Hello. Today we're back with more results. 

The IMPERFECTS by MrParadox2020 5/10

There were some punctuation errors, the grammar was okay. The father in the beginning acted more like a child/teenager than an old man. I liked the worldbuilding but it's best to slowly show how the world works and not info-dump. For example, there shouldn't be that long text about 3-gt in the first chapter. 

Aragons by earlfangs 10/10

I love this chapter. It's well-written, it has action and mystery and the protagonist is a bad-ass. Nice job!

Murder Recipes by Asna_Your_Friend 7,5/10

The chapter has a nice flow and a good balance between show and tell but there could be more descriptions. You could show their feelings better. The end is abrupt and there could be a better cliffhanger. Some people tend to read the first chapter to decide whether they'll read the book or not. So it's important to have a great ending in the first chapter. 

Margo Fawn and the Contagious Missing Delirium 1 by Sasha_Samuel 8,5/10

The plot is interesting and I liked the ending. 

And the winners are:

1st place: earlfangs

2nd place: Sasha_Samuel

3rd place: Asna_Your_Friend

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