Book name : Letting you GO

Author: 4hanna

Reviewer:.girly_blush

Title(Titre)

For a writer, picking an apt title is one of the most difficult tasks. But here, even when there were many stories with the same title, you managed to win my heart. It suited the story so perfectly. It was simple and sweet. I could say it was catchy enough. Title held a hidden loneliness and trauma. Good job.

Cover(Coverture)

The cover is the first thing that attracts a reader to open the book. It should be attractive. Here, the cover was just okayish. The background image used was nice, but not the fonts. You could have made it more innovative. There are many graphics designers in Wattpad. You can get as many covers you want.

Blurb(la description)

Blurb was nice. It gave an idea of the plot. But, you had punctuation and grammatical errors. If you have edited the blurb, it would have been good. I am not telling you to add any scenes or like that, you just have the edit it with a good grammar. That would do.

Storyline ( scenerio)

The storyline wasn't uncommon. The storyline wasn't unique. But you managed to make it unique by penning it down beautifully. Keep it up.

Characters(personages)

You have introduced the female character well. You have portrayed her every emotion without any pause. I felt so tragic about her. The only mistake she committed was, she fell in love with her best friend. Even you gave a glimpse about her best friend (male lead) too.

Grammar (grammerie)

There are some grammatical errors. Kindly have a look at it. You can do simple editing and it will be perfect.

Flow(couler)

Oh my! I was at the verge of crying, reading your story. It was so emotional. It was a realistic plot. Even though, you had some grammatical errors, that hadn't affected the flow of the story. I was enjoying reading it. You are a good writer.

Reviewer opinion (critique)

Just rewrite the blurb and edit your grammatical errors in the story. That's the only two things, you can improve. Others were all good. The story was just wow! You had written it in a very simple language. The story really have touched my heart. Keep going, dear.

Book Star: 4/5

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