Author : botronny
Reviewer : maha_manan1108

Title: (8/10)
The word,'Melody', is unique and nice. Though the beginning was confusing but after checking the cover I actually got to know what the title is about. Title is the factor that catches readers' attention, so give importance to it. It will be helpful.

Cover: (9/10)
Cover is another factor which attracts readers. Your cover is nice. It shows the concept of the story. But the title font could have been better. I suggest you a change in the title font.

Blurb: (7/10)
Blurb is where you add a small/short description of your story that makes readers curious to read. Your Blurb is a single line, which gives us an idea of what is going to happen in the story. But I think you could have added some spice to it.

Plot & Flow: (19/20)
Plot is simple, nice and unique. You potrayed nicely the life of Melody. How much she faces in life!The twists and turns, her relationship with her family, friends, it's wonderful. Suspenses are well described but I felt the story goes so slow and simple. I personally feel you could use a little bit more suspense and exciting things.The flow was good throughout the story, keep it up.

Dialogue & Expression: (6/10)
Here, Dialogues are good and expressive but I suggest you differentiate the narration and dialogue by font (eg : like bold or italic for dialogues and simple font for narrations, etc). Which will help readers to read it clearly, and differentiate what is what. Over all the words, expressions are very good. Even the narration part was written well. We could feel the emotions if the characters through the lines.

Grammar, spelling & typos : (9/10) :
I personally don't mind about grammatical mistakes because I believe a person learns while writing more and more. Not much spelling or typos are there as far as I read, but for more accuracy, do check it once later.

Creativity & originality: (10/10)
Your creativity is nice. Not many authors can write a girl's life so beautifully. It's unique and appreciatable. You brought many twists and turns, those were full of suspense but I thought it could
be more spicy and exciting that could have increased the readers' curiosity.

Overall engagement: (18.5/20)
A story of a girl that is beautifully written with twists and turns. The emotions are beautifully described. I really loved the relationship she has with everyone, mainly with her mother, which is precious. I just felt that the story went slow and simple. There could have been more suspense and twists to make it more intriguing. Other than that, it was written beautifully throughout the plot. Just take care of the points those need to be taken care of. I think it would be helpful. Otherwise it was a beautiful and a smooth story that is felt real.

Total:- 86.5/100

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