Author: jasmine_r22
Reviewer: Pournu

Title/Titre :(9/10)
Just a word precise. It,s precise and a prompt for us to take a peek into your book. You did a good job by choosing something common yet intriguing for title. So it's a 9/10 for title

Cover/Couverture :(9.5/10)
It's beautiful. WonderHuful play of colours. The font style and colours makes sense. As a cover it depicts his anger and her tears giving an insight into what the journey is gonna be. Again a job done right. I give you a 9.5/10 for the cover and a special mention for the choice of colours. It looks pleasing to eyes.

Blurb/La Description :(7.5/10)
Blurb has to be short yet tempting. I found your blurb a bit lengthy. Accurate description of characters.My suggestion is keep it precise and if possible tempt us a bit more to take a look at the book immediately. The blurb needs a bit more work. so a 7.5/10 for the blurb.

Plot and Flow/Couler :(19/20)
Three people one word love. It's a mixed bag of emotions. Love,anger ,vengeance and what not. A nail biting story and it's sure to make you emotional. Flow is phenomenal. Effortlessly effective. Good one and an emotional roller coaster for sure. Keep it up and keep writing more and more.

Dialogue/Expression (9.5/10)
As always your stories have a way of expressing themselves and dialogues play a major role in that. They were successful in creating a havoc in our heart. And expressions were on point. I could feel the emotions that your characters felt. That is a very hard thing to do . Kudos to you.

Grammar//Grammaire :(9/10)
This was a smooth read with no typos and spelling errors.The sentence formation was good and there is nothing much to point out as grammatical errors. But I believe there is always room for improvement when it comes to grammar. Keep up the good work.

Creativity(La créativité/Originalité) : (8/10):
Though the characters are the same, the way they were portrayed displayed your creativity. The breakthrough from the stereotype was refreshing.

Reviewer's opinion :(18.5/20)
A tale of love that begins with an act of betrayal. The anguish and the internal battle was well portrayed. It captivates you to an extent that the characters are etched into your memory forever and you just enter a different zone. Kudos for taking us to another world yet there is a touch of reality. Good job on the story.It is a great addition to my library. Looking forward for many such stories from you keep up the good work.

Total (90/100)
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