・❥・┆𝐛𝐞𝐬𝐭 𝐩𝐫𝐨𝐥𝐨𝐠𝐮𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐮𝐥𝐭𝐬

Hello.

Before you see the results, I'd like to say a few words. I enjoyed reading all the prologues, but as per rules, I had to choose one as the winner. Those who could not win, I hope you won't get offended by the results and will consider this as an opportunity to improve.

I couldn't point out every mistake in the reviews, but I did my best to share my opinions and help you improve.

GayuniSH happysnowfeet and yaris052018 did not follow me, thus, according to the rules, there will be a five marks deduction.

Take care and stay happy!

Sending Love,
Zara [Zen_Zara]

Special Category: Best Prologue - ( /10)

The moon's wish by _summering_: 9.3/10

I loved the way you expressed everything. I could imagine every scene in my mind without getting confused. You did excellent work. Keep it up!

Throne of the Dragonix by Baqns: 8.4/10

I liked the way you explained every part and scene. Your way of writing caught my interest. Amazing work.

Prisoner of Wonderland by earlfangs: 7/10

I adored the way you used the power of words and created something magical. Although, at some points, I felt confused. As it is a prologue, in my opinion, it should have been slightly longer so that your readers can get time to understand the plot. Yet, I will say you have a great scope and you did a great job. Keep it up!

King Aden by RowanCarwer: -/10

I am sorry but I didn't find the prologue in your book.

They died young by GayuniSH: Marks before deduction- 7.5/10 & Marks after deduction- 5.5/10

I found it really small yet very interesting. You did an amazing job at verbalising your thoughts. Great work. Keep it up!

Always by Nimbus_firebolt: 8/10

I liked the way you phrased your sentences and presented every character. There was no sign of confusion between me and the characters. Great work.

The law of beasts (Book-1) by JabreeWilson: 7.5/10

I had a connection with the characters' feelings. Just a suggestion- try to shorten the prologue as it felt more like a chapter than a prologue. Great work.

The Playmaker by Ebewriter: 8/10

I loved the way you portrayed your main protagonist. Also, the way you showed the relation and bond between the two characters. It was perfect. Great work. Keep it up!

Until then, Japan by happysnowfeet: Marks before deduction- 8.3/10 & Marks after deduction- 5.3/10

I loved the way you kept it simple and sweet. Also, the way you presented and then ended the prologue was so good. Great work. Keep it up!

#Exposed by Expressmagic101: 8.4/10

Well, to be honest this was the longest prologue I have ever read. At the start I was kind of bored, but at the end I was very excited about this story. Great work. Keep it up!

The inherited custody by amaranthinepoetry: 9.8/10

It would be an underestimation if I said I was stunned when I read your prologue. It was so emotional yet so beautiful. I loved the way you wrote every sentence, emotion, and scene in detail. I can proudly say that this was the best I have read and also my inspiration to write any prologue or a book. Excellent work. Keep it up!

RAYEL by JosefinaFAAD: 8/10

It was so damn good. You did an amazing job. Great work.

That Illusion by yarid052018: Marks before deduction- 8/10 & Marks after deduction- 5/10

You have done an amazing job in the grammar and writing part. The way you described every scene grabbed my attention. Great work. Keep it up!

Princess Undercover by DogLovingfeminist: 8.5/10

Wonderful is all I can manage to say. It felt so peaceful. It wasn't as complicated as some books of this genre feel to me. I am not a fan of royal-type books, but today you made me one. Great work. Keep it up!

A Second Try by Anusara12: 8.9/10

I admired the way you expressed everything. You kept the prologue neither too long nor short. It was so perfect. You could still improve it through vocabulary and edit a few scenes, but yet I still feel it's perfect. Excellent work. Keep it up!

Conclusion:-

1st place: amaranthinepoetry

2nd place: _summering_

3rd place: Anusara12

Congratulations winners, Your prizes will be sent by tomorrow through the community account! <3
Good luck, Take care!

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