Book :Monster and his wild cat by Parthian_Mahi

Reviewer - Nandi1103

Title (Titre)

The title is good. It somewhat matched the story but as the plot progresses, I think there might be a less resemblance with the title and it could be more unique and different.

Cover (couverture)

Cover has the leads of the story but it doesn't have the charm it should have. Something is missing in it. You could have added some different and unique pictures of them and some different and good background and yes if possible change the font as the title is not clearly visible.

Blurb (la description)

Blurb was a bit simple and it doesn't match the intensity of your plot. I really like the story but not the blurb.Blurb is the second impression after the title of your story.You could add some more suspense or some different quotes that decipher the emotions of the story.It would help you to get more readers.

Storyline (scènario)

The plot is unique and different in a good way.I really liked the storyline. It's not the same story of MaNan that shows how they firstly love each other and then slowly slowly take their relationship to take next level.It's not the same boring plot.It's unique and good in it's own away. It actually depicts the reality that it's first attraction and then sometimes it changes into love.I really appreciate you for writing such a good and different concept.Well done!!

Grammar (grammaire)

Grammar was good but still not upto the mark as there were some grammatical errors and some spelling mistakes too and some dialogues in Hindi did not have English subtitles. So I suggest that you add the English subtitles, re-read and correct the grammatical and spelling errors.

Characters (personnages)

Character sketch was good.The way you portrayed the characters was just fab.While reading the story, I could directly connect to the character's emotions and the situation going-on.There was no loop-hole in expressing the characters.

Flow ( Couler)

The flow of story is simply stunning. I didn't even got bored for once while reading it.It has suspense about how will their relationship go further.It has everything fun, romance, suspense, friendship and family relations.I personally liked the story a lot.

Reviewer opinion ( critique)

The storyline is awesome but I think you should change the blurb as it's a bit common and doesn't have the same intensity as that of story. Just try to think something more creative for blurb and if possible change the cover of the story.Overall the story is fabulous.

Stars:- 4/5

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