading it although there are some things I didn't like.

You have a good plot on your hands, take control of it and just write freely.

I recommend this book to everyone, it is a good read.

My Rating: 12/20

Overall Book Rating: 7.0/10

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