Extortioner (Titisha)

Book Name : Extortioner
Author : heavena7
Reviewer : SidneetILoveYou

Title (Titre): 10/10
The title perfectly suits the story! Most of the readers judge a story by its title and cover. Thus, they have to be perfect and attractive, and your title is undoubtedly really attractive.

Cover (Couverture): 5/10
As I mentioned before, the cover of a book plays an important role in making the book interesting and attractive. Your cover is decent but it can be improved. Since the story contains supernatural stuff, the colour scheme, the mood of the face claims, fonts etc. should be according to the genre.

Blurb (La description): 10/10
The blurb is almost perfect. It discloses necessary points and makes the plot more mysterious and interesting at the same time. Good job!

Storyline (Scénario): 10/10
The storyline indeed is amazing! Especially for the people who are genuine readers of the genre of paranormal stuff. It is not cliche as well.

Dialogue/Expression (Dialogue/Expression): 9/10
The dialogues of each character gives a perfect view of the characteristics they possess. The formation of the dialogues is also fine.

Creativity/Originality (La créativité/ Originalité): 10/10
No doubt the plot is original, and it is creative as well. It is unlike anything I have read so far. I appreciate your creativity!

Overall engagement (Engagement global): 9/10
Overall the story has a good engaging power. There are many points which make the book eye-catching and interesting.

Grammar (Grammaire): 10/10
You really have a good sense of grammar and vocabulary. There were no misspellings at all, the punctuation marks were also in the correct places.

Characters (Personnages): 10/10
The character sketch of the protagonists were unlike something I have read before. I love the characters of Selene and Kane very much!

Flow (Couler): 7/10
This is a point where you should improve a bit. You may give a little more description for each situation. Some writers may not like the story being covered up in a short time. But yeah, it's all up to you how you wanna go about it.

Reviewer's opinion :
You can change your cover to something interesting and related to the genre of the book. Otherwise this book is really worth reading~ Well Done!

Total: 90/100

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