Made for two (Cathy)

Reviewer: CathrineRajkumar

Author: xx_moony_xx

Book name: Made for two

Title: 8/10

Your title is good but I don't get why there is a question mark at the end of the title.

Cover: 8/10

Your cover is good.

Blurb: 9/10

The description is good and it gives me the curiosity to know what happened between Ria and Rahul

Plot and flow: 17/20

Your plot is good and the flow is also good.

Dialogue & expression: 8/10

Your dialogue is good but you have used lots of dots. It's not necessary. Try to edit them.

Grammar, spelling & typo: 8/10

There are some spelling and typo mistakes. So, I suggest you proofread them.

Creativity and originality: 9/10

Overall appeal: 17/20

The story is good but if you have given an English translation to the Hindi words it would be great because non-Hindi knowers can read it too. And I suggest proofreading and editing your story.

Overall score: 84/100

All the best for your future.

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