BOOK : The butterfly effects

Author- AdriannaRaines3172

REVIEWER :  Shivika1999

TITLE (Titre)

The title is perfect for the story plot because the butterfly flies everywhere and  in the same way the storyline also travel from place to place which interacts with imagination and paves the way for setting the story line.

COVER (Couventure)

Muscles is important of the human body  like cover for the book. My point of view is that the cover is little dull to catch the audience so make a bright cover to grab the attention of the people. Being a thriller book cover is important, so change the cover with the help of graphic designers.

BLURB ( la description)

It is the important for the story to have a short promotional piece accompanying a piece of creative work. It may be written by the author or publisher or quote praise from others. The story is literally an awesome mystery thriller.

STORY LINE (scènario)

The story carries a wonderful journey of the protagonists. With the full of love, family, romance, mystery, thriller. It's absolutely a combo which contain every thing . This story line is different from others. The way of presenting is also extraordinary.

CHARACTER (Personnages)

Every character in this story is explained in detail by the author to avoid confusion. The way  author potrayed their picture makes us imagine ourselves to be there with the flow of the story.

GRAMMAR ( grammaire )

The grammar is awesome. It's  well written till now. The exact stoping point, continuous, other means of tenses.
"Just remember one point the way of carrying the dialogue sometime  make some dialogues plain.

Consistency is key. Grammar rules don’t cover everything. As a writer, you will constantly be challenged to make judicious decisions about how to construct your sentences and paragraphs. Always be consistent. Keeping a style guide handy will be a tremendous help.

FLOW ( couler)

The flow of your story is literally awesome. It's going well till now
have you ever:
Found yourself turning page after page, unable to put a book down?
Been so engrossed you haven’t noticed someone talking to you?
Completely forgotten you’ve been reading at all?
This all the points make a one perfect book. I think you have done well.

REVIEWER'S OPINION  ( critique)

This book is so amazing and thrilling and more suspenseful . I read lots of high school story but it's completely different from other people. I'm much waiting for your upcoming plots of what is it going to be. Superb book I loved it.

............................Best of luck dear..............................

Book ⭐star⭐ : 9.4/10

We hope our review will keep you and reach high once again all the best of your future dear

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