Author: NabiBlack
Reviewer: simrangharge

Title/Titre: (8/10)

Cover/Couverture: (8/10)

Blurb/La Description: (8/10)
Good description, gives the idea of the plot.

Plot/Couler: (15/20)
I found the chapters bit confusing. It's understandable although, as the book isn't complete yet, so I am looking forward to read it further and get a clarity of their breakup or separation. Hopefully this will be cleared in the further chapters.

Dialogue/Expression: (7/10)
Dialogue delivery is decent.

Grammar/Grammaire: (7/10)
They are some errors here and there that can be corrected with little editing.

Creativity/originality(La créativité/Originalité): (7/10)
I like the plot. Looking forward to read the main concept of the story, the marriage and all.

Overall engagement/Engagement global: (16/20)
Looks good. Just a suggestion that try to separate the past and present more clearly. It's getting confusing at times to differentiate between time line. Also get to main concept of marriage and separation soon.

Total - (76/100)

Thank you! Hope, it helped you.

Please complete the reviewer's payment if it is not done yet. Ignore the request if it is already done.

Thank you!
TheBooktrovert