Cinder logged on and sighed softly with  smile, "heh even though there old. lets go see how people feel about my silly stories" She opened some of her old books and read through them and slowly she got near the end and clicked on the comment section. 
________ "best ending SAID NO ONE EVER" 
______ cute
_______ THAT WS AWHFUL
_______ "this was horribly done" 
___________ Why not continue?

Sans walked in and Cinder closed the tab, "hey, Whatcha doing?" Sans asked. "n-nothing" Cinder smiled softly giving off a slightly wavering vibe. "Your face is turning pink. are you ok?" Sans asked. 

"yeah! im great just comments are so sweet im all blushy" Cinder lightly laughs, Sans didnt fully believe it but smiled "thats great, Me and G are going shopping want anything?" He asked. "no im fine thanks" Cinder turns back around and sat infront of the computer. 

"You think hate comments are beyond you, that your fan fiction is beyond critizism. Its only when you receieve your first hate comment do you truly know how much that shiz hurts" This is one of the truest things iv ever thought of. 

Cinder attempted to start writing but the words werent flowing at all,
"are you ok?" 
"hey you seem a bit off are you ok?" 
"you ok?" 
"THIS WAS WRITTEN HORRIBLY" 

"im fine, r-really" Cinder closes wattpad and she goes into her room and sits down "im fine..." She repeats feeling tears threatening to fall. "IM FINE AND I MEAN IT" She burst into tears and sat in her room gripping her pillow. Sans peered in "Your not alright are you?" Sans spoke up. Cinder jumped brushing her tears away "im fine" She pouts. 

Sans sits down with her as the other 2 pop in even with blueberry who we where babysitting for a bit came over and sat. They all crowded around her until she finally opened up and held onto Sans sobbing as they all gave her a hug. "It hurts, I thought i was strong enough" She confessed. G sans smiled "I know it hurts.... but dont you see all the amazing comments you get?" G comforted. 

"it just feels like the hate sticks out  above everything" She whimpered, "I know its hard but try to see all the positivity you see" 

that was awesome
i neeeeeed more
OMG YOUR SO GOOD
Author-Chaaaaaaaan WRITE MOOOREEEE WE LOVE IT
I hate this
WE WANNTTT MOOOREEEEE
WE LOVE YOU BUTTERFLYSENPAI!!
WE GOT YA BACK
OMG SO YOU PRECIOUS
WHATTTT ITS OVER, I LOVE THIS TOO MUCH DUN MAKE IT EENNNDDD
YOUR AMAZING
WE LOVE YOU BUTTERFLY 

She smiled a litttle "in every patch there is always gonna be a chara" Blueberry commented giving her a big hug, "but remember that you are loved! and you stories are great!" He smiled. 
"exactly, and if they dont stop being mean i will personally kick there butts" Underfell snarled cracking his knuckled. "thank you" she smiled. 

thank you for all the positivity on my stories, some time hate can control how I feel but honestly you guys make me so happy