Book- My Heart Chose You by GirlWithSparkleEye

Reviewed by Daisy_srt

Title (Titre)

According to me, the title is appropriate for the story. It isn’t catchy but it works with the story of your book.

Cover (Couverture)-

The cover is nice. The background is very vibrant which attracts the eyeballs of the readers which is exactly what we want. Good Job.

Blurb (La Description)-

You have done a great job with the blurb. There is a scene maybe from the further chapters which is intriguing, you have explained the characters a bit. That is everything you need in the blurb. Amazing job!

Storyline(Scenario)-

The storyline is good. It is interesting. It keeps the readers hooked. There is a lot of past which is involved and that keeps us on the edge. So great work.

Grammar(Grammaire)-

For me, the language and the way the book is written is very important as well. I like when the book is written in simple language but with less grammatical errors. You have a good command over your language. Your grammar was on point, a little mistakes here and there but editing can take care of that. Also, the dialogues are mostly in English but wherever there are hindi words used you have explained that as well.  So, no complaints there as well.

Characters(Personnages)-

First of all, for the initial chapters I had to go back and forth cause it was difficult to remember soo many characters.I like how the girls are independent and strong willed. A little bit broken but still they know how to make the most of life. The boys on the other hand are rich and well some of them are a little snobby. You have explained the characters really well. They are similar but they still have something unique about themselves.

Flow(Couler)-

The flow of the story is perfect. It was going in a correct pace. The pace is maintained very well and I hope you maintain it till the book ends.

Reviewer Opinion(Critique)-

I think you have done an amazing job. Everything works for me. In each chapter there is something new happening. I am really excited to read the further chapters. You’re doing really great. All the best. I hope I helped you in some way.

Thankyou

Shreya

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