Author: authorzysha
Reviewer: simrangharge

Title/Titre : (8/10)

Cover/Couverture : (8/10)

Blurb/La Description : (8/10)
Good description, gives the idea of the plot.

Flow/Couler : (17/20)
I liked the plot and flow is good too. Simple plot with no extra drama and exaggeration.

Dialogue/Expression : (8/10)
Dialogue delivery is good.

Grammar/Grammaire : (8/10)
There are few errors here and there but they are not much noticeable.

Creativity/originality(La créativité/Originalité) : (8/10)
Good plot. Not the typical arranged marriage type. There are few interesting subplots. Strong leads.

Overall engagement/Engagement global : (16/20)
Overall, everything about the story is decent. Few chapters feel rushed but that's acceptable seeing the number of chapters are less and it's a short story.

Total - (81/100)

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