Striker Smally (Shreya)

Book-Striker Smally by SAANVI005

Reviewed by Daisy_srt

Title (Titre)

The title is interesting.It is very unique.You have the reader's attention. You have done a good job.

Cover (couverture)

The cover is very nice. It has Manik,Nandini and all the little elements like football ,coffee cup,etc.. It works cause everything is relatable to the story. The name of the book is clearly visible as well.

Blurb (la description)

The description was okay but the names of the football team were very unique and it did the job for me.It made me curious,it made me want to read the book.

Storyline (scènario)

A teenage OS.The plot isn't very different but you presented it very nicely and also it was very relatable.

Grammar (grammaire)

The grammar is good.You have a good command over your language, so no complains there as well.

Characters (personnages)

The characters aren't very unique.They are common but you have explained their feelings well.You have both their point of views and you expressed their state of mind so readers can connect very easily with the characters.

Flow ( Couler)

The flow is perfect.It is a one shot so according to that you have let the story flow.

Reviewer opinion ( critique)

I loved your OS.The football match was explained very nicely. The use of language was on point. The flow of the story is good. Overall you have done a great job. Keep up the good work. I would like to read more of your works.

I would give your book 4 stars.

Hope this helped you a little bit.

Book stars: 4/5

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