Book name- Love and hate

Author- PareshayUfq

Reviewer- Curious_writer7

Tittle(Titre)

The Title  used by you is very common on Wattpad , you could have made it more different and eye-catchy.

Cover (coverture)

There was no cover it was just a plain picture of an actress which lost my interest in reading the story, I suggest you make a cover or if you don't know how to make one , you can connect with any professional graphic designer and that will help you to attract the readers by making a beautiful cover .

Blurb(la description)

There was no Blurb provided for readers , a blurb is a very important part for a reader to choose the story and I would suggest you to write it.

Story plot(scenerio)

The plot was the same plot as the show which seems boring to the readers , and I suggest you change your story plot or make it interesting by adding your creativity in it .

Grammar(grammerie)

The first two initial chapters , you used the English language and then rest of them were in Hindi. So that's why I didn't find any grammar mistakes.

Characters ( Personnages)

The characters were quite the same as in the show which again seems boring to the readers so try and make it a little bit different . Also, explain them specifically as a reader I didn't find myself connecting to the characters.

Flow(couler)

The flow of the story was slow which makes the reader lose their interest in the story . I'll suggest you  focus on main characters more.

Reviewer opinion (critique)

You have to focus more on the creative side of the story like the cover, blurb and title stuff. I would suggest you to write your book in English but not roman-Hindi, it was just my personal opinion about the language thing don't mind. I hope my review helps you to be a good writer and have more views . Also, Don't take anything negative please it just about experience. 

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